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Posted: 12 years ago
awww the situation was so bad for both!!

I get why Arnav got so angry and i understand Dhruv's reasons for not being a disappointment to his Bhaiyaah, You did justification to both!!!

Arshi are cute as ever, for Dhruv it was just shockin i guess 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yaar, loved the update. Superb :) lets see how khushi is gonna mend it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Stumped.
I started reading, going like a bike hurtling down a vertical cliff, so eager I was to know what exactly was it Dhruv said, and then all of a sudden I would be brought to an abrupt halt, grabbed right by the throat, by a love and pain of such strength that it is almost tangible. The point where Khushi, overwhelmed by her love and unable to bear the pain she could sense in Arnav, runs to him to be enveloped in his embrace, and how they both finding such peace in it left me practically with a pain in the whereabouts of the heart, so absolutely beautiful a moment it was, of the pure, selfless love binding them.
Your talent is awe-inspiring.
The depth of hurt Arnav felt and still feels at his brother's words, clearly stated just how strong a hold Dhruv had on his heart, for only someone who can reach that deep inside you can cause that depth of pain. If ones eyes well up at this point, it makes one want to weep at how acutely Khushi felt his pain echo inside her.
I hope you somehow redeem Dhruv, for it is clear he loves Arnav right back, and I feel that he has the same strength and goodness in his character that was instilled, whether known or unknown to both, by Arnav himself.
I could go on and on, but will stop here with a heartfelt thank-you, expressing hope to continue to read your ab-so-lutely exquisite masterpieces.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your whole series of OS's are absolutely mind blowing your writing evokes images of how the scenes would appear in the show as. The pooja for her parents, the fruit names and the telescope scene made me smile and cry...I love how you flawlessly bought in Dhruv and look forward to how Khushi will mend this rift.. Look forward to reading more of your literary skills..speechless at your execution of the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent update...wow...you sure are creative!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very well written story! A baby kid fully dependent on big brother, looks up him to be his ideal and then finds freedom, that changes his life! Loved your concept behind the tiff ! Arnav so much emotionally dependent on Khushi, his mom, his friend, his wife and above all his soulmate. Mamiji was best at her one liners. Waiting for KKGSR to deal the situation, I know she will never be harsh to the Jr. ASR. Waiting for Monday already!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update! You write so well. Can't wait for Monday!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another wonderful update..and YES u did full justice to Arnav & Dhruv's story :)
Cant wait to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar..
I feel like hitting dhruv with something but there must be something from his POV..
Ahh dhruv now to face his bhabhi's anger..
Very excited to read next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't wait to see the wrath of KKGSR!!! I am glad Atnav has her on his side!! No one knows his side of the story... Which doesn't help his case!!!

I am glad Dhruv got see the importance of khushi is Arnav's life and her place in the Raizada parivar!!

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