Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 11

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thanks for commenting....
Episode 9....


Kashish walks over to the Garewals Mansion...its a huge, beautiful house....
Woh darwaze ki taraf chalti jati hai aur grden main dekhte dekhte apne bachpan ke din yaad kerti hai...woh bachpan jiss mian kashish, anjali,sujal,krippa, sumeet, charru mill ker khela kerte thay...She smiles and then goes in
She walks into the lounge..where Veena is sitting
Kashish: Namaste Aunty....
Veena: arey Kashish tum...kaisi ho...ao ao...betho...
Kashish hugs her and smiles
Kashish: main bhut khush hoon keh ap log wapis agaye hain...
Veena: hum bhi....acha yeh batao...gharr per sab kaisay hain?
Kashish: ghar per sba theek hain...Mumma ne ap logon ki khair khabar poochne ke liye hi behja hai....
Veena: acha acha....Tulsi jee kaisi hain?
Kashish: bilkul theek hain....aur ap logon se milne ko betaab....isi liye aj shaam ka khanna ap logon ka humare ghar....
Veena: arey nahi....
Kashish: bass Aunty...ab aur nahi....keh diya na...ab to khana humare ghar hi hoga...
Veena smiles...Kashish looks around
Kashish: yeh Bauji abhi takk wapis nahi aye??
Veena: agaye hain...fresh ho rahay hain...
Just then a guy come sout ofthe room...
Akshat: Mumma woh main...(stops at seeing Kashish)
Kashish looks at him...
Veena: arey Akshat...dekho to kaun aya hai...
Akshat: kkaun???
Veena: yeh Kashish hai....Sujal ki bachpan ki dost....(in bachpan SK were good friends)...main abhi ayi....(she leaves)
Akshat: (murmurs) yeh salle Sujal ka bachpan to barra rangeen tha...
Kashish: jee???
Akshat: nahi nahi kuch nahi.....Hi...i am Akshat...(holds out his hand)
Kashish: Hi...i am Kashish...(takes his hand)
Akshat: bhtu pyara naam hai apka......
Kashish: flirt ker rahey ho???
Akshat: arey humari itni himmat kahan....jo ap jaisi khubsurat larki se flirt kerein...
Kashish: ap haath chorna pasand kerein gay?
Akshat leaves her hand....and smiles
Kashish: to ap yahiin rehte hain???
Akshat: haan....main to yahii rehta hoon...yehi mera ghar hai...aur yehi meri family
Kashish: ap ka ziker kabhi pehle nahi sunna....
Akshat: ajji zikar to whaan chirr jata hai jahan hum hazir hote hain....waisay apko dekh ker aik shayer yaad agaya hai....Arz hai..
Kashish: irshaad....(smiling at his attitude)
Akshat: Pari ho afsran ho
Bholi ho nadan ho
Kion ghamon se anjaan ho
Sahiba ho meherbaan ho
Meri izzat mera maan ho
Ya phir mera hi naam ho
Kon ho tum? (holds out his hands as if bhut barra shayer marra hai)
Kashish makes a face and smiles
Akshat: kon ho tum kon ho tum...Wah wah wah.!!!!
Kashish: abhi to bataya tha...Kashish....
Akshat: nacheez ki kuch tareef hi ker dijiye...
Kashish: tareef to un ki ki jati hai jo tareef ke qabil hote hain....ap toooo...khair chorein yeh sba.....main abhi ayi...
Akshat is lefft standing humiliated...hehehhe...
Akshat: Akshat beta...aj pehli baar koi larki tujhe snub ker ke gayi hai....barre kaam ki larki hai....interesting...(he goes out, similing)
Kashish: (to herself) jahan takk mujhe yaad hai....Anjali ka kamra corridor ki left side per hai...

She moves up the stairs and goes into the corridor..she is sure that it is Anjali's room....
SHe knocs once....when there is no response she opens the door....
Darwaza kholti hai to dekhti hai keh aik cute handsome sa larka sheeshay ke samne khara apni shirt ke buttons band ker raha hai...
She looks into the mirror to see who it is...Jab larka apna sarr uthata hai to uss ki hawaiyan urr jati hai...yeh to wohi Airport wala badtameez tha
Sujal looks up to see: (thinks) zarur woh Akshat ullu ka patha hoga.....ab isse kia musseebat hai...
He looks up to see a beautiful standing there...
Sujal: (thinks) arey yeh to wohi pagal larki hai...
He turns around...
Kashish: TUMMM!!!!!!
Sujal: Tummmm......yahan?????
Kashish: OMG!!!!! tum yahan kya ker rahay ho?
Sujal: main woh....
Kashish: janti thi main......tum chor dakoo hi ho..ab iss ghar main bhi koi wardat kerne aye ho....(points a finger at him)....lekin iss baar tum nahi bacho gay...main abhi bulati hoon sab ko...chor chor choooorr!!! (starts shouting)
SUjal at once puts a hand on her mouth, shuts the door and pushes her against the door...they are only 2 inches away
Sujal: yeh kia kar rahi ho tum???
Kashish: khoroo bhujee.....(trying to speak)
Sujal: KIA????
SHe pulls his hand from her face
Kashish: choro mujhe....
Sujal: tum pagal ho gai ho kia...i mena....mazeed magal ho gayi ho...pagal to waisya hi ho...
Kashish: shut up!!! just tell me...tum yahan kia kar rahye ho?
Sujal: kyun Anjali mujhey dekh ker hairan ho gayi?(raises his eyebrows and smiles)
Kashish: Anjalii my Fooott!!!
She stamps her foot hard..aur bechara heel wala joota zameen ke bajaye ja ker lagta hai Sujal ke paon per
Sujal: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!
Kashish: ab tum kyun chilla rahay ho....????
Sujal: mera paon....
he limps over to the bed...and sits down...to see his foot...its bruised
Kashish: Ha-Ha-Ha!!! ho agyi tumhari chutti....
Sujal: arey ajeeb larki ho...udhar Airport per jaan nahi chor rahi thi...ab yahan ghar takk pohanch gayi....
Kashish: main tumhare peeche nahi ayi....
Sujal: ab yeh matt kehna keh main umhare aggay agaya hoon....
Kashish: Shut up!!!
Sujal: aur kuch bolna ata hai....
Kashish: Rahul i said Shut up!!! (beydehani main)
Sujal: finally...matlab tum accept ker rahi ho keh main Rahul hoon....(gte sup and wlaks to her) Oh Anjali...maine tumhain kitna miss kiya.....(holds her shoulders)
She shrugs her shoulders to get off his hands
Kashish: miss kia...bhaar main jao...mujhe koi farq nahi parta...maine to aissya hi Rahul bol dia...
Sujal: koi baat nahi Kaushalya hota hai...
Kashish: dont call me Kaushalyaa!!!
Sujal: to kia buloan...Anjali bulanay deti nahi ho...Kaushalya bulaon to burra manti hoon...janu kahoon???
Kashish: what rubbish....mujhe tumse baat nahi kerni...
Sujal: lekin mujhe kerni hai...
Kashish: saaf saaf batao tum yahan kya kar rahay ho?
Sujal: mere hi ghar main kharray ho ker mere hi kamray main mujh se yeh sawal poochne wali tum kaun hoti hoon?
Kashish: tumhara gahr....tumhara kamra...kia baqwas kar rahye ho...
Sujal: baqwas yeh hai madam...keh yeh mera gahr hai...aur main Sujal Garewal...apke bachpan ka dost....Kashish...
Kashish looks at him shocked
Kashish: tum.......Sujall???....ho hi nahi sakta...
Sujal: kyun...shakal main koi defect agayi?
Kashish: nahi harkaton main....woh Sujal..bachpan wala...to bhut shareef hota tha....
Sujal looks at her and smiles
Sujal: waqt ke saath badal gaya...jaise ke tum...Anjali...oooppss...Kashish
Kahsish smiles...unable to beliee....
Kashish: mujhe abhi bhi yaqeen nahi ho raha tum...Sujal....
Sujal just laughs....
Akshat is standinga t the door....he opens it and comes inside...
Akshat: ajji kar lijiye yakeen....hum guarantee dete hain...
Kashish looks at him
Kashish: tum phir se???
Akshat: arey....ap to burra maan gayi....
Kashish: apki baatain hi kuch aissi hain...
Sujal: matlab tum Akshat per bhi apna ghussa....nikal chuki ho
Kashish just looks at him and nods
Sujal: maan gaye apko...
Kashish: mujhe to baad main maniye ga...pehle khud ko to manwa lijiye..
Sujal: jeee????
Kashish: jee!!!! main ab chalti hoon...ap ki tarah harr waqt free nhai hoti na...
Makes a face and smiles...then turns to Akshat
Kashish: waisay ap kia guarantee den gay in ki...apki to khud i guarantee nahi hai!!
She smiles and leaves....
Akshat: yaar.....yeh cheez kahan se pakri...
Sujal: bhut akkar hai iss main...(folds his arms)
Akshat: arey to tu kuch kamm hai...
Sujal: lagta hai bandobast kerna parray ga...iss ki akkar ka...
Akshat: yaar jo bhi ho...larki haath se nahi janni chhaiye...
Sujal: tu bass dekhta ja...(puts an arm on Akshat's shoulders)....keh tera yeh dost iss loomri ko kaisay seedha kerta hai.....
Akshat: tu na....kabhi nahi badle ga....ulllllluuu da patha!!!!!
Sujal looks at the door from which Kashish left while Akshat laughs...

To...kaisa tha??? yeh doosri mulaqat thi...ab dkehte hain...Sujal ka kia plan hai...Kashish ko kaise seedha kere ga.....ab kia hoga...khoob sarri masti...commentofy...lub Kiran!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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eheheh acah meri ma khushalya hehehehe....fit je fit hehehe ullu da phata hehehehe......very nice meeting...lolx...akshat and kashish itne ache lagta hain saath hehehehe.....kahin sujal ko unke bech ka villian na bana dena hahahahaha.... 😆 😆 😆 ...chalo continue soon...lombri ko seedha karna hai hehehe....well done 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
😉 bass farayyy...tum dekhti jao...kaun hai villain yeh to phir kabhi bataon gi...anyways.... 😃 thanks for commenting...and yeah.....iss loomri ko to aissa seedha kerein ge tum parhti raho bass!!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran a very very damn nice part...bohat bohat bohat zyada mazaa aaya mujhe yeh part padke.. 👏
sujal ,kashish ki dusari mulaqat was shoooooo cute & sweet.... 😳
i hope sujal , kashish become friend's soon..aur unke dil mein ek dusare ke liye kuch kuch hone lage... 😉 ab please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey Kiran dear Simply Superb.... 👏
just too good.... 👏 njoyed reading a lot.... 😛
do cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok...great...thanks for commenting!!!

Episode 10

Sujal and Akshat are discussing Kashish in one room....in the mean while...Kashish walks over to Anjali's room..that is next to Sujal's
She again knocks the door and thsi time..a voice comes from inside...Come In...
Kashish happily opens the door to see Anjali sitting on her bede, reading a novel...
Anjali: arey Kashish tum...ao na betho...
Kashish walks over and sitsd won and smiles
Kashish: kaisi ho tum?
Anjali: main bilkul theek...tum sunao...tumhai life kaisi ja rahi hai?
Kashish: waisi hi hai....purani sarri hui ghitti pitti zindagi
Anjali laughs...
Anjali: tum janti ho...main to tumhain pehchaan hi anhi payi thi...tum pehle se bhi bhut ziada khubsurat ho agyi ho...
Kashish: hmmm.....lekin tum bhi to badal gayi ho...
Anjali: waqt ke saath saath sab badal jata hai....
Kashish: sab se barra change to yeh hai keh tum sarri pehnanany lagi ho..
Anjali laughs
Anjali: yaar....bass yeh sab choro...aur apni sunao....kaisi hai tumhari zindagi????
Kashish: tu kyun meri zindagi ke peeche parr gai hai....
Anjali: arey maine socha shayed koi mill gaya ho...
Kashish: jiss din mille ga tujhe bata doon gi..tu apni suna...tujhe koi milla...
Anjali: kia sunaon yaar.....zindagi ki uljhanon main kuch aisi parr gai hoo....kuch samaj nahi ata....
Kashish: kia matlab....
Just then Krippa enters
Krippa: Di dekho na mere kapron ke saath ka dupatta nahi mill raha....oh hi Kashish Di!!!
Kashish: Hi Krippa...kaisi ho tum???
Krippa: aik dum first class.....kisi ne bataya nahi ap ayi hui hain warna main to bhaaaaag ker apke pass ajati...
Kashish: tum bilkul nahi badli...ussi tarah hansti muskarti hui Krippa ho..
Krippa sits down on a cushion, folding her legs beneath her
Krippa: haan an.....hanste khelte zindagi kitni achi guzarti hai...koi mujhse pooche...
Kashish: acha hai...hamesha hansti raha karo...
Krippa: acha ap yeh sab choro...mujhe batao...keh Sumeet Bhaiya kaisey hain????
Kashish: hmmm...tumhare Sumeet Bhaiya bilkul theek hain...aur un ki better half bhi...
Krippa: what? he got married??????? (surprised)
Kashish: married? arey ab to papa banany wallay hain...
Krippa: Woowww.......coool....i want to meet her....ur Bhabhi....
Kashish: haan haan sham ko mill lena...tum sab ki dawat hai humarey ghar...
Krippa: good good...aur woh Charru....Charru kaisi hai?
Kashish: waisi hi hai....athletic, confident and laraka....(laughs)
Krippa: mujhe bhut excitement ho rahi hai sab se milne ki...(gets up)
Anjali: kahan ja rahi hai....
Krippa: tayari kerne....shaam ko dinner hai na...
Anjali: haan lekin abhi se????
Krippa: Di...ap to janti ho mujhe tayar hone main kitna time lagta hai...and then i should look perfect....c ya later byee!!!
She moves out of the room and Kashish n Anjali laugh
Just then Akshat enters
Akshat: kia baat hai....barre khsuh nazar arahey hain?
Kashish looks at him and sighs
Kashish: ap yahan bhii???
Akshat: ajji kia karain...ap main hai hi kuch aissi kashish keh hum khichay challay atay hain...(winks)
Anjali: AKIII!!! Stop filrting with her....
Akshat laughs....
Anjali: Kashish...yeh hai Akshat...mera dost aur iss ghar ka doosra beta...
Kashish: rehne do Anjali...in ko to khoob achi tarah se janti hoon main...barray shayarana mizaj hai in ka...
Akshat: bass ap ki tawajoh chahta hoon....arz kia hai...
Anjali: No Akshat plz...humain tumhare ghatya shayer nahi sunanaye....
Akshat: kamaal hai..matlab talent ki to koi qadar hi nahi...
Kashish: Talent??? (raises her eyebrows)
Sujal enters at that very moment
Sujal: arey tum kia jano Kaushalya...hum kia kia kar saktay hain...(puts an arm around Akshat and laughs)
Kashish: stop calling me Kaushalya...my name is Kashish...
Sujal: hmmm...janta hoon...lkein tumhain Kaushalya ziada suit kerta hai....kyun Akshat???
Akshat: arey naam main kia rakha hai...hum to in ki khubsurati ke asshiq hain!!! (sighs)(puts a hand on his heart hehhe)
Anjali: Akshat plzzzz...stop it...aur Bhai...ap jante hain Kashish ko???
Sujal: Anjali...janta hoon? main to inhain bohaaaaatttt achiiii tarah se janta hoon......
Anjali: aissa kia???
Sujal: hmmm....iss Kaushalya se meri mulaqat.....ooopss Kashish se....Airport per hui thi...
Anjali looks at both, confused
Anjali: Airport per....
Sujal: haan...aur aisi mulaqat jo zindagi bharr yaad rahegi...kyun? (raises his eyebrwws at Kashish)
Kashish stands up...
Kashish: yaad to tab rahegi na jab main bhoolne doongi....lekin uss mulaqat ka hisaab abhi lena hai...
Sujal: hissab lene ke liye himmat ki zarurat hai...aur ap main to...kuch kamm lagti hai....
Kashish: dekhi kahan hai apne meri himmat????
Sujal: chalain dekh len gay...jahan itna dekh lia to...yeh bhi sahi...
Kashish: haan haan...zarur dekhiye ga...kyunki main tumhain wh waqt to bhoolne doongi nahi...to annay walay waqt ka intezar kero...
She walks by...but Sujal stops her way
Sujal: hum to harr uss gharri ka intezar kerte hain....jab apka nizara hota hai!!!!
Kashish looks at him....and he looks at her.....(background: Fanna wlaa....subhanallahhh!!!!)
Kashish smiles at once....
Kashish: ap bass dekhte jaiye...kaisay kaisay nazare hotay hain!!!!
Sujal: humain intezar rahega uss waqt ka...
Anjali: tumm log kia baatain le ker beth gaye...muje to kuch samajh nanhi araha!!!!
Sujal: Anjali....tumhari yeh loomri dost....
Kashish: Excuse me!!!
Sujal: i mean pagal dost....
Kashish: do u mindd??????
Sujal: (looks at ehr) no i dont.....ofcourse not...
Kashish: (fuming with anger) mein tumhain dekh loongi...
Sujal: shauq se....
Kashish: tum apne ap ko samajhte kia ho?
Sujal: Sujal Garewal??? (cheekily)
Kashish: main tumhara woh hashar karoon gi tumhain tumhari nanni yaad dila doongi....
Sujal: nanni to...Palanpur main hoti hai...mujhe yaad hai...
Kashish: u r impossible!!!!!
Sujal: no...who said that to u....i am Sujal...not impossible....(grinning)
Kashish: AGHHH!!!!
Sujal: arey baap re....tum to katati bhi ho....mujhe laga sirf cheekti ho...
Kashish: i will not let u go!!!
Sujal: where to???
Kashish stamps her feet in anger
Sujal: arey arey arey...ye kia...tiles toot jayengi aissay paon patkho gi to...tututuut!!!!
Kashish gives him an angry look and goes towards te stairs
Anjali: ufffo...Bhai...yeh kia kiya...dekha naraz ho gayi...
She goes behind Kashish to pacify her
Akshat is going mad with laughter
Akshat: tu nahi sudhre ga!!!
Sujal: kaisi rahi???
Akshat: fit fit!!!
Sujal: ab tu dekh...main iss ko kaisa seedha kerta hoon....
Akshat: yaar waisay larki kamaal ki hai...jannay nahi denhi chahiye....
Sujal: tujhe kia lagta hai..main chor doon ga isse......isse to kabhi nahi chorunga...
Akshat slaps him on his back...
Akshat: beghairat ka beghairat hi rehna tu...pehan da takka!!!!

HAHAHHA...ok enuff.....Sk ki alrayi jharap...dkehte hain dinner per kia hoga.....commentofy...and thanks for commenting....lub u all....kiran
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yaar muje nayi nayi galiyan na sikya kar hehehehe...pehn ka taakaa hahahaha...wah jje wah jee...i mean subahanallaah hahahaha......chal ab agaye likhio.....aur larai bahut maza aya..me waiting for the dinner...i hope udhar kripa aur angad ki bhi kuch aisi hi mulaqat rahe ...hehehe...kavya kahan hai? hahahahahahaha.....ok continue soon 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
great parts 😊
very very funny
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 sujal n kash bit was fantastic and sooo funnnni 👏 sujal is sooo cheeeky!!!!! continue sooon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran a very mast part...very damn coolllll.... 👏
sujal , kashish ki ladayi is sooooooo very cute & sweettttt....... 😳 i hope yeh ladayi jaldi se pyaar mein badal jaye... 😉
ab mujhe dekhna hain ki kashish kya karegi aur sujal uska jawaab kaise dega......mazaa aayega... 😆 please post the next part soon me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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