I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
thank u dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Nice yaar. Mast hai story 😊 Ekdum "MONACO" types like all ur other s
Isse padhake mujhe Geet aurAditya ki yaad aa gayi :D]

Arrey apne JAB WE MET wale...

Jaise wo film rocking thi waise teri story bhi hogi..

By GO maja aagaya padhake ⭐️

thank u pari for ur comment
loved it😃
thank again
muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Congrats for new FF..Nice start...CS is nice...

It reminds me of jab we met...the train scene is nicely written.
Do cont soon.

thank u diii
im very glad to saw ur comment
will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice start do pm me and continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

she sat with each other on temple stairs n staring at the road leading to the beautiful town of mumbai...it was very rushy n crowded place ..everyone were busy with their daily works...men leaving for their offices...ladies busy on shops n stalls n children leaving for their schools but there were two peoples who had nothing to do just staring at them...

ryan looked at her-''so what u want''

pakhi-''nothing''

ryan frowned-''tumhe ghar nhi jaanaa''

pakhi nods negatively-''nhi''

ryan-''to kaha jaogi''

pakhi-''meri ek friend h yaha usi ke pass chali jayungi''he turned his gaze-''as u wish ''he stood up n moved towards the road when she called him-''where are going ''

ryan-''don't know...actually mera koi frnd nhi h yaha''

she too stood up n came in front of her-''meri friend rent par rehti hum usse help le sakte h ..shayad hume bhi rent par room mil jaye''

ryan-''mujhe nhi chahiye''

pakhi looked at him sternly-''lekin mujhe chahiye or mere pass paise nhi h''

he contracted his forehead ''so what??''mein kya karu''

pakhi-''to pay kon karega tum''

he frowned gain-''excuse me ...''

pakhi rolling-''yeah or waise bhi yaha se waha gumne mein tumhare paise hi waste honge isse accha ki hum 2 flats le lete h rent par chalo apna phone do jaldi''

ryan-''ajeeb ladki ho tum''

pakhi -''thank u ab jaldi karo ''

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shreya-''do flats or abhi...sorry but do nhi mil sakte but ek mil sakta h''

pakhi made her face n ryan growled at her...pakhi quicklu turned her gaze to shreya-''shreya pls help me na...hum logo ko bhot jarurat h''

shreya-''pakhi i understand but landlord 2 flat nhi de sakta ek kaam karo tum 2,3 din ek hi mein adjust karo mein kahi dusra dekhte hi tumhe inform karti hun ok''

pakhi smiled-''han han ok''

ryan snarled -''what ek hi mein kaise adjust karenge are u mad''

pakhi grabbed his shirt n drag him to the corner of room n whispered -''ladki hokaer mujhe koi problem nhi h to tumhe kyun itni problem ho rhi h''

he snapped-''shut up''

she curved her lips in anger-''2 din adjust nhi kar sakte tum she said na ki wo koi or flat dekhegi''

he looked at her annoyingly-''sirf do din''

she grinned-''han han baba..tum to aise react kar rhe ho jaiase i'll eat u raw huh!''she turned n nods to shreya..she too smiled contently

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landlord to shreya-''dekho flat sirf husband wife ko hi milega ..''shreya interrupted-'yeah they are newly married couple''

landlord came outside to the room n looked at dual standing in front of him...he sated at pakhi who wore short skirt with top n messy hairs at the same time...he whispered to shreya-'are u sure they are married..i mean lagta nhi h dekhkar''

shrey nodded quickly-''yes they are married kal hi to shaadi hui h inki''

landlord again stared at pakhi n ryaan-''ok fine but i want advance for two month...kya pata tumhara bhaag gye bina paise diye toh''

ryaan gritted his teeth-''bloody ass''

pakhi-''ok ok will give u ''

then they proceed towards the flat...he opened the lock n she smiled to saw a beautiful room in which a huge bed placed near the wardrobe ...n couch with table outside the room there was a small hall inserted with kitchen n a wonderful view outside the window..

she grinned-''its beautiful''

landlord opted his amount for flat ..pakhi to ryan-''apna wallet do ''

he gave it to her without wasting time n went towards window...she emptied his wallet n went towards him-''yeh to kam h''

ryan took out his credit card from the inner side zip of wallet-''isse credit card kehte h jaanti ho tum''she rolled her eyes n snatched it

pakhi-''credit card chalega''landlord said in husky voice-''nhi kal de dena mein kal aata hun ''

pakhi nods positively ok''

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''hush''she said with cup of tea in her hand n sitting on chair with shreya-''thank u shreya''

shreya took a sip of tea-''its ok pakhi but meine usse yeh kaha ki tum husband wife ho to thoda sambhal lena han''

she coughed suddenly n pat the cup on table-''kya''shreya put her hand on her shoulder-''pakhi yeh mumbai h or yaha koi kisi par vishwas nhi karta to flat to bhot dur ki baat h...or fir 2 din ki baat h mein kahi or try karti hun han''

pakhi looked at him nervously while he was growling at him-''or agar do din mein flat nhi mila toh''ryan said angrily...

shreya stood up n moved towards him-''ryan i'll try don't worry''n left them alone

pakhi -''agar flat nhi mila to mein chali jayungi tum yaha reh lena''she said with sad face ryan moved towards her-'puri drama queen ho tum...''n walked inside..she looked at him n grinned-''so to hun''

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at evening

he was reading a magazine lying between the old books n newspapers when she came towards him with dinner...he looked at plate n made weird expression-''what is this''

she put two chappatis n bowl of something like dal in front of him-'' i made this for u n me...zindagi mein pehli baar bnaya h to aisa hi banega na''

he tried to tore one bite of chappati but all his efforts gone into vain..she picked it n tore t quickly in many pieces -''chup chaap kha lo jaisa bhi bana h''

after finished his so called dinner he walked inside the room n surprised to saw her on bed..she smiled at him-''i'll sleep there''he frowned-''or mein kaha kitchen mein''she giggled -'idea accha h''he throw pillow on her face-''tum jao mein yaha soyunga''

he moved on another side of bed...she put pillows in between them-''is side mein or us side tum so sakte ho ''he turned to other side n covered himself with blanket

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next morning

he opened his eyes lazily n felt something on his neck...he opened his completely n surprised to saw her..her hand curled around his neck with one leg snaked around his leg...her warm breath caressed his skin of neck where she had rest her head...he looked at her n swept her hairs from her face...

he pat her shoulder slightly-''pakhi ''but instead she tightly clutched his neck n came more closer to him..her warm breath on his neck disturbed him ...he gently removed her hands from his neck n then silently got up from the bed...but before leaving he covered her with blanket...

after sometime

she came out n rubbed her eyes-''gdmg...uthaya kyun nhi tumne mujhe''

ryan pulled his face upward-''gdmg...''she sat nearer-''yeh newspaper kaha se aya''she said while looking newspaper in his hand

ryan-''abhi newspaper wala aya tha usi se liya...'n again continue his reading

she looked at him for a while-''ryan sorry meri wajah se tumhe bhi yaha rehna pad rha h...''

ryan looked at her again-''kahi to rukhna hi tha na to yahi sahi''n winked at her...she grinned n said again-''tum ghar chodkar kyun aye ho''

he closed the newspaper-''pakhi tumhe tea bnani aati h??''she nods-''nhi kal shreya ne bnayi thi but mein try karti hun''n walked in kitchen

he open the newspaper n smiled...

after sometime

he walked outside when she called him-''kaha ja rhe ho tum'

ryan turned-''i have a important work or landlord ko paise bhi dene h thodi der mein aata hun''

she stared at his face-''mujhe yaha chodkar bhag to nhi jaoge na''he chuckled-''meri aisi kismat kaha''

she too smiled-''tea kaise thi''...he rolled his eyes-''acchi thi tumhe pata h tea me sugar bhi dalte h log''she bite her tongue-''first time bnayi thi''

ryan-''aata hun abhi''while walking outside


Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice...

like their first day together...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wah ji wah ek or ff :)
luv u di

ye pakhi use gadhe k chakkar me kha se pd gai

gadha khi ka 😡

n ye ryan
aise kyu ghum rha h
awara pagal diwana

nhi nhi
diwana to abi bnega
pakhi ka 😳

pagal vo h nhi

ha to awara
sirf awara

ye lo ji pakhi to ho gai suru
jabar jasti se apne sath hi rakh liye 😆

are husband wife hi to h 😳

abi nhi to kuch din me bn jayenge 😉

pakhi n ryan
mahi n aarav ki yaad dilate h

thnku di for new ff
luv u 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow...I m luving this ff yaar..
kya mast ud he..
maza aa gya
So Pakhi & Ryan r living 2gethr...
Pakhi to adjst kr legi..
bt bechara Ryan wo to fas gya buri tarah...😆
Pakhi cooked food...😲
& what was the condition of chapati...😆
hahaha...OMG
thn she made tea also...& that too widout sugar...Perfect😉
A biiig clap 4 ryan...he showed so much daring that first he ate food & thn tea😉
luvd it..
waiting for nxt ud😊

Edited by swati_prithvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Thanks di. Kya update diya hi pad kar to maja a gya pakhi is so sweet and bubbly girl vo jis tarha ryan se har chiz karvati hai. Di kya dialogs hi i just luv it apne to is ff ko kitna sweet banaya i realy enjoy it. She is so innocent i luv her and our ryan character. Vo dono husband wife bane hi abhi itna maza a rha hi pta nhi 2 din or kya hoga i m realy excited di. Hay o dono sath me ek bed par pakhi so sweet how she is sleep kinda sona part tha she made dinner and order him chup chap kha lo and ryan excepted. Then she make tea without chini that was very funny seen. Di maza tab bhi aya when she force him for adjest in 1 room wha ka dialoge so enjoyble. Di ur ff very fantastik, enjoyble and very interesting jis tarha apne ise represent kiya hi that is call as "super se bahut uper". Pls upd soon di. LUV U LOT DI. Muhaa... 😊
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hufff...chalo a gaye...
part was nice...i mean bechara ryan kahan pakhi k saath phas gaya...
zabardasti uske gale pad gayi...n what's that husban-wife???????????,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kab se...😲
n at last...about tea...mujhe laga sugar k jagah salt dalegi but ye toh badi wali nikli...kuch bhi ni dala...
n pakhi ne khud chai ni pi thi kya...???????????...
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago

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