Tangled in LOVE (RTMC FF)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A warm hello to all my dear buddies 😊

We all bid a goodbye to 2012 and welcome 2013 with open arms and with big smiles, like this 😃

Last year I've introduced two stories of the charismatic couple Rajat & mugdha and you all gave a positive and loving comments for that THANKS A LOT... 😊

Today is the start of this new and had a thought of introducing a fresh and brand new story of RTMC.

So here I'm back with one more RTMC FF. I know, I know'. My earlier two stories are hanging in mid-way and I'm very lazy in terms of giving updates but still I'm trying my hand one more time with one more RT-MC story.


I'm madly in love with this charismatic couple and will remain one always and can't stop myself. We all are missing them like anything and these stories are like Life-support system for us, where we visualize them in the story characters.so here I'm''.

Do tell me friends, you all like it or not?

Okay, before starting, let's have one shayari... (Of course English wali)

Years come and go, but this year I specially wish,
Years come and go, but this year I specially wish for...

For Rajat & Mugdha a loads of good fortune,
And wish for us to get a much awaited dose of their comeback...

Have a great year ahead!!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊


And friends I need a help in deciding title for this story, as I couldn't think of any perfect one.

Once I post initial updates you all can suggest 😊

INDEX

Page 1 - Characters Introduction
Page 1 - Part 1(A)
Page 1 - Part 1(B)

Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago

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Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago
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Character Profiles and background of main characters of the story:

Sanyogita Diwan (Mugdha) : The Grand daughter of a famous and powerful business tycoon. Sanyogita is extremely beautiful, elegant and very conscientious and matured for her age. She's born in one of the richest and affluent families in the country which gave her an attitude. Or you can say she has inherited this attitude from her aunt (Bua) Avantika Diwan. She has just returned after doing her graduation in business from a renowned foreign university and soon she'll be joining her Grandpa and her Aunt in their family business. She is the youngest child in Diwan family, daughter of Shailesh & Shalini Diwan. Sanyogita is the most adored and pampered member of her family.


Sanyogita has already fixed her goals in her life, which involve helping her elders in their family business and wants to be like her aunt, a successful business woman. She is strict, disciplined and little introvert. Though she appears very cold and stern outside, but she's very warm and caring to her near and dear ones. Sanyogita is one of those lucky people who found their role model in their own house, Sanyogita found her role model in Avantika.


Sanyogita is very close to Avantika, her grandpa Mr. Diwan and very much close to her cousin Aditya (Avantika's son). Sanyogita, want her Adi bro to get marry someone from their society and this is the reason she is little grumpy with her brother…


Aditya : The eldest member of Diwan family's young Brigid. A 28 year old guy, son of Avantika Diwan and Harish, but his parents are parted away long back and currently he's living with his mother. Aditya is matured, sensible, responsible, loving, caring & friendly. He loves his family a lot and Sanyogita is a cute little doll for him to whom he always adores. He is in relation with a pretty girl from Kulu Pankhuri. Soon these love birds are going to tie a knot.


Pankhuri : A 27 year old girl, lives with in a beautiful city Kulu with her big and happy family. Her family is also in the same line of business as Diwan's. Pankhuri is in her final month of Ph.D. She is very sweet, affectionate, friendly, cool, independent and soft hearted girl. She's all the qualities which one can expect in his life partner and that's why Aditya is madly in love with her. She loves her family a lot but she loves one member of her family more than anyone and that is her cousin, Prithvi.


Prithvi (Rajat): Born in one of the richest families in Kulu. Prithvi is the only son of his family. Devastatingly handsome, he is extremely intelligent, smart, witty and roguishly funny and very stubborn. Prithvi is also very generous, steadfastly loyal to those he truly loves and cares and genuinely kind-hearted.


He just returned after doing his post graduation in business management from a famous foreign university and wanted to chill out for some time just to compensate for all those years of his graduation. A charismatic personality and unlimited charm have made him highly irresistible among females and he has had many girlfriends. But none of his relationship lasts more than 10 days, at the end of which he gently but firmly parts ways with drooling girls. He believes to live every day as it's the last day of life. So, he enjoys every moment of his youth to its hilt and abominates any kind of responsibility and seriousness that intervenes his carefree life.


But Prithvi's father wants him to join their business but Prithvi wants to stay away from his father's I-WANT-TO-MAKE-MY-SON-RESPONSIBLE mission, so he decided to work with some other big firm in the same line of business.


Prithvi rarely decides his plans for tomorrow; forget fixing his goals in life. But once he decides something, no one on the earth can deviate him from his goal. He loves Pankhuri a lot and cares for her too. They share a healthy of friendship and for him, Pankhuri is like a guide who directs correct path to him. But somehow he's not that happy with Pankhuri's relation with Aditya, may be this is because he cares for her a lot……



Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago
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I am not posting character introduction first, instead starting with the story... will post it later.

Part 1(A):

A bright sunny day out there in Mumbai. The sky is painted a bright blue and the shiny green grass in DIWAN MANSION's garden glistened in the sun. It's a great day. People heading towards their routine, it's a normal day to all except Diwan family. Since, morning all members of Diwan family are on their toes and why they shouldn't be'.

This is a very special day for all, Mr. Purshottam Diwan is heads up, as today the apple of his eyes is returning home and that too almost after 3 years. The youngest child of this affluent family, Sanyogita Diwan.

'What are you doing Shailesh? Go and take a bath, quickly? You always do this' today at least move little faster', said Sheela (Sanyogita's mother) irritably to her husband who is still dozing off on the bed.

'Yeah' yeah I know. You don't worry, today I won't be late. How could I? My princess is returning home,' said Shailesh who is now roused to her feet leaving behind his cozy bed. To which his wife shook her head in despair and moved out of the room to look after other arrangements. Purushottam and entire family decided to give a grand welcome to their daughter.

At the dinning area, all gathered, all seems to be very happy and excited to see the Princess of this palace. 'Dad, we should leave now. As it'll take almost an hour to reach to the airport'.,' said Avantika (elder daughter of Purushottam Diwan and Shailesh's sister) but before Purushottam could say anything, Shailesh interupted who had just entered to the dinning area and said,'but Avantu, airport is just 30 minutes away from our place.'

'Shailesh, I said one our considering Mumbai's traffic,' Avantika rolled her eyes up. Agreeing with her, three of them i.e. Purushottam, Shailesh and Avantika moved out to receive their adorable child. Avantika is very pleased as she's going to see Sanyogita who is another Avantika Diwan in miniature''with this thought all the three member boarded to the vehicle and it zoomed out of DIWAN MANSION.

They reached to the Mumbai airport almost after an hour as predicted by Avantika. Numerous men and women were moving here and there. Some of them moving according to the announcement whereas some are waiting for the announcement of their plane. All the three members searched for her, they quickly scanned the area in front of them.

And then the small crowd in front of them parted slightly and they saw her'.

She was standing beside a wide pillar, checking mails and some other details on her phone. Creamy immaculate complexion, delicate nose and lips that were sheer perfection, large, luminous, twinkling eyes beneath thick lashes, lush and gleaming hair that had tied into an elegant ponytail which almost fell to her waist. Not more than 5 feet 5 inches tall, the young girl was dressed in a sea green colored shirt and in an ice-blue colored denims. Looking absolutely stunning in her casual attire and the beautiful face beamed as soon as her gaze fell on her family who is heading towards her with affectionate smile.

Sanyogita was more than happy to see her family after so many years and same was the case with her family. Purushottam approached her with open arms to which she walked forward and bowed down to touch his feet but before she could do that, Purushottam held her and gave a warm and affectionate hug. Purushottam was touched to see that his grand daughter hasn't forgotten her manners and culture.

After releasing herself from her Grandpa's hug, she turned towards Avantika and they both shared a loving hug when they heard Shailesh saying,'Hey even I'm here but it seems you people have forget that'..' all grinned and Sanyogita moved to her father. Both daughter and father were happy to see each other and it's visible on their faces which is radiating the joy in their heart. Shailesh planted a soft kiss on her forehead,'My princess'.'

'I missed you a lot, Dad,' said Sanyogita getting little emotional.

After that, they all moved towards their vehicle parked outside. Soon the engine heated and in a full speed the vehicle headed towards DIWAN MANSION.

Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR DI, N THANK U SO MUCH 4 SUCH A LOVELY GIFT ONE MORE RTMC FF (so now we have total 51 Rtmc ff) :-)

'Pyaar ka dard ha' ahi naam dedo if story k plot k saath jataa ha tho,

its just Owesome Di, Avantu, Aditya, Pankhuri in sab ko tho janti hnu but Sanyogita ki Maa kon ha? Sheela ya Malini?

Egarly Waiting 4 Prithvi n Sanyo's Encounter n further Story 2 unfold

Di plz Mistake ka bhi update de do, LOVE U
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice and easy story, quiet curious to knw how rt wil be…

Sanyo back from studies afta three years…hmm.

In my family I m NOT supposed to touch anyone socks, shoes comes later on, feet evn more later. But since dis is Marathi family, so touching feet by gal is acceptable, may be.

Mc ka naam sanyogita h tho mostest probably..humare rt hero ka naam prithviraj hi hoga…

Di mei intelligent bachi hu na…dekha mera logic, ekdum top class.!!!

Please rt's entry in next update itself.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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happy new year to u n ur family😊

wow a awesome new yr gift


soooperb start


i love how everyone loves ou sanyo


she is princess of family awww


love her family


eager to know RT character


n how story will turn

soon name the ff


Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well very first VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR to u n ur family...
well now your ff...it's too good,very nice start...
well obiyously heroin ki entry toh ho gayi now waiting for our hero...
thanks for the pm n do add me in ur pm list as u already know that i m unable to like so that's why i hv to say it...
continue soon...
luv u... :-)
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happy new yr
chotu si ud se mera kya hoga...i want a long one

vry nice starting...ekdum dhansu starting
with entry of sanyogita...haye kitni sanskari ladki h abroad me rehkar v apne sankar nhi bhuli ladki

aisi ladkiya milti kaha aaj kal

arey khatam kar diya

kya tha ye pari

we r not kids jo lollipop dekar khush kar diya...kam se kam prithvi ki entry to karani thi na

abhi title kaise sochu

c.s bhi nhi diya

this is not done

bt i want to give u a hug 4 starting new rtmc ff

mein to wait karti rehti hun ki koi new ff start kare or hmare rtmc ffs bhi top list me aajaye

maneet n arhi ki tarah

anyways thanks
loved the 1st part
n luv u 2

jaldi cont karna pls dnt be lazy
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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res...great starting but waiting for our hero's entry...pm me too plzz

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