Vignettes -12. From ... , with love

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Thanks for the 'Early Edition' . It feels great, specially on the weekend. And with such a cliffhanger in the previous episode, this early edition was even more appreciated.

It was everything I had hoped for and more. Of course, the concern over Khushi and the nok-jhok and everything was superb, but the whole Arnav fainting part was so unexpected and such a great way to bring the brothers together. Makes it even better that it happened spontaneously and wasn't a manipulated situation.

I really loved how all they needed was a heartfelt, heart wrenching hug. No OTT dialogue, which would have been so unlike them.

I loved how Dhruv fell in love with Khushi in such a short time. That really was the essense of Khushi in the show. Nani and Anjali were in love with her after her first visit with the sarees. NK was in love with her the first time he saw her. Even the oiffice people were calling her Khushi Bhabi and raving about her.

So once again, a big applause for a wonderful episode.👏 Hope this will go on for a few more episodes.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Wow..u r really too awesome...U visualize each scene sooo well...loved it..waiting for next part...

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

I liked it ...very much !

Finally a thaw in relations ...It can only get better now...

Need longer ones dear ...And sooner ...whichever comes easier ,or both ...am I being demanding here ..? 😆

Thnx for the pm.

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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

U r amazing

superb

fabulous.

Continue soon.
Can't wait.

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Awesome

loved it

Chotte and bade are now on talking terms

Each chapter brings a fresh look to your story

Hats off to you

Thx for the PM

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samba12

@samba12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Was looking forward to the encounter between Arnav and Dhruv.

You made it so natural - that was stellar.

Despite all the planning Khushi could only make them more vulnerable. The actual communication happened when just the two brothers were present. And the dearth of words made it so much more in keeping with their characters.

Oh they felt intensely - you brought that out - but neither could speak and that worked.The easing of tension rather than the uttering of words.

Thank you for handling it so delicately.