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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved family bonding
roshni riya nd shree's bonding was superb
loved sameer nd arjun friendship
the family bonding was great
loved arni nd their romance
intersting precap...arni's first valentines day
thanx for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing story both of u

read 3 chapters back to back

loved dem

Arjun hurt

liked d way ria spoke to roshni

liking d new frendship

arni first valentines WOW

excited to know next chapters

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ,
The FF of yours is a complete contrast with serial but i aint complaining ...
It Potrays all relationships be it of friendship , Bro-sis or soulmates in a very subtle way which is very understandable and doesnt go over the Top
I really wonder how are you going to take the story forward .. .. I hope Rosh stays in this one ...she is adorable and so is her bonding with Shree & Riya
Do you have a index of your works coz it will be easier to find ...
Me being a new member find it way to diffcult to search for FF on Arjun .
Please do add me to your PM list
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Posted: 12 years ago
now arjun s out of dngr...relevd...
sam kitne achhe se sab ka khayal rakh raha hay...sabko ghar vejdia sivaye roshni ke
lv da scn of trio...i hp we gt a new trio in ds ff riya sree n chotu ke badle roshni...bt hp agly updt tak tino ke jagah charon mil jae😃
roshni n riya ki frndshp wl deepn
lv d part of arjun roshni rmnc
bt poor arjun kaha sochatha 1st valentine achhe se manayega n kaha mana raha hay😭
neway ab roshni manaegi valntn day...😳
lv da sam n arjuns frndshp n der nokjhok...sam ka arjun ko har baat pe teas karna s so funnyyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good 👏👏
So Arni's 1st valentine ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one..
WOW...Arni's first valentine..waiting for it..update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its so cute update thank u so much plz update the next one soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
loved roshni and riya's conversation :)
shree wants to call roshni bhabi :) how sweet
verses were beautiful :)
loved the way rathore was teasing arjun :)
love shree's bonding with roshni :)
roshni and arjun are so adorable :) it's their first valentines
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...Loved Arni Rosh- Ri- Shree moments... Sameer unbelievable this time also he s teasing Arjun... R-R moments were cool... Roshini's V-day surprise for Arjun how sweet... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey everyone... we are back again...

CHAPTER 12:

Kehta Hai Pal Pal Tumse

Ho Ke Dil Ye Deewana

Ek Pal Bhi Jaane Jaana

Mujhse Door Nahin Jana

Arj:are Roshni ye kya kar rahe ho?

Ros: (placing her hands on his lips) Sh... Arjun...(goes to his ears) Happy Valntines day Arjun'

Then she comes and gives a kiss. He was so happy and he too responds back

Arj: thanks Roshni. Happy Valentine's Day to you too... ab tho ankhen kholo please'

He leaves his eyes. He opens it up to see an angel in pure white salwar with a bunch of red roses in her hand and with the most beautiful smile on her lips.

Pyaar ek pavithra bandhan ki

Shuruat ki ehsaas

Pyaar do dilon ki mel...

Ek aisa rishta

Jaha ek dusre keliye mar mitne keliya bhi

Thaiyaar ho...

She comes closer to him and places the flowers by his bed. He gave out his hand for her, and she takes. He gives a kiss on her hands. "Roshni'"

She leans closer to him and looks at his eyes. "sorry... jaan... kaash mien iss bed pe na hothe'." She closes his mouth and nods no.

"aap mere zindagi me ho, yahi mere liye kaafi hai Arjun. aur kuch nahi. Magar wada dijiye, aap kabhi bhi mere saath nahi chodege."

Arj: kabhi nahi Roshni... chahe wo upar wale bhi chaho... tho bhi mien tumhe nahi chodungi...

She places her head close to his chest and he kisses her hair.

Arj: tho Valentines ka kya plan hai, madam?

Ros( getting up): bohot badiya plan hai janab. Aaj sabere apke doctors apse milne ayenge. Fir check up.

Arj: (pouts his face): oh... kitna romantic Valentine hai... I'm gonna love it. hope aaj koi lady doctor aye.. thode tho meherbani karo Bhagwaan...

Ros: acha... achi prayer hai... (looking up) nahi bhagwan... koi senior khadoos doctor ko hi bhejna...

Arj: ok then bhagwan, doc bhuda chalega.. par nurse tho item honi chahiye... please...

Ros: aw.. badmash... tho flirt karne ka irada hai...

She slightly hits on his shoulder. He laughs aloud and then winces in pain. "ah.."

Ros: Arjun.. sambhalke.. sorry did I hurt you?

Arj( looking to her eyes) :nahi Roshni... you just killed me... I am so dead in your love...

Ros: hm... lagtha hai ke yaha ke doctors kaafi ache ai. Janab thode bohot romantic horaha hai...

Arj: ek baar ghar pohonchne do... dikhatha hu tumhe...

Ros: chal hat... ab aap baitiye. Mein towel aur pani leke athe hai.

She helps him to brush and fresh up. He was enjoying her love and care and pulling her closer to him, whenever he got a chance. Later she gave him some light breakfast.

Ros: Ma-pappa aur Choti ke flight aaj 10 baje hai.

Arj: hm... Choti ko tho jaane ka koi man nahi hai...

Choti: (from behind) tho fir bhaga kyu rahe ho??

The family was there. Choti had a bunch of white roses. She comes to Arni.

Ch: happy valentines day bhai-bhabhi' wo bhabhi.. red roses... hm...bhai keliye hoge... Ma... ab patha chala ke hume aaj hi yaha se kyu bhaga rahe hai ye dono?? Aaj in dono ke pehle Valentines day' hm... aap dono tho chupe rustam nikle yaar...

Arj: Choti... chup karna.. aise kuch nahi...

Mom: kuch bhi ho.. mien tho ab araam se wapas ja sakthi hu. Roshni haina yaha!! Kuch bhi zaroorath pade tho Sameer ya uske team ko batha dena... uske saare bache bohot ache hai'

Arj: bache?? Sam ke bache?? Kaun wo pahad jaisa Chotu??

Mom: aise math bol Arjun... dekhne me hi bada hai... dil ke bohot acha hai. aur wo Riya... wo bhi'

Ros: ha Maa. Riya tho bohot sweet hai. mere ache dosti hogayi hai usse. Aur Sree bhi. Wo tho mujhe bhabhi bulathe hai.

Ch: bhabhi, ye jo pehle wala white roses kisne di??

Ros: Sree ne hi diya hai. infact usne hi mujhe help kiya tha, ye flowers lene keliye. (she then stops as she remembers her in-laws are in front of her. Arjun enjoys it)

Ch( bit annoyed): hm... tho wo Sree ne mujhse pehle apko wish kiya?? Not fair!! Aur wo apko bhabhi kyu bulau??

Ros: hey its ok'

Arj: ma-pappa aapko jaana chahiye. Flight keliye late na hojaye.

Ch: ha.. bhaga do firse hume'

Ros: Choti... aise math bolna. Now give me a hug.

Arj: lekin aap kaise jayenge??

Sree( comes at the door): sawari ready hai Sir'

Ros: are Sree... tum?? Yaha kaise??

Sree: good morning Sir. Rathod Sir ne kaha tha ke apko airport drop karde. Wo apko lene anewale hi the, thab Commissioner sir ne call kiya. Maybe he will come directly to airport later.

Arj: thanks Sree.

Sr: any time sir. (turning to Papa) sir I think its time.

Papa: ok beta. Arjun... dhyan rakhna ok??aur Roshni ke har baath manna. Usse zyada thang math karna'

Arj: yes Papa.. done'

Ch: chalthi hu bhai.(she hugs him lightly) bye bhabhi.(in her ears: enjoy...bhabhi.. hum tho chale')

Roshni hits on her head. "paagal..."

Sh: chale??

Ch: ithne bhi kya jaldi hai Mr.?

Sh: kyu kya hua?

Ch: kuch nahi, lekin ek baath bol dethi hu. Ye sirf meri bhabhi hai. apke nahi.. aur kisne kaha tha ke mujhse pehle bhabhi ko wish karne keliye??

Sh( amused): sorry choti'

Ch: hey its not Choti.. its Anjali...Anjali Suryakanth Rawte... samjhe ya samjhau??

Sh: ok, madam. Aajse aapse pehle mien hamari... I mean tumhari bhabhi ko nahi wish karunga. Ab chale?

Mom: ha beta chalo. Choti tum bhi na?? Kaise baathein karthe ho?? Ab sorry bolo!!

Ch: NO... (turning to Arjun) mien bohot jaldi aungi. Jaldi teekh hojana ok?? Bye bhabhi...(turning to Sree) ab chale?? Late nahi horaha hai?

Sr: Pagal hai ye ladki... Ha chalo.

All leaves them. Roshni sits by him. "ab kya karu??"

Ros: bulathe hai... apke hot... budha doctor ko'

Arj: that's so cruel Roshni'

Ros: bechara Arjun.. kaha bhas gaya??

She goes to inform the nurses. Later doctor, as expected, an old senior doctor, comes in for check up. Roshni looks at him and gives a meaning full smile. Arjun glares at her.

They have a good time together. Always Arjun used to be busy in his work. And now after a long time they got some time to spend with each other. They were happy. She stayed by him when the medicines took its action and he was driffted to sleep.

By evening, Riya, Shree ans Chotu comes in to meet Arni.

Sh: good evening Sir. Kaise ho aap?

Arj: much better. Tumhare boss kaha gaye?

Ri: wo tho hamare piche hi the. Achanak phone aagaya aur hume aage chalne ko kaha.

Ch: aur ye tho ab roz ka chakkar hai!!

Chotu unknowingly says so and Riya- Sree glares at him. It was noticed by Arjun, who gave an evil smile.

Arj: matlab??

Ch: kuch... kuch nahi sir. Mien tho bas... aise hi'

Arj: aise hi kya Chotu, come on speak up. I promise mien usse kuch nahi kahunga.

Chotu looks for help at his team. Riya slowly nods no, while Sree starts to eat his nail. Arni is really amused now.

Ros: come on Sree, apne bhabhi se kya chupana??

Sh: ye tho emotional blackmail hogaye'

Ros: agar bhabhi bulaye hai tho.. nibhana hi hoga na?? aur waise bhi, apke boss bilkul mere bhai ke tharah hai. tho aap aaram se baath kar sakthe ho.

Sh: lekin agar usse patha chala ke '

Ri: (bangs on her head) ab ye Sree kya karne wale hai... hum tho gaye kaam se..

Arj: come on guys.. bolna'

Chotu looks at Sree who gives a slight nod yes, but Riya nods no.at last he decides to speak up.

Ch: sir.. wo .. Rathod sir ko thode chot lage the... kuch mhine pehle.. sir pe... ek encounter me...

Arj: ha.. mujhe patha hai... aur..

Ch: thab... wo...ek... doctor... mili... tho... aaj kal.. kaafi calls... you know...

Arj: hm... interesting, very interesting. Kamse kam uss waqt bhagwan tho uske saath tha. Mere tharah nahi.

All: what???

Roshni glares at him.

Arj: kuch nahi.. ok.. so ek doctor ke paas hai aaj kal uska dil... hm... aur naam kuch patha hai apko?

Ri: shayad, Muskan naam hai.

Arj: Muskan, good. Aur wo kaunsi hospital me hai??

Sh: ji... wo yahi hospital me kaam karthi hai.

Arni: WHAT??

Arj: good very good. Ab ayega maza.

Sh: sir you promised aap kuch nahi khenge. Fir...

Arj: are aise moka bar bar athe nahi hai guys...

Ri: sir, thab tho hamre kaam gaye... wo hame zinda nahi chodenge. Roshni please sir se kuch math puchna... please'

Ros: sorry Riya. I cant promise anything. Kabhi kabhi mere pathi kaafi shaitan ban jathe hai. tho I'm helpless.

Ch: ore ma.. ab mien tho gaya..

Sameer comes from behind: "kaha jana hai Chotu??"

The trio's eyes pop out when they hear his voice.

Ch: kuch nahi sir... wo... wo...

Sam: aage bhi tho bolo..

Sh: kuch nahi sir, hum ye keh rahe the, ke raath kafi hogaye hai, abhi hame jaana chahiye. Hai na Ri?

Ri: ha... ha..

Sam: pagal hogaye ho kya?? Abhi tho bas 6 baje hi hue hai!! uthne bhi raath nahi hai!!

Ri: firbhi sir, hum chale?

Sam thinks whats wrong with these guys. "ok... lagtha hai ke tum teeno ko aaram ke zaroorath hai. jao. Aur kal fresh hoke aao"

Ch: (murmers) kal fresh hoke aakar marna hai na??

Sam: kuch kaha tumne chotu??

Ch: nahi sir.. bas.. good night keh raha tha.

Sam looks at them with surprise and then dismiss them. they literally runs away from there. "kya hua hai in theeno ko?? Aise kyu react kar rahe the? Khair, kaise ho tum dono?"

He takes a seat, while Arni winks at each other. Arjun sits a bit straight, ready for the attack.

Rishton ka apnapan...

Jhalaktha hai katte mitte palon se..

Jo hazaar yadonke sangam hai...

Arj: much better. Wiase wo doctor bohot kabil hai.

Sam: ha, suna hai.. yaha ke doctors kafi kaabil hai. waise tumhare doctor kaunsa hai?

Arj: ek ladki hai.. bohot cute thi... (Roshni glares at him) kya naam tha uska.. ha.. Muskan...

Sam: Muskan?? Wo tumhe kaise treat karenge?? Wo tho ENT specialist hai.. aur tumhe tho sir pe koi chot nahi hua hai na??

Arj: nahi Sam, wahi aaya tha sabere.

Sam: are nahi Arjun.. wo nahi hosakthi...

Arj: tumhe kaise patha??

Sam: wo tho Puna me thi, ek conference keliye. Wo bichari tho aaj sham ko hi wapas aye hai. aur aaj thode baath hi hospital ane wale hai... (Sam stops suddenly and looks at Arni. Both of them had an amused smile.)

Ros: wow Sam... apko tho uss 'bichari' ke pura khabar hai... kaise??

Sam: nahi aise kuch nahi...

Arj: oye hoye... dekha Sam kaise laal laal horaha hai.. bilkul tamatar ke tharah.

Sam: chup karna Arjun.

Ros: tho kab mila rahe ho Muskan se??

Sam: ek minute, tum logonko uske bare me kaise...oh... tho ye baath hai...isiliye wo 3 aise bhag rahe the... dekhlunga un teeno ko... aane do kal office me...

Arj: are apne raaz kholne keliya unhe kyu torture kar rahe ho.. waise tumhare 'bache' bohot ache hai.. bache man ke sache...

Sam: bache?? Aur wo 3??

Arj: wo mien nahi... Maa ne kaha tha.

Ros: wo sab chod na!! bolo Sam kab milwarahe ho??

Sam( embaressed) ok... aaj raath ko wo yaha aarahi hai. thab milwadunga. Ab wo sab chod, thode baad, Raghu sir yaha aaraha hai.

Arj: Raghu sir?? Yaha? Kyu??

Sam: kyu apne best mentor se milna nahi chahoge?? I met him at commissioner office. Mein wo last case ke bare me batha raha tha. Uske baad Raghu sir ne kaha ke wo tumse milne ayege.aur fir comm sir se fir baath karne gaye.

Arj: kab arahe hai wo?

Sam: bas athe hi hoge.

They talk for a while. later...

Raghu: excuse me guys...

Arj: are sir...( he tries to get up, but Sir makes him in bed)

Ra: wahi raho Arjun. kaise ho? Tum Delhi agaye aur mujhe bathaya thak nahi. Kyu?

Arj: sir uss waqt case ke silsile me.. aur Choti...

Ra: patha hai, Sameer ne bathaya. Ab kaise ho?

Arj: fine sir. Aur aap bhi shaadi pe kyu nahi aaye? Aur Sheen bhi nahi ayi?

Ra: sorry Arjun. kuch kaam tha. Roshni?? Right?? Nice to meet you.

Ros: you too sir. Bohot suna hai apke bare me.

Ra: I hope ache hi sune ho. Waise ek good news leke aya hu. But only if you are ready for it Arjun.

Arj: baath kya hai sir??

Ra: kya tum tumhare dost ke saath dena chahoge?

Arj: matlab? (Sam is so happy)

Ra: kya tum Delhi ETF join karna chahoge? Sameer ke second in command banke??

CHAPTER 13: PAGE 46

NOTE ON PAGE 45... PLS GO THROUGH IT..


Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago

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