virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome precap
update soon yayyy😛
w8ing for this also for a long time😃
n plzzz pm me when u update😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
Please continue soon, I love this story .
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey this my fist time commenting on your works. you write amazingly well. the first story i read of yours was pyaar aur dosti and then went on to read all of your works. keep writing. thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kharesva mi Nia, taka i Elena Az
sushto kharesvam kushena no az lud
lud lud nishal
Haha if i write ths in the language whch everyone understand thn pakka tumsab mujhe maardaloge 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
NEXT UPDATE IN 10 MINUTES...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice precap naina .. jaldi jaldi update karo jaldiii 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Precap..~!! waiting for the update!
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CHAPTER 13
manvi ran n ran till the time she reached the house which was her destiny, the house where she had spent the most beautiful time of her life with her kabir, the house which was her kabir's. manvi stood in front of the door, controlled her heartbeats and rang the bell. the door opened, and manvi saw that there was no one on the door, she opened the door more n entered the house.
next moment she was pinned to the wall and her kabir in front of her. manvi stopped blinking n stared at him. her kabir was standing in front of her eyes and somehow she was scared thinking what if this was another dream of hers.

manvi : k.. ka.. kabir...
kabir : mani...
manvi hugged him there n then and bursted into tears, the tears which she was controlling from so long, all the emotions which she didnt show anyone after the time kabir left were now out of control. she felt his arms wrapped around her protectively and his touch still had that magic which it had years back. manvi broke the hug and cupped his face and kissed him all over.
manvi : i missed you kabir... i missed you so much... never leave me now... i love you kabir... i really love you...
kabir : i love you mani... i missed you like hell... you have no idea how have i survived these 3 years...i wasnt living mani i was just breathing... tum jaan ho meri... jindagi ho meri... tumhari saanse, tumhari har dhadhkan meri hai, yahan tak ki tumhari maut bhi meri hai... bas itna yaad rakhna ke kabir apni mani ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai... apni jaan de dunga lekin tumpe ek aanch nahi dunga...
manvi : nahi kabir... ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge... ab kuch galat nahi hoga... main hoon na tumhare saath... ab beeji bhi kuch nahi kar paegi.. unhe humein aur humare pyaar ko accept karna hi hoga aur uncle aunty ko bhi ab hum sab bta denge... tum unhe bol dena ki wo humare rishte ki baat karlein... i want to be yours as soon as possible... ab main tumse door nahi reh sakti kabir... i love you so much...
kabir : mani maine kuch suna tha.. i mean..
manvi : kya suna tha...??
kabir : woh.. pehle tum promise karo, tum mujhse naaraz nahi hogi...
manvi took his hand in hers and said " i promise "
kabir : uss din woh punters keh rahe the ke tum aur jeevika di ke dewar... i mean u both are very close...
manvi : uff... wo chep... woh toh mera best friend hai.. partner hai mera... n tumhe pta hai, he is not single so dont worry... mani sirf tumhari hi hai... sirf kabir ki...
kabir : i was scared... you know na how much i love you...
manvi : i know kabir.. i know..
kabir : mani come with me...
manvi smiled n followed him. kabir took her to his room n closed the door..
manvi : hum yahan dark room khelenge ab...??
kabir : chal oye... shh... just follow me..
manvi : fir itna andhera kyun hai... haaww kahin tum...
kabir : haan tumhare fayda uthaunga na isliye andhera hai...
manvi : ohhh... fir theek hai..
kabir : meri jhalli... ye dekho... (and showed her something)
manvi : haawww... u started smoking... what is this lighter doing with you...?? u know na i dont like all this...
kabir : kitna bolti ho yaar tum... i have a lighter that doesnt mean that i smoke or something...
manvi : toh phir ye kisliye hai kabir... main itni bhi jhalli nahi hoon...
kabir : hehehe... sit..
manvi : okk..
kabir lighted the candle n manvi saw that his room was beautifully decorated with rose petals all around and there was a cute set up in front of her...
manvi : you did this for me...??
kabir : no i did this for sumi...
manvi : kabir... dare u do any of these things for anybody else... i will kill you...
kabir : ufff meri madhuri... shaant... see what i cooked for u...
manvi : lemme guess... maggi...??
kabir : arrey waah... tumhe kaise pta...
manvi : because you only know how to make maggi, coffee n sandwiches...
kabir : very smart huh...
manvi : aakhir mani kiski hoon...
kabir : meri... aur kiski... lets cut this maggi wala cake... i am dying to have it...
manvi : aur tum ainwai mujhe tanker kehte rehte ho...
kabir : yeah yeah... oops mani i forgot to bring juice...
manvi : i will bring it... you sit here na...
kabir : abhi se housewife banne ki practice kar rahi ho...
manvi : hmm... practice would make me perfect na...
kabir : yeah...
after having a good time with each other, manvi was sitting near the window with kabir's head in her lap and she was stroking his hair while he was playing with her other hand.
kabir : mani... sab khush to honge na...
manvi : hmm...
kabir : waise tum ye dieting wieting band kar do yaar... sookh sookh ke kaanta ho gayi ho tum...
manvi : tumhari yaad mein main aadhi ho gayi hoon kabir...
kabir : tumhare paas bhi na har cheez ka jawaab hai... applauding... accha tell me how is jeevika's in laws... i mean how is their family...
manvi : sab bahut acche hain... kal na main tumhe di ki shaadi ki photo dikhaungi... okkk...
kabir : ok done... aur tumhe pta hai main london mein na...
manvi : please apna london puran mat shuru karna... mujhe iss waqt koi aur nahi chahiye... no london drea,s nothing...
kabir : haaye teri ada...
manvi : gaana suna do ek...
kabir : what..?? now...??
manvi : yeah...
kabir : but kaunsa gaana...
manvi : wohi humara wala...
kabir : ohh..
manvi : i hope tumhe yaad hai...
kabir : naa jaane kaise... lagta hai aise.. tumhara hai intezaar... dil ki gali se bach ke guzarna... yahan toote hai dil hazaar...
manvi : ik din kahoge tum, tumhare hain hum...
kabir : tumhare hain hum... ab khush...??
manvi : bahut khush... (and kissed his forehead)
kabir put his hand at the back of her head and pulled her towards him and was about to kiss her when manvi's phone started ringing...
kabir : ab ye kiska phone aa gaya... tyming to dekho...
manvi : tum continue rakho na... let the phone ring...
kabir : desperate...
manvi : less than you... forget it lemme pick the call then...
manvi got up n picked the call and kabir hugged her from behind. while manvi was talking on phone, kabir was kissing the nape of her neck continuously.
manvi : haan pahunch gaye theek se... tum kya rahe ho...??
kabir came in front of manvi and while making funny faces pleaded manvi to disconnect the call...
manvi : partner tum khush ho na...?? accha i will call u back.. okk bye..
kabir : kaun tha...??
manvi : wohi chep... v..vi
kabir : forget it na... ab tum ghar chali jao warna sabko shak ho jaega..
manvi : hmm... take care kabir... kal milte hain..
kabir : okk jaanu... bye..
manvi : bye.. khana time pe khana okk...??
kabir : okk madam...
few days passed by, manvi n kabir used to meet chori chori chupke chupke n enjoy their time and strnegthen their love... on the other hand, virat even though being with maya, couldnt go close to her n all he could think about was manvi... the only thing that was on his mind was manvi, his partner, his ded futiya.. he was worried because these days he talked less with manvi n whenver he called manvi, manvi was way too busy in dont know what... she never told him what was occupying most of her time.
virat : kya karun main iska...?? where are u these days partner...?? you are making me go insane...
maya : i thought you were already mad in my love...
virat : oh maya when did u come...??

maya : when you were saying that i am making u go crazy...

virat : oh (and he faked a smile at his to be fiance...)
maya : i was wondering why dont we call the designer today n finalise our customes... u know what virat i want both of us to e colour coordinated on our engagement...
virat : wowww... thats great (said with excitement, but the truth was that he was least interested)
maya : so i will go n make an important call baby...

virat : ok baby...
this kept happening for many days, maya kepting eating virat's brain regarding the engagement n the preparations n all which used to piss him off. and viren was noticing a change in virat, he wasnt paying attention to maya at all, he used to just stare at his mobile and kept checking it after every 2 minutes. viren knew that virat was missing manvi n her usual chattering and he still had a hope that virat would realise that manvi is the girl for him.
everyone in the vadera house was trying to understand maya n accept her as a family member but it was difficult for all. vanshika also thought that maya wasnt the perfect match for his son but she was quiet thinking that maya was virat's happiness, his love but still she sometimes noticed something missing in virat's eyes n his smile.
days passed by, kabir n manvi to their usual self n finally manvi gathered the courage to tell beeji n other family members that kabir was back n kabir was whole heartedly accepted by beeji as there was no reason to disapprove of their love n their relationship.

at ganga ghat
kabir : mani...

manvi : yes jaan...
kabir : u know what mum dad are coming in few days...
manvi : wow... thats so great... it means we will be getting engaged soon...
kabir : soon...?? naah... very soon...

manvi got up from the stairs of the ghat and hugged kabir n kabir picked her up in his arms.
" manvi didi " disturbed their romance n brought them back to the real world where people were staring at them and it seemed that their eyes would pop out any moment. kabit put manvi down n manvi bent down n asked her punters...
manvi : kya hai re...??
ria : didi... didi... aap toh humko bhool hi gayi ho...
manvi : nahi re meri katrina...
ria : di aap toh din bhar kabir bhaiya ke saath hi hoti ho... humse toh bilkul pyaar hi nahi karti ab...
manvi : aisa kisne kaha...?? pagal ho gayi hai kya...??
ria : dabbu bhaiya na...
manvi : uss dabbe ki toh main... dekh ria main na tum sabse bahut pyaar karti hoon... by god.. tum kuch bolo na kabir...
kabir : tum toh mujhse bhi nahi kehti mani...
manvi : kya...??
kabir : wohi i love you..
manvi : kaha toh tha uss din...
kabir : almost a month back...
manvi : topic mat change karo na kabir... abhi focus on this choti khoti ria maharani...
kabir : toh ria ko hum ice cream khilae... strawberry wali...
ria : yes...
manvi : aur mujhe chocolate...
kabir : so lets go girls...
there in chandigarh, virat got to know that manvi helped maya to get back to him. he was heartbroken n angry on manvi n he even broke his relationship with maya saying that she again betrayed him n lied to him. everybody at vadera house was unaware of this, and they were preparing for the engagement, when virat came n asked them to stop all their work as this engagement wouldnt happen now. everybody was shocked n asked virat the reason for this. virat told them that he does not want to marry a selfish n self centered girl like maya. viren came back home n went to virat's room n then happens the much awaited realisation. viren made virat realise his love for manvi, his partner, his love, his ded futiya...
virat : main aa raha hoon manvi... rishikesh be ready... virat singh vadera aa raha hai apni dulhania le jaane... and smiled imagining the scene...
mystery75 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres...YAYYY I M THE FIRST TO COMMENT
what an amazing n outstanding update😃
AWWW mani n kadir r sooo in love wise i love VIRMAN but the way u showed manvi with others na that despite of being a hardcore viman fan we ultimately falls in love with jodi's made by u like viren n manvi in pmkk n rishab n manvi in dmg😆
the moments u show b/w manvi n kabir r soo sweet n pure n loving also😃
awww virat missing manvi😛
love how virat thinking what is occupying her where is she busy...oh when he will come to know where is she busy he will be hell shocked😆
n i love tho pics which u add of them perfectl their expressions perfectly matching the situation👏
like virats pic""oh maya when did u come""😉
n then viren's pic👍🏼
yayyy so virat realise his love for manvi n coming to get her n manvi n kabir engagment??
but why was beeji not accepting kabir before n noe accepting 😕😕
eagerly w8ing for virat to know abt manir cant w8 to see his reaction😳
n thanx for the pm😊 THANKU
n i have accepted ur buddy req😃
Edited by amgud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesome update ya👏
par mujhe laga kabir negative hoga toh virman lovestory asaan hogi lekin aapse toh humari khushi bardasht hi nai hoti na...karan wahi ko le aayi ...i love him too ab kisko select karun😲
aur woh bhi kabir ek dam positive character hai...
manvi aur kabir ke parts bahot hi cute and sweet the aur kya bolun mein koi option hi nai diya tumne😭
and maya annoying virat 😆 it was fun
aur specially woh viren ki pic that was perfect 😆
finally virat realised his love par ab bahot der ho gayi re...
hamesha late hi hote ho tum😡
naina ab kya karegi tu mujhe toh kuch samajh hi nai araha hai...
but wanna see virat's reaction wen he knows abt the reaction 😃
next part jaldi chahiye ok 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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