Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Shiza I thought u were a serious type writer though this update did make me smile :-) keep writing

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oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Loved the update.It was very well written.

Khushi's awesome dialogue and NK's mispronunciation of "gota" were the best.😆

And I absolutely loved the ending.

PS: I have started reading your FF "Choices". And I'm loving it.😊

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Like they say, the best defense was always a good offense. Haha, loved this line!

Ah, so that's how NK & Khushi met. Khushi & her never ending saga of Gotas! 😆Btw I love how Arnav & Anjali can talk to each other with ease, I really like her in this FF.

Uh-oh, I kinda have a feeling that the peace offering is not going to be so peaceful. Arnav surely seem to be up to something, his overly inflated ego is bruised after all. Is there going to fireworks next? Let's see.

Thanks for the pm Shiza, you know it's always a pleasure to read your stories. Just like the rest of your works, this was nothing less than superb. I really love the way you write girl! Well done. 👍🏼

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Beautifully penned!!!

Wonderful initiation...Khushi's hilarious reply...Payal-Akash flummoxed...Arnav's retort ...

I had a hearty laugh envisioning Khushi contemplating to do that jig...The Taming of the shrew...and, then, beaming as if she had won accolades...she is unique...I love her!!!

Poor Payal...thinking about her future ..which according to her will be a distant dream...because of their respective siblings...

NK is adorable with his imperfect hindi..Lota for gota...It was hilarious...thank heavens he escaped unscathed ...😆

Anjali knows her brother too well...

Have to give it to the ingenious Arnav...Gifting jalebis and also leaving her in a catch 22 situation...

Waiting to read how Khushi reacts...

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Nutcase

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

'' Peace offering? Or rising flares of a new war? I will let you decide. Meet me at my office at 8''. OMG!!!!

Wonderful!! Waiting to see more...

The situation descriptions were bit elaborate but Anjali's entry and her description part was beautifully done!

ASR is smart! when he is silent, he is on preparation..smart guy!

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Diakumar17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

thank you for this funny & cute update😆

God...after reading thi, i miss NK 😭

beautifully written👏

im sooo looking fwd to my fav writer - Zehra's update 😉

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angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

loved it

wht is he upto

dam curious

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Thanx ever soo much for sending me the pm..i hv no idea about this ff until u send me the link ...all i can say is , its absolutely brilliant..all my fav.writers under one roof ..total bliss......i was laughing my ass off reading the chapters,esp..one with rocky🤣...u guys r doing a brilliant job keeping the essence of the original story..keep it up...thanx again for the pm...

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

What a funny update. Khushi actually told his family members that he needed help? 😲

Payal is interested in a guy but won't pursue it because their siblings are not compatible??? 😕

She called him a Shrew in front of her sister? 😃

He wants to know how NK knows Khushi. Already possesive 😳

The gota lota thing was so funny 👏

I ❤️ Anjali here. She is smart and knows her brother in and out. She knows he likes her though he may refuse to accept 👍🏼

The hazaar saal ki guaranteewala has left her a gift of jaliebis. 😉

Let's see where my sister takes this...

Great story...

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arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Another great update n it surely made me smile.

Nk's lota oops sorry gota talks were hilarious😆.So Khushi tied a gotawala friendship band to him or was it rakhi?😉

Payal is totally smitten by Aakash n in all the hullabo she is still concerned about her chances of seeing him again and thought about their hopefully upcoming love story😆

Anjali knows Arnav too well n is already hinting for a summer wedding.😆

Arnav's ego is too big to accept that a female is ignoring him and he's on his way to rectify that whle Khushi is waiting for her hazaar saal wale guarantee wala guy

'' Peace offering? Or rising flares of a new war?Guess we need to wait n watch for that...we've an appointment at 8 in the office to keep.