TS FF-raksha bandhan:rishta bhai-behen ka(part 15) - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing amazing amazing...ek to ye concept hi itna awesome hai...ki hr bhai behen ke liye bahot special hain...But uske baad bhi this kind of thinking hats off...Love it awesome awesome & awesome...
Bas ek baat hai pls yaar Ye flashback ke saath thoda present bhi dikhaya kro pls...as i am htinking what is swayam thinking in this condition...
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Posted: 12 years ago

ohhh... how chweet
loved it yaar ...😊
u know jab bhi mein ye ss padthi hu my eyes become wet😭
kash mera bhi aisa loving aur caring bhai hotaa
plzzz jaldi update karo naa...n do pm mee⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye i love it,,,, sw-- to kya chuprehta u r my sis,, nd i love u,,, chooo chweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz plz plz plz plz plz do update soon dear it was super part plz plz plz do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome UD dear..
Loving diz SS to d core...!!
I really liked it when taayam said..jo tujhe pasand he vahi mujhe pasand he...very cute..!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
read last 2 parts.
they are just awesome...
such a lovely and emotional update...
aww both are badly hurt...
and flashbacks...wow
they are such a loving bro-sis...
plz update soon
and if possible plz pm me whenever u update next 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww dat was a awesome combo of cute...emotional...n beautiful relation of d awesome bro n sis
D flashback was tooo cute 😊
N sorry for d late comment...
Was kind of really busy
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Posted: 12 years ago
di all d parts r just superb
just loved it
i use 2 love TaaYam
plz update soon
n plz pm me 2😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

WARNING- pura note padhke hi update padhna! warna😡😆

guys i know i am late but u guys luv me so forgive me. i know me aap sabko tabse rula rahi hoon par me kya karoon ye taayam hai hi aise ki kisiko pal bhar me hasa bhi de aur rula bhi de. lekin last part me sabko itna smile karaungi ki cheeks me pain ho jaayegi krisha ji ki kasam! ok enough of my bak bak here u go-

PART- 5:- bhaiya mere raakhi ke bandan ko nibhana,

bhaiya mere choti behen ko na rulana,

taani crying to her mom- lekin mumma mene aisa kya gunah kia hai ki mujhe hamesha saza milti hai?jab bhi me kisise pyaar karti hoon wo insaan mujhse cheen liya jata hai!

pehle mere papa jo mere paida hone ke ek saal pehle krishna ji ke paas chale gaye, phir aap mujhe chod ke chali gayi krishna ji ke paas,

jab me mumbai aai to rey ke liye kyunki mujhe unse pyaar ho gaya, mujhe laga ki mujhe koi aisa mil gaya jo hamesha mere saath rahega lekin nahi phir mera dil toot gaya wo to mujhe apna dost bhi nahi maante,

lekin bhai! jo hamesha mere saath rahe aaj tak aur me sochti thi ki wo mera saath kabhi nahi chodenge aaj wohi bhai mujhpe chila rahe the! wo mujhse pareshaan ho gaye hai!

kyun? kyun aap sab mujhe chod ke chale gaye? shayad aap sabki koi galti hi nahi hai, me hi aap sabke liye pareshaani ban gayi thi! aur ab me bhai ke liye ek bojh ban gayi hoon

lekin kya sach mein me itni buri hoon? kya aap sabko me itna pareshaan karti hoon? kyun me jab bhi kisiki help karne jaati hoon sab kuch aur gadbad kar deti hoon, kisiki chehre pe smile laane ki koshish main use rula deti hoon, shayad me ek bad luck hoon, ek bad luck, bad luck

here with swayam-

swayam was still sitting down about their first meet, he got up holding the raakhi

sharon- swayam ye sab kya hua? tum aur taani... me to sapne me bhi aisa nahi soch sakti thi that tum uspe cillaoge aur taani jo itni patient aur kind hearted hai tumse aise gussa hogi!

neha- neha didn't know that gone to krishna ji taani's mom

bharat- haan wo to ek f..f...fl...flower ki tarah hai

rinni- hamesha hasti rehti, weirdly yet cutely smile karti rehti

vicky- kon jaanta tha ki uske iss smile ke peeche kitna dard chupa hua hai

nil- haan yaar how can god be so rude, so harsh to someone?

rey- nahi! god is not harsh towards her because god gave her the sweetest ans most caring brother on the world, no in this universe! hai na swayam? (no response) swayam?(no respose) kuch to bol yaar!

swayam turned towards the gang- kya bolu me rey? kya bolu me tum sabko guys? kya? me to khud apni nazron me gir gaya hoon! ye kahoon tum sabse ki usi caring bhai ne apni behen ka dil tod diya! mene aaj tak usko kabhi hurt nahi hone diya aur pata hai aaj uski aankhon me jo aansu the wo meri wajah se the

usne kaha i hate.. i hate u bhai tab meri duniya tootke bikhar gayi aur pata hai jab usne kaha ki me ab uska wo bhai nahi hoon, usse me pyaar nahi karta to me jiteji mar gaya guys

u know what guys! meri zindegi mein taani se zyada important koi bhi nahi hai! koi bhi nahi! because i love her the most in this world. uske bina meri khushiyon ka koi maayine nahin hai! uske bina me smile nahi kar sakta, uske bina me jee nahi sakta!

taani hai to swayam hai! uske bina mera koi existence hi nahi hai aur naahi me uske bina jeena chahta hoon, wo mere liye sunlight hai! meri khushi, meri hasi, meri neend, mera chain sabkuch hai wo meri.

u know guys, wo meri strength bhi hai aur meri weakness bhi! sirf mujhe hi pata hai kaise maine BB match khela uske bina, lekin wo waha nahi thi par wo mere liye dua maang rahi thi, usne uss din subah mujhe jo dahi-cheeni khilayi bas uske hi dam par me poore jahaan se ladh sakta hoon

how can i do this to her? me ye din kaise bhool sakta hoon?pata hai rey mene aaj tak koi bhi raksha bandhan niss nahi kiya hai! mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai jab taani ne mujhe pehli baar raakhi baandhi thi. i felt like heaven, mujhe aisa laga jaise mujhe duniya ki saari khushiyaan mil gayi

FLASHBACK-

'oh! what a pleasant day is today! is there's anyone's b'day?'

a cute little boy(11 yrs) waked up and said these words because he was feeling like today is something special. he tried to recall that if today is anyones birthday or anniversary or something special about this day, but he can't.

he went to get freshed up. he came and saw at bed side table in his room but there was nothing except his phone and alarm clock on one table and a photo of taayam on another table. he looked around and didn't found the thing he was searching for.

swayam to himself- are yaar ye taani abhi tak nahi aayi, kaha gayi? oh god! i am missing my both the morning dose, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye dono me se ek to milti thi

par aaj to ek bhi nahi mili(slightly disappointed) kahi taani ki tabiyat to kharab nahi ho gayi na! oh god! ye ladki bhi na kabhi apna dhyan nahi rakhti! uff!

he throw the towel on the bed and went outside to ask his mom about taani, on the way swayam was talking to himself

swayam- are aise kaise mere morning dose bhool gayi? zaroor uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi hogi, pata nahi iss ladki ka me kya karoon? par iski yahi harkate to hai jinse mere dil ko sukoon milti hai! uff swayam tujhe usse gussa hona hai,

lekin usse me gussa ho bhi kaise sakta hoon? oh god aapne mujhe itni pyaari sis kyun di jisse me gussa bhi nahi ho sakta! par ab use mujhse kabhi mat cheen na!

as soon as he saw her mom in the hall he ran to her.

swayam's mom- good morning! mera swayu kaisa hai aaj?

swayam- good morning ma! ma taani kaha hai usne apna morning dose bhi nahi diya!

swayam's mom- beta wo to abhi iss waqt pooja ghar me hogi, theek hai beta aap jaao mujhe kuch kaam se bahar jaana hai, bye beta(he kissed his forehead)

swayam- bye ma!

swayam in his mind- are ye to mujhe pehle hi soch lena chahiye tha ki wo wahi par hogi

and there she was a 9 yrs old cute girl decorating her small mandir of krishna ji with marigolds. but something was odd first of all she forgot his morning dose and now why the hell is she decorating the mandir as if there is some special occasion? but he jerked out from his thoughts when he heard taani's voice

taani- hey krishna ji kitni hawa chal rahi hai agar diya bujh gaya to apshagun ho jayega!

he saw she was covering the flame of the diya wth her tiny hands which were not big enough to stop the wind from blowing off the candle.

then suddenly our worried taani saw another pair of tiny hands came to support her. she recognised them and looked towards her bhai who was saying her silently by this act that he will always be there for her no matter what.

as soon as the wind stopped taayam stood up and taani hugged him.

taani- bhai! good morning!

swayam broke the hug and said- haan ab jaake mujhe meri morning dose aadhi poori ho gayi

yes his one morning dose was the hug which taani gave to him every morning and the good morning she would say to him with her melodious voice.

swayam- waise taani aaj aisa kya khaas hai ki tum ye mandir itna saja rahi ho?

taani- are bhai aapko pata nahi ki aaj raksha bandhan hai?

swayam- kya! aaj raksha bandhan hai! i am sorry taani. i am very sorry i forgot this day!

taani- koi baat nahi bhai! par abhi mujhe raakhi baandhne do taaki me paani pee saku!

swayam- kya matlab? tumne abhi tak paani nahi piya? oh god taani tumhe kuch ho jaata to?

taani- nahi abse har raakhi me aapko raakhi baandhe bina me ek boond paani nahi piyungi!

swayam- theek hai to fir me bhi tab tak ek boond paani nahi piyunga jab tak me tumhare haathon se raakhi nahi bandhwa leta!

taani- theek hai

taani came and applied teeka on his forehead showered a little flowers on him and he was feeling very special.

taani- cahliye ab apni kalayi aage kijiye

swayam forwarded his left arm.

taani- uff! are bhai left nahi right!

swayam forwarded his right arm and taani took out a very beautiful raakhi, swayam was mesmerized. she tied it on his kalayi.

he was feeling like as if he was the happiest person on the earth, he was feeling very special, very much loved, cared.

she kept a big plate in front of him which was containing almost all Indian sweets. he never saw so many sweets at a time.

taani- bhai dekh kya rahe ho? choose karo na kaunsa khaaoge?

swayam again looked at all the sweets and chose his favourite

swayam- barfi khilaao

taani smiled and fed him barfi, swayam ate half of it and made taani eat the other half

swayam- taani mere paas tumhare liye ek gift hai!

taani- sach! kya?

swayam- abhi nahi garden me chalo phir bataunga!

they both went to their garden and there taani saw a cute puppy. swayam knew taani loved animals especially puppies.

taani hugged swayam- wow bhai thank u so much, u r the best brother in this world!

taani- aap mujhse ek promise kijye

swayam- kaisa promise?

taani- yahi ki aap hamesha aise hi smile karte rahenge!

swayam- ab ye to tumpe depend karta hai kyunki mere chehre par smile tabhi aati hai jab meri behen smile kari hai so tum kabhi bhi apni ye smile mat khona!

swayam- accha mere 2nd morning dose kaha hai?

taani- aap apne kamre me chaliye me leke aati hoon

swayam went to his room and after some time taani entered with a cup of tea.

yes tea! i know it sounds weird but at that time taani only knew how to make tea and every morning after he freshens up he finds taani with a cup of tae in his room.

but taani was angry, but why?

taani came and kept the tea on the table and picked the wet towel from the bed.

taani- bhai ye kya hai? mene aapse kitni baar kaha hai ki apna room saaf rakhiye lekin nahi aap to meri sunte hi nahi!

swayam- uff! shant behna shant! aur agar tum aise hi mera room saaf kiya karogi to me roz mera room ganda kar doonga

taani hugging swayam- i love u bhai

swayam- i love u too

FLASHBACK ENDS

How was it guys? i know me bohut flashbacks dikha rahi hoon but it shows how deeper their bond was and even now. ok so iss baar no demands. but haan comment karo varna u all know na😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear.
Loved it. Specially rey consoling swayam, taking his side as ever.
And swayam, he s the kind of brother anyone would die to have.
Though, i loved the update but i personally hate you. How dare you made taani cry? D3 me itni mushkil se uski smile returned toh u started making her cry.
I can't see her crying so i hate u for this:@:D
Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 12 years ago

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