Pyar toh hona hi tha...Kriyansh & Swaron FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya Guyz'.

U know me na'

Chalo jo nhi jaante unhe apna Intro dedo'.

Hii'I'm Kriti

Naam toh suna hi hoga'.

I'm thinking to write a ff (a group ff) for time pass'.

Waise I have no TIME for time pass'

Date sheet aa gyi hai'1 march se mere boards strt hai'.aur main yahan naya ff start karne ki soch rhi hoon'.god'.lanat hai mujhpe'

Chalo kar hi deti hoon'.

Ok its will be a grp ff'.

Ab concept suno'.sabne kuch kuch hota hai toh deki hi hogi'.

Yup'it's a little bit same like kuch kuch hota hai'

But hum apni story waha se start karenge jahan se movie end hui thi'

BUT BUT BUT

ENDING (movie ki ending)same nhi hogi

Kuch samjh aaya nhi na'.

Toh chalo neeche CS pado'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

Character Sketch – Scroll down

Prologue – Scroll down

Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Character Sketch

Kria Singhania(anjali):age 24 wife of Reyansh Singhnia but in love with his best friend'who also loves him'but got married to Reyansh

Reyansh Singhania (aman):age 26 orphan'MD of Singhania Empire'madly in love with Kria'knows that she love her BFF

Swayam Shekhawat (rahul):age 26...best friend of kria...loved his late wife...but now in love with kria...M.D of Sneha industries

Vrushika Shekhawat(tina):late wife of swayam

Sneha (choti anjali):age 5

Sharon ki entry baad' main

Ab batao guys'kuch samjh aaya'..dimag ki bati jail ya nhi'.ok main bata hi deti hoon'

Like movie'.

Reyansh(aman) will not tell kria(anjali) to go with her true love'he reminds her promise that he made on his engagement day'

Kria :agar main tumse shaddi na karu toh

Rey:haath pakad k mandap tak le jaunga'

Acha ab chota sa prologue bhi de dti hoon

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Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Prologue

Kria(in bridal attire) with her friends and mother climbing down stairs but her eyes are only on swayam'and tears are continuously flowing down from her eyes'and swayam's condition is also no less'he's also crying'.and sneha also'who always saw a mother figure in kria'

Rey was so angry with this'and pandit is also saying''muharat ka waqt ho rha hai kanya ko bulaiye'

Rey got up from his seat'and g towards kria and hold her wrist'.

"kaha than a hath pakad kar mandap tak le jaunga"

Then he take her to mandap'..and no one tries to stop him'sneha step forward to stop him but swayam hold and said her no'

Rey make her sit in mandap'.and then pandit starts all the rituals and after some time'they take pheras'then rey fill her mang with vermillon'kria close her eyes'and tears were flowing from her eyes'then rey tied mangalsutra around her neck'and then pandit pronounce them husband and wife'

Swayam is totally heartbroken'

After seeing his love'got married to another man'sneha is also crying 'she lost her mother again'

No one is happy with this marriage not even rey

He wants her happiness

But only

With HIM

So now tell me guyz'who's is interested in writing this ff with me'coz akele toh main ye likhne nhi wali'and if no one is interested and still u want this ff'u have to wait for 2 month for its updates'

-love Kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi la
tu kitni filmy hey ha
har film ka ulta sequal bna deti hey
tusi great hoo
but tu movies or ff schod or study dstart kar
kamini terey exams to march mey hey or merey feb mey
tuj sey pehley exams merey start honey waley hey
mujey math ka kuj nahi ata pta kitni tension hey mujey
tujey koi tnsion nahi hey
hadh
i mean thora bohat to scoh
mera concept to reject kar diya
ha ab jha mat mension karna wo concept
yaar muj sey nahi hota long comment
merey work pey comment nahi karti or mujey bol rhi hey comment karney
main hamesha phas jati hoo
phir b comment kar rhi hoo
os likhna hey mujey
kal sey atka hey
upar sey cookie
wo merey saath likh rhi hey lekin pta nahi kha gayab ho gyi
sab k sab kamm choor hey
arey meri adtey mat sikho
main to hoo hi lazy
but tum log b main kya kroo
but acha likho tuney mast tha
kya baat kya baat kya baat (after long time ha )
u roke it like always
but i love it
but i hate u mera concept reject kar diya main khud likh loo gi
vesey i forgot ki
is FF ki second partner to main hi hoo
hello guys m the second one jo is k saath likhey gi 🤣


Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

hi la
tu kitni filmy hey ha
har film ka ulta sequal bna deti hey
tusi great hoo
but tu movies or ff schod or study dstart kar
kamini terey exams to march mey hey or merey feb mey
tuj sey pehley exams merey start honey waley hey
mujey math ka kuj nahi ata pta kitni tension hey mujey
tujey koi tnsion nahi hey
hadh
i mean thora bohat to scoh
mera concept to reject kar diya
ha ab jha mat mension karna wo concept
yaar muj sey nahi hota long comment
merey work pey comment nahi karti or mujey bol rhi hey comment karney
main hamesha phas jati hoo
phir b comment kar rhi hoo
os likhna hey mujey
kal sey atka hey
upar sey cookie
wo merey saath likh rhi hey lekin pta nahi kha gayab ho gyi
sab k sab kamm choor hey
arey meri adtey mat sikho
main to hoo hi lazy
but tum log b main kya kroo
but acha likho tuney mast tha
kya baat kya baat kya baat (after long time ha )
u roke it like always
but i love it
but i hate u mera concept reject kar diya main khud likh loo gi
vesey i forgot ki
is FF ki second partner to main hi hoo
hello guys m the second one jo is k saath likhey gi 🤣



kamini tu yahan comment karne aayi hai ya m,ujhe dantne...jab dekhoi dantna shura ho jaati hai...

ja main tujhse baat nhi karti...but only 5 sec
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chal 5 sec khtam thank god...main na kisi se baat kiye bina na reh hi nhi sakti...

haaye tera kya baat...bohot miss kiya maine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :D

Mujhe bi PM's chahiye ... But mahLyke button isn't wrking !!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting...pls continue and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept
loved it
but mujhe bhot confuse kardiya kuch smjh nhn aya
mujhe iska update abhi k abhi chahe itana wait nhn kar sakti
plz update soon
Edited by NishaP_Arsha - 12 years ago

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