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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Oh my god...the song in chapter 4 is here without you.

*goes into reminiscence mode*

I have to listen to the whole song now before reading anything.

At this rate...I'm not going to finish anytime soon.😆

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: raomedhz
Oh my god...the song in chapter 4 is here without you.
*goes into reminiscence mode*
I have to listen to the whole song now before reading anything.

At this rate...I'm not going to finish anytime soon.😆

Hahahahaha! :)

Glad you liked that SS so much. :)

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Chapter Four -

So here it is. All the four perspectives. Or rather , an insight into their lives.

Okay...I swear I thought of Sharman Joshi first, when I read the name. Lol. :P

The engagement scene here...such a contrast to what happened in the previous update...this was a picture perfect scene, what you would expect to see happening when you marry the guy of your dreams. :)

Nishi...I like her, and she is definitely a change from the 'Nisha' you introduced us to!

So here again , Arnav and Nisha are both sacrificing for the sake of their families.

Look at the irony here, Arnav prays for Khushi to return to him somehow, while Khushi believes that Arnav has moved on completely.

The last few sentences just spoke of the amount of pain Khushi has been enduring...and yet, the girl has the courage and the will to still try and hide it behind a smile. And I'm glad Shashi is there for her, and sees through her facade.

The most poignant line of the update for me - "His daughter had learnt to lie."

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Quick question - Do you plan out your storylines...like in total detail , or you have a basic concept which you develop to form the story later on ? :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: raomedhz
Quick question - Do you plan out your storylines...like in total detail , or you have a basic concept which you develop to form the story later on ? :)

Can be both ways but YNTOO is planned out more or less in my head. :)

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Can be both ways but YNTOO is planned out more or less in my head. :)

Because I'm loving the way its being narrated. You're weaving the past and the present so well , without revealing crucial details at all. :)

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Chapter Five :

What happened in the past???

Everything happening here is a direct result of it...

Again, you can sort of realize what happened with Khushi and Arnav, but what happened to Nisha???

Something...that not only broke her marriage, but also resulted in her best friends holding her in such deep contempt?

Again the best lines for me -

"All fake.

But then who cared?

Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would answer that question without a moment's hesitation.

No one."

Just shows how much you can deceive the world, but not yourselves and people who really care about you.

And finally...I hate cliff hangers. Bas.

I want to know what Nisha replied. So I'm off to Chapter 6 without any further delays. :)

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Anjali can't speak english???😲

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: raomedhz
Anjali can't speak english???😲

What? *Confused*

Of course she can but doesnt Anjali speak Hindi on the show as well? I try to be true to the characters's traits unless my story is 'Alternate Universe' :p

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: AngelTeen

What? *Confused*

Of course she can but doesnt Anjali speak Hindi on the show as well? I try to be true to the characters's traits unless my story is 'Alternate Universe' :p

Oh sorry...so the man who cant speak hindi and the woman who cant speak english refers to Nishi's grandparents?