virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Fab Update..~!! It became filmy towards the end..which makes all more good...u chose Karan Wahi as Kabir...ab toh i cnt hate him..Damn i enjoyed reading their scenes only looking Wahi's pik...he so cute n adorable..*ok no distractions*...Pace of the story very nice..ab Virat..Virat nahi rahega..i mean he wouldnt b emotionally strong seeing Maanvi with Kabir...N this will b very interesting to read..Waiting for the next Naina..~!!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

superb update

finally virat realised his love

how will virat react when he knows about maanvi and kabir

plz cont soon

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

aww Nia and Wahi ❤️ eeks unka romance toh mashallha tha i jst loved it
My niwa ❤️ (nia+wahi) omg m still thnkng abt thm they r jst perfect couple ❤️
Urgh bt mera viraat vl b hurt and jealous toh tit for tat hona chahiye
Bt phr bhi (niwa)
Mujhe aur niwa romance chahiye
And viraat ke liye koyi aur chahiye i cn't c hm hurt 😭

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Nice one but it was too late this time...
I loved it and waiting to read the next part
Do update soon

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dania6

@dania6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

ammmaaaZInng ...plz update soon ...:):):):)

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Damekedaar update Nainuu👏👏👏,,,,,,,mazaa aa gayaa⭐️⭐️...loved every bit of it...😃
hayye wahi......
finally kabir aur manvi ...😃...superb Naina👍🏼...their conversation was great😛.sweet 😉.aur unkaa romance❤️..i really enjoyed yaar...⭐️⭐️.haww kabir abhi se virat se jealous😲...aur dusri taraf virat manvi koo missing awwn..kabir aur manvi toh gangat main bhi romancing😆..the scene with punteres is soo cute n sweet😛...mayaa virat ko pakaaying😆...virat mayaa broke up...yayy...aur virat ko realize hogayaa...eeks...the line was soo good...

virat : main aa raha hoon manvi... rishikesh be ready... virat singh vadera aa raha hai apni dulhania le jaane... and smiled imagining the scene...
waah...kya line hai...really excited to read next part...virat kaa reaction...eeks.😃..will be eagerly waiting Nainuu...thank u so much for the upcoming pm...🤗

Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

wow wat an update.but i don't want manvi kabir i want manvi virat my virman.plz continue soon.😃😭

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hemameenu

@hemameenu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

awesome update dear pls pm when u update how about kabir
omg when virat comes to know about kabir and mannu

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rashi246

@rashi246

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

This update was amazing, and I thaught first that kabir would be evil but he's actually quite sweet and I feel sad for Virat because he's gonna go to confess his love but she loves kabir. Please continue soon, this is also.one of your stories which I love

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Naina fantastic update ⭐️⭐️.. Just superb.. Kabir and Manvi ka romance!! 😛 Though I'm a Virman fan but still I just can't hate Kabir!! He is really very sweet and nice 😳.. And upar se Karah Wahi, Kabir hai!! Ab toh aur bhi impossible hai!! 😆😆 Loved their romance a lot 😳😳.. They love each other so much ❤️.. You have included that 'Remix' song!! Wow 😃.. Loved it.. And now they are planning to get engaged soon.. Interesting.. Here Virat is missing his partner and he has to tolerate that annoying Maya also .. Thank god he broke up with her 😆.. And he realized his love for Manvi also.. But he will be hurt once he finds out about Kabir-Manvi relationship 😒.. Poor Virat!! Can't see him in pain .. Update was very well written Naina 👏👏👏.. Loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😃