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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi, u know, I have become a big fan of ur writing since I started reading ur 'Vignettes' serial and today after reading the latest part I wish u would have been part of the IPKKND CV team. You really did justice to every character in ur stories.

And I didn't read the latest part only once as this part is full of highlights, which I loved to read again and again like

- Arnav silent apology towards his and Khushi's mother for hurting Khushi
- Khushi seeing the pain in Arnav's eyes and running towards him to hug him (my top highlight)
- Mamiji's comment: Berld baar khatam aur saawan barasna shuroo hui gaya. Hilarious 😆 👏
- Arshi's convo in bedroom regarding Arnav's and Druv's past incident. Beautiful written the emotions and the dialogues

Now waiting eagerly for monday to come and to read Druv's reactions when he will get a taste of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.
Edited by A_R_S - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What can I say? My eyes are wet for Arnav. And Dhruv. Love lost because of what? What would they do and how would they live if this was the last day of their lives? I love the relationship you have portrayed of Arnav and Kushi. It is real, a heart felt relationship. The way two people in love and happily (?) married should have. I love that they are able to talk to and with each other. He has barred his soul to her. And she has risen to that occasion. I shudder to think how Dhruv will survive her! If the great and mighty ASR is putty in her hands...!
I can't wait until Monday! Thanks for the PM. 😃 Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plot thickening gradually ...100% sincere logon ke saath hamesha aise hi hothe hain...Nw Dhruv will hv 2 watch out Mrs. ASR's temper..
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Posted: 12 years ago
just love the understanding between arnav and Khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Aparna,

I am back...Was visiting Gods own country my native place. Marriage in the family hence could not read your updates for the last 1 week or so.

But i am thrilled today can't you just see the 😃 on my face as i got to read part 3-5 all in one go...In fact my husband is actually quite concerned as to why i have such a huge smile/ grin.

I am really not good with words but i can't stop myself from appreciating your writing so would be commenting on all the parts together.

Part 3 : Liked arnav and dhruvs flashback...i am in love with the way you potray arnav and khushi's relationship and how their relation has evolved. Also loved the way the entire family was busy teasing our great couple and liked the way the entire family leans on khushi to handle Arnav making me wish that we actually got to see this in the serial rather than the stupid sheetal/ Miss india crazy tracks that we had to endure.

Part 4: Loved the family interaction at the breakfast...awesome dhruv- khushi interaction and what can i say loved khushi's ringtone for her LG...The bhabhi - nanad interaction was amazing loved the lovely nuances you get into their interaction.

Part 5: Girl you have got some amazing writing skill the way this part was written i could actually visualize the entire part right in front of my eyes. A big round of applause for you 👏👏. Everybody's reaction were spot on including arnav's stuffing his hand into his pocket.

You know i love this dhruv character please keep him around in future vignettes.. Would love to see a NK/juniour ASR interaction.

I frankly don't know how many times i have used the word " Loved this/ loved that" while commenting on your update. I guess i need to come up with another word while commenting on your awesome updates.

Keep writing

regards

Liza
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Posted: 12 years ago
not good with words like you so I'll just say that I enjoyed reading this tremendously and when it finished I felt like I used to when Ipkknd episodes used to end- ie oh no now I have to wait for the next installment/episode all over again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know you prefer long comments..but all I have to say is just one word! PERFECT!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dhruv is trying to analyse his ' Badi Bhabhi' a lot! Well, young man, it's going to be a tough nut to crack..After all the great ASR himself took so much of time to understand her!


Dadi and Mami on terms and laughing together..a sight to behold.

"That blasted goat" LOL!! Somethings never change right?!


I wonder how can Khushi talk sooo much?? Non-stop she's on and on! Phew! Had I been in Dhruv's place even I would have been flabbergasted thinking how in the world did the ASR put up with so much talk?! Thankfully being on the other side I know that Arnav loves to hear his wife talk even if it's utter crap 😆


Hearing the one-sided conversation itself Dhruv's is so shocked! Had he heard the entire conversation, he would have just lost his mind 😆

"Lad Governor" Haaye !!

Arnav used to literally be his moral strength and support! No wonder they are so close and love each other so much!!










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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for commenting a little late!! but aweeesome update!!! loved the fight n the way arnav grew restless when she wasnt talking to him...n the makeup scene was perfect,..n the pubic display of affection n dhruv seeing it was kinda funny...n khush managed to make arnav talk..now i want to hear dhruv's side!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
How many times is there going to be an aarthi in the Raizada Mansion? Kabhi this pooja, kabhi that pooja! Seriously?


Mami is absolutely right!! The one who has handled the Lad Governor itself, yeh Dhruv kya cheez hai?

And Dhruv babuwa, try to find a stack of excuses and tareekas to get out of this family pooja!! LOL!

Khushi can always sense him! It kind of amazes me how they are always able to recognise each other.

And finally Arnav's control fuses out! Poor Khushi has to bear the brunt of it..but like they say..it's the closest ones whom we always take liberty upon!!

Khushi is no less! As stubborn as her husband, she knows how to handle him!

The best part is the guilt that Arnav has for unnecessarily taking out his anger and frustration on her and now he is angry at himself for hurting her..!

Poor HP is saved from the wrath of ASR!! His limbs must have been shaking and shivering when Khushi must have asked him to give the food tray to Arnav!! Mrs ASR way to go!!

It's not that he doesn't understand his family or that they dont understand him! It's just that they dont know how to pass the facade that surrounds him always! They know that Arnav in ASR but they dont how to bring that Arnav out! And that's the only reason why Khushi is the link that connects him to his own family as she is the only one who can cross all those barriers and wade through to reach Arnav!

Sometimes you come with such beautiful sentences brimming with emotions that it's hard to even describe how beautiful they are "As Anjali walked out, Arnav looked up again, his eyes locking instantly with those of his wife, the pain and regret in his brother's eyes making even Dhruv's breath hitch. He heard Khushi Bhabi's sharp intake of breath and in the next instant, she passed by him in a blur as she rushed to her husband.

Not taking his eyes off her, Arnav watched his wife come running to him, her hurt forgotten in the face of his pain. Oblivious to the fond looks they were getting from the family, Arnav gathered her up in his arms, holding her close. Finding as much relief in giving comfort to her husband as he was getting on receiving it, Khushi stood quiet, gently stroking his back, silently telling him that all was forgiven.

Not breaking the embrace, Arnav whispered, "Khushi, I'm sorry. I don't know why I always take it out on you. It's not fair, I know, but..."

Hugging him tighter to silence him, she said, "I know. I married you knowing it. Laad Governor and his anger, I accepted them both. " Khushi's melting anger, his guilt, her pain! They can never stand the other in pain! BEAUTIFUL!


Aman and hug? I wonder if it would be lucky or unlucky for him to get a hug*Khushi-wala hug* from ASR 😛


Mami and her Hinglish is awesome! It always has me grinning!


Yes, Dhruv Bhaiyaa, the Bhabhi's have brought a lot of change in the family, a lot!!!

" Good that Arnavji shouted at me today! Now whatever I ask of him, he won't deny me" - A typical wife to the T!

He loves reading books! And I love reading about him and ofcourse books too 😛

They know each other like the back of their palm! I've lost count of how many times I've said it but once again I'd say I love their love and I admire it! We hardly get to see such couples..who stand by each other in pain , in sorrow and in happiness!!

It hurts the other more when one of them is hurt! His pain is her pain! Her sorrow is his sorrow! I love them.

Dhruv rolled out accusations over accusations and that coming out from his own little brother must have shattered Arnav :'( and thus the intensity of hurt and his pain.

Dhruv was scared of disappointing his bhaiyya and hence his outburst of anger and accusations! When it's said Dhruv is close to his bhaiyya and is similar to him, it's absolutely true! Both are quiet, introvert types, they observe and analyse a lot, they also do possess a raging temper and are both quite stoic and remote! One thing Arnav has to understand his just like he has his outbursts on his Di and Khushi and lets his frustration, anger out on them,his own brother did the same just the difference it was on him! Both have no intentions to hurt their loved, close ones but unknowingly each and every single time they hurt these very own people! The real reason might be something else but they take it out in the form of anger and like they say their minds ceases to work when they lose their temper and only when it calms down they realise the depth of their hurtful words and then starts their guilt and anger on themselves for hurting their loved ones! Arnav just has to see this from Dhruv's POV but it's not that easy to forget the hurt, the pain and to think it from a different perspective. It would take a lot of time to do so but it would definitely heal the wound! Similarly Dhruv just has to understand Arnav was not angry at him for changing courses, but it was hurt from the fact that he hid it from his own brother!! I wouldn't call it ego in this case but it's definitely the rigidity and the fact that both of them shut themselves out without letting others to heal them is what that's brought so much of void in their relationship!!

And Arnav has finally taken the first step towards it with the help of Khushi! After ages he has let out his deepest sorrow and finds peace inhis wife's arms! Khushi is truly an angel in his life!

Mrs ASR is enraged by the fact that someone has hurt her husband so much!! It will be very interesting to see how she handles DSR now!!

Like I said before, for a character that was never even seen in the show, I feel like I've known Dhruv all along and is a very much part of Raizada family! And my lady the credit goes to you :)

The characters of Arnav and Dhruv have been etched in such a way that I don't know whom to support and pity for, who is at fault and who is right, who has suffered more! But the best part is their bonding! No matter what, in between the words, we can always feel that love they still have for each other!!


And only thing I can say now - You are the best Dee!


P.S My holidays are yet not over thankfully but the worst part of it was I lost the net connection for freaking eight days..eight whole days!!! It was like I was handicapped and my brother was gloating in the fact that 'I'm so net addicted and I cant live without it for a day' I hate him and I HATE BSNL officially now * in big black bold letters*
I'm not net-addicted but I'm an IF addict for sure..*sighs* I did read the fourth part but it was through cell phone and it was a pain in the neck reading it like that! The joy of reading itself was lost so I'd decided for my net to reappear and I'm back :))




















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