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namrata22796

@namrata22796

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

A mind blowing Arshifull update...loved all the Arshi parts..especially--"Hamesha"

👏👏👏

Edited by namrata22796 - 12 years ago

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

This is an amazing concept and get writing. Keep up the good work. I just love the way you portray Arnav and Kushi in this story.

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reflektions

@reflektions

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Jitni taareef karoon wo kam hoga shayad. To chalo, koshish karte hai, kuch baatein highlight karneki un hazaaron khoobsurat pal mein se that filled the entire update.

The way Arnav admits without hesitation to how he loves the filmy dialogues of his wife, makes one grow ever more certain that this indeed is a man who adores his wife. For someone like him to feel the kind of loving affection for little things about her which might have been completely wierd and unacceptably ridiculous to him earlier, is not possible unless the love was too strong for his reservations to withstand.

The way he swept aside from his mind whatever misgivings he had before he even said a word, was somehow more of a testament of his love than anythign else. He did not hesitate to let her do as she wished because he had already accepted that facing whatever he had to face due to letting his wife do what she wanted was worth it and much more.

And you sealed that sensation of utter love with the words that followed.
"..if I ever forget, remind me. But never walk away from me."

Those lines made him ever so much of a man than he already is. That kind of humbleness in the first sentence cannot be seen except in the strongest of men and the plea that followed, was that of a true companion and partner for life, the kind who hold your hand through thick and thin, for better and for worse.

How many times shall I say Brilliant! ? :)

You leave one open-mouthed (or more often, smiling almost foolishly) with your gift to capture and describe love the way it is meant to be in its most pure and beautiful form between husband and wife, brothers and sisters, parents and children, aunts and uncles and niecse and nephews, patriarch and matriarch and their descendants, and even one human and another.

Beautiful beautiful beautiful writing.

How you said DHruv's expressiveness was exactly like Mamiji's, was an endearing and meaningful reminder of their mother and son relationship.

I too love the one-shots, though I can't honestly say I miss getting new ones when this one is going the way it is, and the ones already there are stuff that one doesn't get tired of reading again and again. Love and humour are the best ingredients in your writing and used liberally, much to our delight. Bas, dil khush ho jata hai aapki one-shots padke.

A truly formidable wordsmith you are. :D

PS: I hope you are feeling much better than before health-wise, and otherwise. :)..

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

lovely!!!! So Mr Raizada is still as possessive... haha! Jealous of his bro!!! Wonder wat wil happen wen Khushi will get pregnant?

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

oh oh!!! didnt expect khushi to bring up the contract marriage...but what could the poor soul do???she had to stop him from that whimsical mind right!😳
and bechara Dhruv...he has a lot of mending the relationships to do...
sometimes seeing the bond that arhi share makes me just wish for a life-partner who would understand me soo much!
and kudos to u for making me feel like that...their bond is worth commemorating😳

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

The story is amazing, i love how you ended up concentrating on Arshi, what can i say the heart desires to write about them for you and read about them for me...

They truly are perfect for each other, i can feel is that something big is coming up!

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

Beautiful update! You write it with so many emotions, happiness, understanding and togetherness, loved reading it! I dont mind , if it gets stretched more because it is a well written roller coaster ride!

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luv_barun

@luv_barun

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Superb...i read 7 and 8 together..i really liked hoe she has made herself comfy wid dhruv as well...she has sum charm to herself...

And poor dhruv...dats exactly wot happens wen two ppl r alike...i hope khushi makes d amends soon...

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

If it became all about A and K , that's all to the good 'cause I too was missing them ...and revisiting their special bond and deep understanding through your writing is a special experience which I wouldn't want to miss ever ...lovely update !

And thnx for the pm dear...