Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran just read ur story it is just wonderful. i loved it. Pls post he next part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kiran?? kahan gayee yaar... continue toh keroo?? 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran kaha ho tum cont karo naaa pls 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiranji kahaan ho... ro ro ke haal behaal hain... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg pleeeasee continue. i FINALLY found this story again. and i loved it. please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Kiraaaaaan plzzzzz cont soon yar 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
sorrry looggoooo....main sach main bhutttt sorry hun.... 😕 ...tests chal rhaya tahy...chalo abhi post kerit hun!!!! 😳 ,...thanks to alll who waited!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok so heres the story....

Kashish is sitting at Garewal's mansion....Sujal is looking at her constantly and smiling..she is ignoing him..aur Akshat ke saath tu tu main main chal rahi thi...itni dair main aik awaz ati hai...
Voice: Sujal Puttarr....
Sujal turns aorund to see a fat old person standing there...its his Dada jee....played by Bauji of KA...saath main Dida too...
Sujal stands up and goes over
Sujal: BAUJII!!!!
he hugs him..and then meets Dida....Bauji slaps him on his back
Bauji: oye khotay de puttar....aini dair naal jagaya hai????
Sujal: Bauji woh....(looks at Kashish ssheepishly who is laughing)...neend arahi thi...
Dida: yeh to iss ki bachpan ki aadat hai..aik baar so jaye to uthnay ka naam nahi leta...
Sujal: ummm....woh Bauji...ap Akshat ko to jante hain...(points at Akshat)
Akshat comes over and meets them
Akshat: Sujal...emin iss ghar main pehli baar nahi aya..obviously jante hain yaar...tu ziada over na ho...(puts an arm on his shoulder)...(uss ke kaan main bolta hai): beta larki dekh ker coonphooseee nahi hotay!
Sujal: shut up...(uss ka haath hatata hai)
Kashish is smiling..she comes and takes Bauji's and Dida's ashirwaad....
Dida: aj itnay arsay baad ai hai..kaan gumm thi tyu???
Kashish: sorry Dida...(holds her ears)actually main boutique ke sath bhut busy thi...
Sujal: boutique...keri boutique???
Kashish: ap chup rhaain gay to pata chalya ga na doosre insan ke barray main...
Sujal: apko sunanay ke liye to main poori zindgai chup reh sakta hoon...(winks at her)
Bauji: chal oh...meri bachi ke saath mazak na karna...yeh to meri choti si beti hai...
Sujal: kia Bauji...pehle Mumma ab ap...lagta hai yahan humari ahmiat hi nahi...
Akshat: ahmiat achay logon ki hoti hai..tere jaisay third class logon ki nahi....(laughs)
Sujal: mere se maar na kha lena...9glares)
Akshat: acha sorry...(seham sa jata hai...haye cutte)
Krippa comes in.....
Kripaa: MAIN TAYAR HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!! (she says this from upstairs)
Neechey chal ke arahi hoti hai....Sujal is looking at her....aur Kahsish uss ke saath kari hoti hai
Sujal: (whispers to her) dekhna abhi girray gi...
Kashish looks at him conphoosed...Sujal nods at Krippa...
Krippa barray mazay se neechey arahi hoti hai...aik dumm uss ka pan slip hota hai...dhraaam ker ke neechey girti hai...ziada zorr se nahi...everyone laughs..
Krippa: AAAAAAAAANNNNN>>>>!!!! (cries) BHAIIII!!!
SUjal goes to her and makes her stnad....
Sujal: kitni baar kaha hai dkeh ekr chala karo...
Krippa: aaannn...mujhe lag rahi hai....aaaahhh...bhaaaiii....
Sujal: ab bhaaaiiii kia karay...dehaan kia karo na..chalo ab beth jao...
She sits down on the sofa..evrryone else gets busy in their work...
Krippa: emre sarray kapray gandya ho bgaye...uff...
Kashish: theek to hain...
Krippa: matti lag gai hai...main change ker ke ati hun..
Sujal: Krippa...tumhain aj SHAAM ko ajan hai dawat per...dobara gayi change kerne to kal subah tak nahi aogi...
Krippa: Bhai....plzzz....
Sujal: jana hai to abhi jao shopping pe....
Krippa: acha theek hai...um....Kashish Di...ap chalo gi mere saath?
Kashish: MAIN???
Kripa: haan na..ap meri help kerna...
Kashish: nahi main busy...
Krippa: no no no..ab ap chal rhai ho...ok...
Kashish: (gives in) ok...baba....
Krippa: yeaaahhh..u r the ebst!!!
Sujal looks at tehm btoh and smiles...tabhi andar tulsi jee ati hau....

Bass bhut ho gaya...neeend arahi hai,...main likhoon gi kal..ok tc..byeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran dear shukar hain aapne story aage continue kii..me very glad you continued... 😃
now coming to the part it was very cute.. very damn sweet....tooo good... i liked it very much... 👏
par dear the part was too small... 😭 please continue soon & please post a big part.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran thank god u continued. Sujal is so sweet.

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