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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

superb update...
poor choti... shocked on seeing arjun's condition...
loved how sam supported her...
feeling bad for roshini... she is disturbed seeing arjun icu...
love the way riya consoled her...
precap is awsum
finally arjun wakes up
verses were amazing...
cant wait for the next part...
continue soon...

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

awesome dear
loved riya's character
loved all d characters

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Disha

@.Brok3nSoul.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Gosh!!...that was really good! 🤗

The entire scene was well depicted...and the song tum bin...i just love it!...and it just made it more touching! ❤️..

Lovely!

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

😭ohhh god

too emotional

u narrated it very well

bring tears😭

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Superb update dr... everyones emotios r potrayed well... verses were too good nd ws perfect to the mood... Loved the entire chapter... update soon...

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Too emotional.
poor choti & Roshni & Arjun OMG i hope he gets well soon.
Rathod & Riya supported them so much thats realy welled up my eyes.
I was excited for first Roshni-Riya meeting but the situation was so messed up that I couldnt enjoy it wholeheartedly.
Beautiful song.
awesome update,great updates rockstars.

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Awesome...

Rathore was in so much pain..telling this to Rosh..

its really the most difficult thing..

loved the way he said SYS to bring the smile...

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

beautiful update kunchu di n payal👏👏👏 it was so emotional scene seeing choti's condition...😭😭😭😭😭... riya n roshani was so heart touching... arjun ko plz jaldi se theek kar do...payal 🤗 4 u tum bin is one my favourite song n perfect choice...thanx a lot

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rparash

@rparash

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Loved the update dearies...😊

The way sameer consoled choti n the way he handled the situation was amazing...

The way riya consoled roshni was just beautiful...No words to praise u both...👏

U made me cry too...Their conversation was so beautifully written...I fell in love with Riya...

Images came infront of my eyes flowing, wen i was reading...

Truly an awesome work...👍🏼🤗

very curious to know more...

Can't wait to read the next update...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Dear Kunchu and Payal,

As expected, the emotional trauma rings true here. But what impressed me the most was Rathod not shrinking from the very unpleasant task of informing Arjun's family about what has happened to him.

As he remarks on TV some time back, this is one of the toughest parts of being a police officer (or an army commander, at that, or in any other profession where physical risk, a lot of it, is part and parcel of the job).It says much for his sense of responsibility, as also the depth of his feelings for them, that he suppresses his own very real fears and tells them himself, and that too in a manner carefully calibrated to prevent a panic attack. The same is true of the way in which he comforts Choti.

Shyamala Aunty

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