ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 14

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realy nice part ,
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Hi! I am back with another part of 'An odyssey of love'.

Hope, u can enjoy it……

So sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—6

There was not enough time to shift in another house.but riya can do it only because of her wonderful team.shree & chotu help riya in packing while rathore monitoring the guys who help them to settle down in new home.but it's not an easy task to move another house in that kind of short time.& the extra problem it has been raining since morning.arjun just come into riya's home & see everybody are damn busy.riya is trying to carry a heavy bag.but she can't hold it by one hand.so she use her another hand which already wounded & feel pain.arjun saw it.he rush to her.

Arjun: there is a limit of irresponsibility,riya. U already hurt & want to pick this up? ridiculous.

Riya: sir,I just….

Arjun:all are here to help u out.but u hav to ask for it.now,leave it.i'll handle.

Riya leave it. Shree & chotu exchange a glance.

Riya again try to do something.she start to pick her picture from the wall by standing on a tool.

Shree: hello, madam.don't u heard what ur 'pati dev' told earlier? Leave all work.u r not fit yet.

Riya: but,shree… I feel awkward,yar. All of u r doing so many work& I just sit.although it's my work……

Shree:hey! Why r u acting so formal?!after all we r family!

Riya:but…

Shree:don't worry. I also hav a purpose to do it! Now u hav to give us a treat. Not for just one day! frequently.

Riya[with a smile]:ok done. But I can't assure u about food condition,coz, I m the worst cook!

Shree: hmm… don't worry.if u can't then ur 'pati dev' will do it on behalf of u!i saw his breakfast arrangement earlier,so perfect!

Chotu:but, what about the test?like him or…

Riya: shut up chotu. He is the best cook.

Shree:oh realy?!

Just then rathod enter the room.

Rathod: riya, everything ready.we should go now.

Arjun:riya, check again,if something stay behind or not.

Riya:no sir….oh yes. I forgot to take a photograph from bed room's wall.i'll get it now.

Arjun:don't worry.u guys go ahead.i'll pick it up.

[all member of etf go to their car except arjun]

Rathore:riya,u wait here for rawte.we three in my car,& u two come later,there is not enough space .ok?bye.

They left her.

[in the room]

Arjun enter the empty bedroom for picking up the picture. & he just astonished by the beauty of it.

It's riya's picture. In a white dress…it's the sunset time,in beach area.the sun start to leave the sight.she poses as if she is holding the sun into her hand & wanted to free it in the sky.her innocent smile spread all over her face with purity, her hair just flying for reckless wind…….

Arjun: wow… how could this girl fall into ETF office… she should be in the heaven!

Then he take it & go.

Arjun see that riya is waiting for him.

Riya:actually sir,there is no place on that car…so…

Arjun:it's ok riya.lets go.

Riya:yes sir.

Then riya turn to her old home & say good bye to it silently.

They reach their new home.

It's just amazing & fill with natural beauty.a flower garden in front of the house.a big play ground in the left side of the house.

Rathore,shree,chotu already start to giv instruction to the people for set up.rathore see them & come forward.

Rathore:rawte,u 2 should meet the owner.mr.&mrs.ganguly.

Riya:r they from…

Rathore:yes u get it right.they r from west Bengal.

Riya:wow.it's great!

Arjun:let's go & end this formality session.

Arjun,riya, rathore go to them.they live in the ground floor.rathore introduce them..they seem very good person.the lady cordially receive riya.she even tease arjun for holding riya's big picture on his hand.[arjun forgot to leave it in the car while entering the new home]

It's again start to raining.they also get busy in house decoration.the home consist of 2 bedroom,a drawing,a dining,a cute kitchen,2 sweet balcony[one is too big & there are so many rose plant on it& also a big cradle for sitting]etc. just too perfect for arjun-riya's 1st home.

*******

Some boys r playing football in the field in rain. suddenly the ball hit on a house window. About 9 years old boy came out from this house.the boy gently request them not to hit so badly in their house, coz his grandpa is too ill.

But the other boy from the game start to repeatedly hit the ball. & when the 1st boy want to protest,they push him to the ground.

********

Arjun,rathore,shree & chotu was in the parking lot when they saw that some boys argue with neighbour's boy.they rush to them.

Arjun pick up the small boy.

Rathore:what r u doing?

A leader type boy ans him.

'playing,don't u see!'

The small boy tell everything to them.

Arjun: u should hear this boys request.ok,forget it.but from now,don't hit the window, ok?

Boy:we didn't do it purposely. just can't control the ball for rain.

Rathore: don't giv lame excuses. U r playing football,not cricket so that the ball will fly over to the window.

Boy: uncle, ever play football in rain?don't think so… so u better keep mum.

Shree: behave urself,is that a way to talk with ur elder?

Another boy from the gang:oy! baby, tell uncle to go away.it's not his work to play or instruct.

Boy[in teasing mood]: actually uncle,we don't know how to play!will u teach us by playing with us?

Another boy:forget it,yar! Uncles health don't giv permission for that!

Rathore,shree& chotu see them in disgust mood.

Arjun:ok,then.lets play.

Boy[with smile]:oh!really?!done. but 1st u hav to find some more players.coz we r 10 people ….& u r only 4!

Arjun: u can also hav extra players.we won't mind.so let's play… kya kehte ho rathore?

Rathore,shree & chotu come forward & stand beside arjun.

The play begin…. & so the rain.

ETF's 4 vs boy's 10!

********

Riya was working beside the window.suddenly she saw something through the window.it's unbelievable! Arjun sir playing football in the rain??!!!

She quickly take an umbrella & rush to the field side area.the small boy is cheering for etf team.

Chotu as a goal keeper, shree,rathore & arjun hav to tackle the boy.it's raining heavily.arjun fold his white shirt hand& also fold his black jeans.the game start,arjun take the ball from a boy & start towards opposite goalpost.the boys team surned him&try to snetch the ball but he giv the ball to rathore using his backhill.rathore cross3 boy & hit the ball in the goal post.1st goal from etf.shree is too happy for that &he turned to arjun for sharing a hi five.but stop it midway.& riya is cheering them by shouting.arjun see her & try to ask something,but the game start,so he can't.chotu saves 3 goals attempt fabulously.rathore score 2 goal,shree1 & arjun3….till now.

Suddenly arjun comes to riya.

Riya just in a trance after seeing arjun in that condition.rain water drops from his hair,a fully wet arjun who seems go back to his old days come to her like always- as a caring arjun rawte.

Arjun:riya,what r u doing here?

Riya come into reality after his word & in nervousness her umbrella about to fall.arjun catch it on time.

Arjun:carefull! U'll get wet.it's raining heavily.go inside.

Riya: plz,sir. I want to see the match.plz.

Arjun can't say no to her after seeing her begging like that.

Arjun:ok,but, carefull.don't get wet ur hand.remember what doc say….so…

Riya:ok, sir!

Arjun go back to the game.shree pass him the ball & he carry it by dribbling &g-o-a-l…. etf 7-boys 0.game end.shree,chotu hug each other while arjun & rathore see them in smiling face….

& riya just watching only arjun with a wonder….

Back ground music-

'Tum Hi Kaho Kya Baat Hai, Mujhko Lage Tum Apne Kyon
Jabse Dekha Hai Tumhe, Dekh Rahi Hoon Sapne Kyon
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum
Tum Bin Ab Jaaoon Kahan, Raah Bhi Tum Manzil Bhi Tum

*****

Arjun & team go to the boys.

They say sorry to them for rude behavior & also to the small boy.arjun & rathore leave the place.but shree & chotu stay there.

Shree: so now little baby team,7-0!see?

Just giv all of u a free advice, never underestimate any person. Because a person is a person,no matter how he small or big.

Chotu: & try to gather good manner….[in angry mood] samjhe ya shamjhau?

Shree start to smile after hearing chotu's imitating of arjun.

[to be continue]


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Posted: 12 years ago
U write beautifully..!!
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊😊😊
wow!
love the riya's picture description...
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Posted: 12 years ago
so caring husband like arjun...
awesome friends like shree,chotu...
brotherly character rathore...
really ETF is a nice as family.
love everyone's helping mentality towards riya.
continue koro taratari...😊

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