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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Chapter Sixteen :

A beautiful chapter Rae. You manage to outdo yourself every update. :)

The first scene between Akash and Khushi , where Akash's thoughts were so...thoughtful. Just like an brother's, who doesn't want to see his sibling hurting any more. I admire his intelligent way of trying to suggest to Khushi to go meet Arnav , and try and talk things out.

The Nishi-Sharman scene was just brilliant.
Their sadness of not having a future together, their underlying longing and yearning for each other - beautifully described.

Nisha is visibly struggling with all the promises made to her...which were broken , and which left her broken in turn. And its evident that Sharman loves her too, though I don't understand why he moved away from her??

Gosh...this is so intriguing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: raomedhz

Chapter Fourteen :


Its clear now why the friendship turned between the Siamese twins. Armaan would obviously be livid, if someone he had promised to be with, to help his whole life ignored him and took off all of a sudden. But why did Nisha run away so abruptly?

The past with Nisha's parents has scarred her in such a deep way that she can't really trust someone, how much ever she may try. Sharman is so understanding here, though in the end he did mention that he made her throw all her defenses away , and left her alone. :\

Awww...the irony. Poor Arnav. Poor Nisha.
Ab inke dil ko thoda sa aaraam de do Rae. They're all suffering so much! :(

My fav lines in the update -
"She was a neurosurgeon after all - precise clean cuts were her life."
"Every romantic movie she had seen had just been proved wrong."
"He remembered when he had put them on her on that Diwali night...the first time he had touched her without rage, contempt - fake but there."

Loved all of these. I would actually quote the entire update as my fav, but that wouldn't be right.😆



@Red- I still remember this line. I love it, it beautifully describes Nisha's professional & personal life. Rae has written this FF so beautifully :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...


@Red- I still remember this line. I love it, it beautifully describes Nisha's professional & personal life. Rae has written this FF so beautifully :)


Yes. I just stopped reading at that point and I was like...you poor poor soul. My heart went out to Nisha when I read that.
Seriously, Rae writes angst brilliantly.
And I always read AWESOME stuff late. 😳
I should I found this earlier.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
^ *Blushes*

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Sirf tumhare liye Rae!!!


Zyada mat sharmana :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: raomedhz

Sirf tumhare liye Rae!!!



Zyada mat sharmana :P



*Giggles* <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am proud of you Medz, you learnt it so quickly 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

I am proud of you Medz, you learnt it so quickly 😆

😆 If you're the teacher, any student learns fast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: raomedhz

😆 If you're the teacher, any student learns fast.


I take that as a compliment so *bows* 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Doctor...


I take that as a compliment so *bows* 😆

It was a compliment.😆

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