virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dhee, continue soon & thank u so much for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. .hate sb for doing this. .waiting for kabir track. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was nice ...
plz make virman unite fast...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no not again!!! maya and sb!!! 😡
inka life mein problem kya hai yaar?!?!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arohi16

oh no not again!!! maya and sb!!! 😡

inka life mein problem kya hai yaar?!?!
thanks for the pm

problem ka toh pta nahi yaar par inme ek cheez common hai KAAJAL... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramanirani

it was nice ...
plz make virman unite fast...
continue soon...

THANKS BUT LET THE STORY TAKE ITS OWN SWEET TYM... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. .hate sb for doing this. .waiting for kabir track. .[/QUOTE
kabir will enter at the ryt tym shabsem... uska aane se dhamake hoga... trust me...!!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 5
just then virat entered and saw manvi in his room. he thought he was just hallucinating and ignored her. he went straight to the dressing and checked himself out. manvi saw him ignoring her and checking himself out...
manvi : chepness ki bhi limit hoti hai by... (this is the height of chepness...)
virat : what are you doing here manvi...???
manvi : i was searching for you...
virat : searching for me under the bed... u were sitting on your knees...
manvi : umm.. actually... my mobile fell down, i was picking it up...
virat : ohky... come lets go outside for a coffee...
manvi : coffee... not a bad idea... lets go...
virat : cmon then move...
virat held manvi's shoulders and pushed her out of his room...

at the barista coffee shop
chandigarh sec 17-c

manvi : partner...
virat : hmm...
manvi : if i ask u something will you answer me honestly...
virat : yes certainly...
manvi : have you ever been in love...??
virat got furious on hearing the question and looked at manvi trying to calm him down...
virat : kya baki jaa rahi ho... kaisa sawaal hai ye... (what kind of question is this...???)
manvi : yaar tum sadd kyun rahe ho... main toh ainwai hi puch rahi thi... waise chep isme koi secret wali baat thodi hai... (i was just asking generally... by the way its not worth a secret...)
virat : ded futiya... tum ye pyaar vyaar ki baatein kyun kar rahi ho...?? kisi ye pyaar syaar toh nahi ho gya na sherni... (ded futiya.. where are talking about love...??? are you in love with somebody...???)
manvi : nahi nahi... main toh pyaar kar chuki hoon... mera quota khatam ho gya... ab kisi bhi nikame ki koi jagah nahi hai... (no no... i am already done with my share of love... now there is no place for any guy...)
virat : haan ms. chaudhary ka sara pyaar uski di ke liye hi hai... matlab meri bhabhi ke liye hai... (yeah ms. chaudhary's love is only for her di... ooopss for my bhabhi...)
manvi felt guilty for a moment for hiding the biggest truth of her life from her partner... but how can she tell him about kabir... when she herself doesnt know about his whereabouts...when she herself dont know when kabir will come back... but she was sure of one thing that someday kabir would come back to her no matter what and that their love will find its destination.. their love will surely turn into marriage someday...
virat : kahan kho gai bandariya...??? (where are you lost bandariya...???)
manvi : soch rahi hoon ke tumhe kyun koi ladki nahi mili...??? tum theek thaak dikhte ho yaar... personality bhi acchi hai... gaate bhi acche ho... bilkul rockstar style...mna ranbir ki takkar ke nahi ho par phir bhi... tumhe ladkiyan pasand toh hai na...??? i mean ladki ka naam lete hi tum angry young man ban jaate ho and u become rude and arrogant... (i am thinking why didnt you find a girl...??? i mean you look ok, have a good personality.. u sing very well... rockstar style u see...i agree u are no competition to ranbir kapoor but still... are you straight...??? i mean do u like girls or not... whenever i talk aboit girls, u turn into an angry young man avatar and act all rude n arrogant...)
virat : woh kya hai na mujhe sirf tum pasand ho... kisi aur ke baare mein main soch bhi nahi sakta... (actually i like you... i cant think or see any other girl...)
manvi choked on her coffee... virat rubbed her back and laughed and smirked...
manvi : hey bhagwan kahan fasa diya mujhe iss chep ke saath... (oh god, why am i struck with this chep... save me...!!!)
virat : ghar chale madam... varna mogambo humari parade lga denge... (cmon now lets hurry up else mogambo will make us do parade...)
manvi : haan haan mujhe dinner miss nahi karna... (yeah yeah i dont want to miss dinner u see...)
virat : chal meri bhookhi sherni... (lets go my bhookhi sherni...)
manvi : chalo mere chipku chep (lets go my chep...)
at night...

manvi was thinking about how to unite maya n virat... making many plans... praying that her plans wouldnt get backfired or flop... thinking this she fell asleep...
at morning
virat got up early and thought of going and meeting manvi - his all time entertainment channel...
he was no his way when his phone rang... he without seeing the name picked up the call...
virat : hello...
___ : hey virat
virat : why have you called me...???
___ : virat i need to talk to you...
virat : listen maya i really dont want to talk to you...
maya : please virat... please listen to me for once... please for old time sake...
virat : i dont have time for your bullsh*t... and you know what i dont give a damn...
maya : i have changed virat... i regret my mistake...
virat without listening disconnected the call and made his way to manvi's room... he knew meeting manvi would lighten up his mood...

virat entered the room and saw her sleeping peacefully like an angel and cuddling like a baby... her facial expressions were changing every minute and virat smiled seeing it and finding it cute...

virat : pta nahi ab kya khichdi pakk rahi hai iske matar size ke dimag mein... but i am sure she is planning something big for sure... i know u that much well partner (for sure something is being cooked in her pea sized brain...)

virat took steps forward and went close to manvi... he bent down on his knees opposite the bed and was admiring the sleeping beauty in front of him.. he smiled thinking that manvi was way too better than maya... infact comparing manvi with maya, would in itself be an insult for manvi... he closed his eyes and prayed to god to give manvi everything she wishes for in her life... to give her all the happiness in the whole universe... he didnt realised when manvi stirred and opened her eyes lazily...
manvi : ahhh...
virat got scared and saw manvi standing on the bed and jumping while shouting...
virat : calm down bandariya... its me... virat...
manvi : you scared me...
virat : i scared you...??? no you scared me...
manvi : ohh please... what were u doing in my room...??? you are actually shameless virat...
virat : i... i.. came here to meet you...
manvi : u came here to meet me... tumne kasht kyun kia, abhi neechi milte toh thodi der mein... (why did u come here... we would have met downstairs at breakfast...)
virat : mera ghar hai... main jahan marzi aaun jaaun... (its my house... i can go anywhere i want...)
manvi : so that means you would enter a girl's room without permission...
virat : which girl are you talking about...??? i thought its your room manveshwar... 😛
manvi : i will kill you virat... get out... 😡
virat : haan haan jaa raha hoon... mujhe bhi shauk nahi hai yahan rukne ka... (ya ya i am going only... i am not fond of staying here...)
virat went out of the room and manvi grinned thinking that she won the argument...
at afternoon...
swamini : so manvi... did u think something...???
manvi : yes new partner... i think maya should come n meet virat... that would be best... our phone call plan didnt work well... maya told me an hour back that virat didnt listen to her and disconnect her call...
swamini : that means it time for confrontation...
manvi : bua ji... not exactly confrontation but as much as i know virat he wouldnt let maya say anything and by chance if maya managed to say anything, he wouldnt listen to her...
swamini : so i think u should also be present when they both meet...
manvi : you are right new partner... today virat will meet maya...
swamini : good going manvi... i never thought you are so smart and intelligent...
manvi : thank u bua ji... now i am going to vanshika aunty... we are going to see a cricket match...
swamini : cricket match n bhabhi...???
manvi : actually... cricket match is just an excuse, i love to spend time with vanshika aunty... i feel like i am with my mother...
swamini : ok.. go but dont forget about the next step...
manvi : ok ok i wont forget... bye...
swamini : bye...
swamini thought to herself " i never thought you can be so dumb manvi... or ishould say you are thats selfless... you just want virat to be happy and u really think that his happiness lies in maya... i thank god that u are unable to see that virat is getting attracted to you... but ignorance is bliss... and your ignorance is is a bliss for all of us and for the name n respect of the vaderas... maya will match up to our standards as she belongs to our status... and i think maya can handle virat better than you do... you are a spoilt brat and a girl like you can never become daughter in law of our family... i hope u succeed manvi... i hope my plan works... "

OOO

precap
virat n maya meeting followed by the basketball court scene...
OOO
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update,,,! Swamini complete evill...m seriosuly pissed off even watchin her in mahaepi...😡Coming to the update...Virat attracted to maanvi quiet obvious bt i just hope he realizes but then there's 1 more thing Kabir..alot of hinderance which makes story even more interesting..😃!! Loved their coffee date...he subconciously spoke his heart but both din relaize...😊Continue SOon Naina..! Thnks for the PM!
Edited by Syed695 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Nice update,,,! Swamini complete evill...m seriosuly pissed off even watchin her in mahaepi...😡Coming to the update...Virat attracted to maanvi quiet obvious bt i just hope he realizes but then there's 1 more thing Kabir..alot of hinderance which makes story even more interesting..😃!! Loved their coffee date...he subconciously spoke his heart but both din relaize...😊Continue SOon Naina..! Thnks for the PM!

i am also pissed off wid swamini after seeing M.E...
forget it thanks fr the comment...
many hrdles coming up soon... kyunki hurdles ke bina maja thodi ayega... 😉
will try n cont soon...

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