I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
wow!
another ff of rajat!😛
thanx..
well I really luvd it
d character sketch is superb
very specially d names...very different & perfect(Madhuri wala)😊
Jab we mer ki yaad aa gayi..
it's my favr8 movie..
so I m going to like this ff surely..
luvd d dialogs..
Pakhi is talking, talking & talking...
& ryaan is lyk...Oh god ye ladki kitna bolti he...pichhe hi pad gyi he...
& luv u for 1 thing...
wen Pakhi gav a nice kick b/w his legs😆😆
he deserves even more...
clap for Pakhi👏
waiting for the nxt ud...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
love the names of rtmc <3

Very Interesting start
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Di, I loved it…

Pehli baar muje kissi story k first episode mei hi itna nutrition mila h…total fultoo entertainment…

Javab nhi aapka di…ek dum balle shalle story h…

Sachh kahu tho dhwani daqsh ki first meeting ki yaad aa gyi,…(vo bhi railway station per hoi thin na?))

Pakhi is really bubbly…but ryann is more tham morose..bechara pore ud mei sirf 5-6 dialogues bola..n pahki tho shoro hoi tho ruki hi nhi…

Pehle thp ye ladki bhot bafkoof h..i believe..super bavkoof h, super duper bavkoof h….

But koi chinta nhi- hum pahki ko bear ker lenge…

Aap sab log bhi ker loge…

((aap sab di's muje bear ker lete ho tho pahki tho kuch bhi nhi :P ))

But matter ye karta h ki ryann kya choose karega- pahki ya suicide??

Kuch bhi choose kare- no difference…cause pahki bhi almost dangerous as suicide…

Sooper duper crazy ladki h by god..

Ab tho dhwani, ananya(jigar da tukda wali), samyukta(incredible ishq) n mahi k gang mei panchavi aa gyi- pahki.

Fantastic five- dhwani, mahi ,sany , ananya n pahki…inn pancho se jyada koi nhi bolta h…bet it?

ryaan ki inspiration dedas h ya devdas ki inspiration ryaan h…

he loves his family, but firr bhi idher udher ghum raha h-

ryaan n pahki k liye song—(btw, loved their names..)

musafir hu yaari, na ghar h na thikana…

humme bas chalet jana h..bas chalte jana..

when mahi came towards her-''when will get married baby''----apko mahi ki bhot yaad aa rhi h..i feel.

suddenly she stopped n walked towards him...she hit her foot between his legs-''bloody ba****d''n rush outside..he fell on floor with both hands on ---------loved dis scn badly,…do teen aur marvana tha vahi per- automatically castration ho jata…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice and interesting story
thanks for new rtmc ff 👏
i like ur story and charecter sketch
plz upd soon di
luv u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Nice yaar. Mast hai story 😊 Ekdum "MONACO" types like all ur other s
Isse padhake mujhe Geet aurAditya ki yaad aa gayi :D]

Arrey apne JAB WE MET wale...

Jaise wo film rocking thi waise teri story bhi hogi..

By GO maja aagaya padhake ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Congrats for new FF..Nice start...CS is nice...
It reminds me of jab we met...the train scene is nicely written.
Do cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Asyalover

res...awww it was so cute i like pakhi...and ryaan too <3

thank dear for ur comment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tyro

Congrats on the new FF...


nice start...

thanks dear😃for ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

So Now We Have 52 RTMC FF... Great, Aab tho RTMC ko Wapas ana hi Padega!

Ryan n Pakhi... Waao Nice Names, n The Title too ' I Am All Yours ' Sounds Romantic :-) well It has to be Romantic afterall RTMC FF ha,

Their 1st Encounter was just Owesome, n Differnt

Do Continue Soon,

n On a Serious Note : HumTum End karne ka kheyal bhi apne dimag mein mat lana, ishe ek Reader ki Request samjho ya ek Friend Order, but Plz HumTum end nehi karna, plz arpi mein toh darr hi gyi yar aise bacchi ko mat daraya karo😆

LOVE U

ha arpita rtmc ko apne pagal fans ke liye ana hi padega😆n a big thanks n a warm hug for ur lovely comment
will update very very soon

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