Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Lota? NK tera kya hoga mere bhai!! Di let them first have a civil conversation without wanting to go at each others' throats, then we'll talk about marriages,k? Payal is as much of a Sanka Devi as Khushi, except she has excellent camouflage. Dreaming of marriages and epic love stories when you've barely spoken three sentences to the man? Hilarious. I almost choked while reading the line- How would their love ever thrive among such animosity? Drama much? hahaaa. And ASR, waah kya tashan hai bhai! Leaving your calling card in a box of jalebis. Very smart!

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

awesome update! This was hilarious! I love the Arnav and Khushi in this story. They are typical Arnav and Khushi from the show, but a little different. I'm loving this story so far. It's so easy to imagine each scene you wrote about. Can't wait to read future updates!

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sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Wah wah what a superb peace offering from Arnav..loving it

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urm21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

lovely update, hope K can win in whatever ASR has planned, i hope it turns out funny

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N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Shiza.. this time the smile was not invisible but it was quite visible.. Poor NK.. Lota really? for a second I was pitying Arnav; i thought it would take few paragraphs for NK to explain what lota or gota is but thankfully he had a visual aid. NK is hilarious.

Arnav's anger and his plans.. he sent jalebies to Khushi.. hmm interesting.. he is few steps ahead.. I can't wait for Lazyleaves is gonna do with that.. their meeting in office..

Khushi is such a sanka devi and i really like this payal smitten for Akash and day dreaming for ways to meet him and cease the fire that is between their siblings..

Enjoyed it.. fundu

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

great update

anjali is quite funny and she doesnt stop to tease him

loved the last bit - peace offering or rising war? interesting

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aeyshaalim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Oh how I love this shanka Devi khushi lol
Awesome chapter

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9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

wow wow wow! So it seemed like Khushi had a plan of her own. But now Arnav has one too..yet he's letting her choose? Was very surprised at that and the fact that he got her jalebis. Waiting to see what titaliya chooses!