Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 32

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Posted: 18 years ago
HEY SARRA THANKS A LOT FOR A LOVELY PART 👏 . AUR SAHI KAHA KI INKO SULANE KE LIYE ITNE BADE GANE KI JARURAT BADI 😆 . THE PART WAS AWESOME DEAR AND THEY WERE LIKE PERFECT PATI-PATNI BEFORE MARRIAGE ONLY 😳 . I WISH KI UNKI SHADI SAHI SALAMAT HO AUR KOI PROBLEM BEECH MEIN NA AAYE 😉 . CONTINUE SOON PLZ....... CAN'T WIAT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECRAE. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg.......waht an awosome part.....ple continue soon.....i just love your ff......cant wait to read more....
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

HEY SARRA THANKS A LOT FOR A LOVELY PART 👏 . AUR SAHI KAHA KI INKO SULANE KE LIYE ITNE BADE GANE KI JARURAT BADI 😆 . THE PART WAS AWESOME DEAR AND THEY WERE LIKE PERFECT PATI-PATNI BEFORE MARRIAGE ONLY 😳 . I WISH KI UNKI SHADI SAHI SALAMAT HO AUR KOI PROBLEM BEECH MEIN NA AAYE 😉 . CONTINUE SOON PLZ....... CAN'T WIAT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECRAE. 😊 😛 😊

thanks a lot fravashi par mera naam sara nahi kiran hei hehehehehe....

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 lol.......safe safe so gaye hehehehehe..shukar hai.....lovedddd the romance awwwwwwww...bechara sujal had to get up everytime hahaha.....yaar i really think that kid is adorable woh karam apna apna wali bachi hai na hehehehe....kuch na bole to kitni cute hai...hahahahaha awwwwwwwww....

continue soon yaar...suba kar wa do kisi tarah hehehe..... 😳
muah luv ya
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kiran jee awesome part loved it gr888 tooooo tooooo gooood continue soooon.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part... 👏....n v sweet 2... 😳 ...do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kahish-rox

thanks a lot fravashi par mera naam sara nahi kiran hei hehehehehe....

😆exactly...!! fravashi.. sara mera naam hai..!!😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
OH I AM SO SORRY I THOUGHT THAT UR NAME WAS SARA. I AM SORRY KIRAN FANTASTIC PART YAAR. WHEN R U CONTINUING. PLZ.........CONTINUE FAST. CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey..i am continuing again...lolz....


Kashish is deep in sleep....when sumone knocks on the door...
she turns her side, putting a pillow over her head....
kashish: subah subah kaun agaya jaganay??? (mumbling)
when the knocks continue kashish gets up exasperated...she looks at the clock
Kashish: GOD!!! abhi to subbah ke 5 bajjay hain...abhi kyun utha rahay hain??
She goes and opens the dooor...sleeepppyyyy...
Gauri: Kashish...itni der laga di...kab se kncok ker rahi hun...
Kashish: Bhabhiiii...ap??itni subah subah....sab theek hai na...(ballon ko bandhte huay n straightening her gown)
Gauri: haan sab theek hai...main to tumhain jagani ayi thi....ao neecche aker kuch khaa lo....(turns)
Kashish: KIAAA??? yeh kehne ke liye...Bhabhi shayed apko pata nahi...subah ke PAANCH bajj rahay hain...
Gauri: haan main janti hun....shayed tum bhul gai ho aj karwa chauth hai...pura din bhuka rehna hai...abhi aker kuch khaa lo...hmm??
She goes away...Kashish is left standing there confused
Kashish: karwa chauth....yeh varat to shadi shuda auratain rkahti hai....main kese....ab Bhabhi ko samjhaun bhi kese.....(she looks at Sujal) iss ki to main...mujhe museebat main daal ker khud chain ki neend so raha hai....huh....ab jana hi parray ga
She goes downstairs jahan Parvati aur Gauri bethe kuch khaa rahay thay...
Parvati: arey acha hua Kashish tum agai....ao bethe...kuch khaa lo...(smiles)
Kashish sits down with a glum face, not eating anything
Gauri: kia hua??? kuch khao na...
Kashish: itni subah subah.....neend ke siva mujhe kuch nahi sujhta....(yawning)
Parvati n gauri laughs
Parvati: tera pehla karwa chauth hai na...iss liye tujhe aadat nahi hai...ahista ahista aadat ho jayegi
Gauri smiles at her
Gauri: acha ab kuch khao...pura din bhuki kesi raho gi....
Kashish starts eating....

Its morningggggggggggg........................

Sujal is deep in sleep....sleeping contently when his cellfone rings...it rings continuosly for 4-5 times when he picks it up....
Sujal: heellooo...(sleepily)
Akshat: oh heelllo ke bache...uth ja...subah ke 10 bajj rahay hain...
Sujal: hmmmm....haan Akshat....tujhe subah subah chain nahi hai....
Akshat: chain kia bechain ho gaya hun main....tujhe itna kuch batana ahia....tu kab araha hai?? (snickers...)
Sujal: Akshat kal nikal jayenge...aj to gari ki servicing ho rahi hogi....(lying down, streches hmself)
Akshat: sahi hai bhai...tu wahan ayaishi ker...yahan meri band bajji hui hai...
Sujal: kyun kia hua????
Akshat: yaar woh Charru to Rohaan ko chorne ka naam hi nahi leti...tu bhi nahi ha...mein to bore ho gaya haun.....soch raha hun aj hi wapis mumbai chala jan...
Sujal:...arey nahi nahi..hum kal arahay hain na...ake tera scene set kerta hun...
Akshat: tu pehle apna to ker le...(laughing)
Sujal: mera to scene set kia on ho ker chaal bhi parra....(smiling to herself while luking at kashish who is sleeping)
Akshat: KIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA???? KAAB?? KAHAN??? KAISEEE??? KHOTEE!!! tu mujhe ab bata raha hai
Sujal laughs
Sujal: batana to bhut kuch hai par ake...
Akshat: theek hai jaldi se aja tu...btw kashish kahan hai???
Sujal: yahiin paas main leti hai...(jaldi se...bites his tongue)
Akshat: KIAAA??? LETTTTIIII HAII?????? Sujaaaaaaaaaaalllll...yeh chakar kia hai???? dekh...woh shareef gharanay ki larki hai...kahiin kuch aissa waisa na ker dena ke agle saal to bina shadi ke papa bann gaya ho....(laughs)
Sujal: Shut up Akshat....aissa kuch nahi hai....tujhe main sab kuch wahan aker batata hun...ok....
Akshta: haan haan theek hai...
Sujal: take care...aur haan shaam ko meri anjali aur krippa se baat ekrwa dena....byee...
Akshat: yeah yeah byyee...
Sujal switches off the phone and lies back....but sleep duznt cum to him...he keeps on luking at kashish and dreaming abt her...woh uss ke mathay se baal hatanay hi wlaa hota hai keh kashish slowly opens her eyes...
woh sujal ko dekh ker smile kerti hai...aur halki si angrai leti hei heheh....
kashish: goood morning...(sleepily)
sujal:good morning....bhut der ho gai hai jaldi uth jao..(clambers out of his bed)
kashish: kis ka phone tha??? (innocently)
sujal: akshat ka...puch raha tha keh hum kab loutenge...
kashish: wahan sba bhut pareshan ho rahay honge na..(worriedly)
sujal: koi pareshan nahi ho raha aur tumhain bbhi pareshan hone ki ziada zarurat nahi hai..(smiles) main fresh ho ker ata hun...
kashish watches him go...and smiles...tabhi sujal ka cell bajta hai....kashish pehle to nahi utahti par jab bajta rehta hai to woh bina dkehe utha leti hai..
kashish: hello...
a girl answers from the other side...
girl: ummm....is this mr.sujal garewal's number..?
kashish: yes...
girl: can i please speak to mr.sujal garewal???
kashish: whoz this?
girl: ummmm....
ussi waqt sujal bahir nikalta hai...
sujal: kaun hai kashish??
kashish: pata nahi...koi larki hai....(raises her eyebrows) tumse baat kerna chahti hai...
sujal: larkii??? to tum phone kyun pakre huay ho..idhar do na....(haath aggay kerta hai par kashish peeche kerti hai haath...ussi waqt she sees ke call drop ho gai hai...woh suja kee saath acting keti hai)
kashish: nahi dungi...pehle batao yeh larki koun hai???(mobile peeche kerte huay)
sujal: arey mere pass kia india ki sab larkion ki directory hai jo min bataun kaun hai...mujhe baat kerne do,....
kashish: no waayyy....tum isse kaise jante ho???
sujal: janta???? kashish main to yeh bhi nahi janta keh yeh larki kaun hai...
kashish: hmmm....abhi jante nahi...kal mujhe bhi pehchanay se inkar ker do ge...
sujal: kashish...dkeho mazak na karo...phone idhar do...(haath aggay kerte huay...
kashish: nahi dungi...(peeche hote huay)
sujal: kashish...plz...phone idhar do...(uss ki taraf bharte huay.)
kashish: maine kaha na...nahi dungi....(hanste hauy peeche ho rahi hoti hai...)
sujal: kashish woh phone per hai...plz idhar do phone...(tez tez uss ki tarag bharte huay)
kashish: pehle yeh batao tum mujhse pyaar kerte ho ya nahi...(usse chertey cherte bolti hai)
sujal: kashish...kia mazak hai...plz phone idhar do...(now he has cornered kashish to a wall)
sujal: ab kia karogi...phone to dena hi parega...
kashish: phone ka tum kia karoge???
sujal: kia matlab???
kashish: call to kab ki drop ho gai...(cheekily)
sujal: matlab...??
kashish just smiles
sujal: tum mujhe ullu bana rai thi...
kashish: banay banaye ullu ko bannaay ki kia zarurat???
sujal: kia kaha tumne...(comes close to her)
kashish aik dumm se uss ka bazu peeche ker ke apne apko chura ker bhagti hai..sujal runs after her...
puray kamre main bhagam bhaag machayi hoti..kashish bed ki uss side per...sujal dusri...kashish usse cushion maar ker bhagti hai....hehehhe...matlab pagal ho gaye hote hain donon....
sujal runs after kashish...aur after some time kashish bed ke upar chalang maar ker bhaagne lagti hai jab sujal usse peeche se pakar ker bed per girata hai aur khud uss ke upar roll ho ker lean ker raha hota hai....
kashish: ooooowww sujal...utho na...(ussey hatany lagti hai)
sujal: kia keh rahi thi tum???
kashish: kuch nahi...sujal plz hatttoooo...
sujal: main ullu hun???
kashish: (laugjing) nahi nahi...maine aisa kab kaha...
sujal: tum ne kaha...maine khud suna...(laughing as well)
kashish: acha baba keh dia sorry mauf ker do...ab hatto na..
sujal: kyun....mujhe to yeh pose bhtu pasand hai..(winks at her)
kashish: shut up sujal....badtamizz...
sujal: arey iss main badtamizi ki kia baat hai...yeh to pyaar hai....
kashish: apna pyaar apne pass rakho aur filhaal mujhe jannay doo.....(hatany ki koshish ekrta hai)
sujal: tumhain aik baat pata hai kashish???
kashish: kia??
sujal: India ki 99.9% population shadi ke baad pyaar kerti hai...hum un 0.1% mainse hain jo shadi se pehle pyaar kerte hain...to hum kitne special huey na...
kashish: yeh kiss ne kaha??? (shakal chirate huay_
sujal: main ne....aur kiss ne...
kashis: (laughs) sujal tum pagal ho...
sujal: pagal hun na ho....hum special zarur hain...pyaar ke mamlay mai....
kashish: special ka to pata nahi...par special case zzarur ho tum...
sujal: (holds her hands and pins her down to the bed) kia kaha tum ne???
kashish: kuch nahi baba main mazak ker rahi thi...
sujal: iss mazak ki tumhain bhut bharri raqam chukani pareey gi darllllliiinnnggg.....(lolz paindu heheh....winks at her)
he comes near her...is abt to kiss her when..
kashish: sujal..AUNTIEE!!!
sujal aik dumm se uss ke upar se hatt ker seedha hota hai...darwazay ki taraf dekhta hai par wahan koi nhi hota...
in the meanwhile kashish gets up and runs to the bathroom...
sujal: kashish tum...bahir niklo...niklo bahir phir tumhain dekhta hun...
kashish laughs while he smiles...hits himself lightly on his head and smiles...goes out of the room....

When Kashish comes downstairs, she is looking stunning in a red coloured sarri all with the mangalsutar and sindoor hehhhe....
Sujal glances up and then again....looks intently at her...smitten with her beauty...
Parvati and Sujal are standing together....tawking...while Baa is sitting down as well....
Kashish: good morning Auntie....(smiling)
Parvati: Good morning.....Kashish...
Kashish: sorry woh thora late ho gaya uthne main..(embarassed)
Parvati: nahi nahi its ok....
Just then Gauri comes out of the kitchen...
Gauri: Sujal...ao nashta ker lo...tumhara nashta tayar hai...ajao Shreya....
She puts the food on the table and smiles...Sujal, Shreya and Kashish go to the table
Sujal beth ker khanna plate mein dalta hai...Shreya also strats eating...
Kashish aur Gauri bass table per bethe baatain ker rahy hotey han...ahista ahista...
Sujal upar dkehta hai at kashish
Sujal: arey Kashish...tum kuch khaa kyun nahi rhai???
Kashish: nahi sujal main...
Sujal: arey lo na...bhut achay parathay banay hain...(dusron ke ghar ja ker over kese ho jatay hain koi iss se seekhe hehehehhehehhe)
Kashish: nahi...mujhe bhuk nahi hai...tum khao...
Sujal: looo!!!! tum larkiyan na...(looks at his plate and starts eating)
teenon gauri,kashish aur shreya akhati bolti hai
Teen: HUM LARKIAN KIAAA???
Sujal: (looks up at their glaring faces) kuch nahi....bhut...bhut achi hoti ho...i...i lovveee gurls...i think girls are....welll....girlss!!
they all laugh as he is embarassed....
jus then Shiv comes in....
Shiv: Gauri...mujhe late ho raha hai..main nikalta hun....
Gauri: kitne bajjay ayenge ap?? (hopefully luks at him)
Shiv: aj to aik client ke saath bhut important meeting ha....raat ho jayegi....
Parvati: (hits him lightly on his head) tu aj ke din bhi ghar late ayega..?
Shiv: Maa main kia karun..
Parvati: kia karun ka kia matlab...aj karwa chauth hai( sujal aik dumm kashish ko dekhta hai) Gauri ne teri lambi umar ke liye varat rakha hai aur tu...
Shiv: Maa main...
Parvati: nahi...aj koi bahana nahi...aj to tujhe jaldi ghar ana hi hoga...
Gauri: Maa...agar koi zaruri kaam hai to jannay dijiye na inhein...(shiv luks at er and smiles) main intezar ker lugi in ka...
Shiv: nahi Gauri...Maa sahi keh rahi hai....main aj jaldi ajaun ga....tum apna khyal rakhna huh??? mai chalta hun...bye Maa...bye Sujal...
everyone says bye to him....Gauri sits down again...Sujal constantly Kashish ko dkeh raha hota hai...
Sujal: (whispers to shreya) hey Shreya...tumhain kia lagta hai...Kashish ne aj varat rkaha hai kia??
Shreya: obviouslyy!!! aj ke ddin harr suhagan apne pati ke liye varat rakhti hai...unhon ne bhi rakah hoga...
Sujal: (thhinks) par kashish aur meri to shadi nahi hui....(to Shreya) aheeme.....Shreya...kia woh larkian bhi yeh varat rakhti hain jinki shadi na hui ho???
Shreya: haan...kuch larkian rkahti to hai...par ap kyun puch rahey ho???
Sujal: aisse hi...(thinks) kia sach much Kashish ne mere liye varat rakha hoga????
Just then Gauri leaves as Parvati calls her....and Shreya goes to her room...Sujal looks at kashish jo atlaaassst Sujal ko dekhti hai
Kashish: aisse kia dekh rahey ho???
Sujal: yehi dekh raha hun keh aisse tayar ho ker agar tum roz mere gahr main mujhe nazar ayi to.....mera to kaam ho jayega...
Kashish smiles
Kashish: pagaall....
Sujal: ummm...Kashissshhh...(acting kerte huay)
Kashish: haan???
Sujal: yeh Bhabhi ne kaunsa varat rakha hai aj???
Kashish: karwa chauth ka....
Sujal: Ooooohh!!! achhaaa....bhut achi rasam hai nahi??
Kashish: hmmm...
Sujal: lekin bechari auraton ko bhook bhut lagti ho gi...nahi???
Kashish: haan....
Sujal: wese tumne kabhi yeh varat rakha hai kia???
Kashish luks up
Kashish: kia matlab...?
Sujal: ohhh!!! main to bhul hi gaya tha..yeh varat to sirf shadi shuda auratain rkahti hai...theek hai bhayi...(looks down at his plate and eats)
Kashish: nahi to..kunwari larkian bhi rakh sakti hain...
Sujal: hmmm...
Kashish: aur tum saaf saaf kyun nagi puchte jp puchna chahte ho...(smiling)
Sujal looks up
Sujal: main...??? nahi main to kuch nahi puchna chahta...
Kashish: Sujal...tum na!! haan baba maine rakha hai yeh varat...tumhari lambi umar ke liy....
Sujal: meine pucha kai???? (acting ker raha hota hai)
Kahsish: SUJALLL!!!!
Sujal stars laughing
Sujal: cumon yaar...mazak ker raha tha...par Kahsish...iss sab ki kia zarurat...
Kashish: zarurat hai Sujal...yeh rasmein humare pyaar ko aur mazbut kareingi...
Sujal smiles....puts a hand on hers...
Sujal: thanksss....
Kashish: (smiles) its ok....aur behtar hoga tum mere samne khana na khao...mujhe bhuk lagti hai...(makes a cute face)
Sujal laughs and so does Kashish...


thats it for today...do tell me how it was...lolz.....commentttttt pppl plzzz...lurve kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwww sooooo sweet 😳 . hey kiran wonderful part yaar 👏 . you write very well by putting all the emotions,feelings with it 😉 . thanks for such a nice part ⭐️ . bechari kashish ko aaj bhuka rehena padega but that showed their immense love for each other 😳 . really waiting for karvachaut ki raat 😉 . so continue soon plzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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