ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Realy nice part waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Ariya! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG riya arjun together
poor shree and chotu.
really loved arjun's care"apna khayal rakna"awww so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!
arjun takin cr of riya...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi! Back with another part….. hope u can enjoy it???!!!

So sorry if I make any mistake…..

PART—5

Arjun: how dare u to leave the bed? Huh?

Riya just shocked to see him.she also forgot to react…..

Riya[loudly]: sir aap?!

[then in low voice start to talk with herself]no way riya, u r dreaming….. but how could u even dare to dream that arjun sir or in ur house!

Arjun: now, what r u saying?

[he then put the tray on bedside table]

Arjun:get freshen up quickly & eat ur breakfast,ok?

Arjun leave the room. riya now can believe that it's not a dream,it's reality!

She quickly take a bath in 5 min .then she wear a white dress.she just try to dry her hair with towels meanwhile arjun knock on her door.

Arjun:riya?

Riya:yes,sir.

Arjun enter the room with a cup of tea on his hand for himself & just astonished by riya's simple beauty….water drops from her hair;her blushing face looking wonderful in the morning sunlight….just like heaven's angel.

His thought interrupt by unromantic door bell sound.

Arjun:I get it,u eat ur breakfast.it's already late.then u hav to take ur medicine.

Arjun open the door…..it's shree!

Arjun:u?here?now?!

Shree:actually sir…I just want to check on riya…so…

Arjun: it's ok.come.riya in her room.

Shree just rush to there,coz he can't take the risk to talk with his arjun sir!

Riya:shree!u also come?!

Shree:what's up?all is well?

Riya:more than perfect![with a smile]

Arjun:shree,it's good u came.i hav to go now.so,u stay here until riya finish her full breakfast,ok?

Shree:sure,sir.

Arjun: & riya plz take ur medicine after that…..

Oh!one more thing,I found a letter on ur door step yesterday…it's on the table.check it when u get time. & u r on leave today…so no work.

Take care,bye.

Arjun leaves the house.

Shree:oh!god! now I can breath freely.

Riya:shree u…

Shree: oh! I forgot,u r here!mrs.arjun!how can she bear anythings againest her 'patni brata pati'!!!

Riya start to hit him with hand.

Shree:by the way riya,who sent u letter…huh??[with a evil cute smile]

Riya: hav to see…but don't worry it can't be a love letter!

Shree:love letter & mrs.arjun?! do u think all guys want to suicide??they hav to think about their life at least 1000 time!coz, u r now the arjun rawte's wife.shamjhi ye shamjhau!

Riya open the letter with a smile after shree's word.but her face color faded.

Riya:oh!no…

Shree:what happen,yar?

Riya:shree,it's from the flat owner!

Shree:what?why?

Riya:ye to hona hi tha..

Last month I submit application that I want to leave this place….u know… after marriage…I was supposed to with ….

I just forgot that!now what can I do?the owner already giv it to another person.

Shree:yeah,it's a big problem….it's already 29,how will u manage another good flat in 2 days?!

Riya:now,what!

Shree:don't worry.we'll find a way out.

Riya:chotu!!i hav to tell chotu!he has a huge network,can easily manage a home….

Riya call chotu & ask for help. & chotu assure her that he'll manage it in one day.

In the mean time,shree was thinking something…….

Is it a sign?1st riya arjun sir's marriage,then arjun sir's care for riya… now riya's home problem……

& he get it.he should help his best friend…. But in his way!

Shree:riya, I've to go now….hav some work in office.so.plz take care of urself…

Riya:yes,.bye..

Shree:bye mrs.riya arjun rawte!

Riya start to blush after hearing her name in new version.

[ETF office]

Shree searching for chotu in office & finaly he find him in the lab.

Shree:u r here?oh!god!which place I didn't search for u!

Chotu:why?i just came here to giv the blood sample from crime scene…

Shree:riya called u,na?

Chotu:yes,yar. & I already manage 5 house for her reconsideration.she don't hav to worry!we'll find a home for her.

Shree[with a sad face]:who tell u to run as usine bolt?!

Chotu:now what that means?

Shree:means,u don't hav to find home for riya…

Chotu:but, she hav to leave her present home in two days,remember?

Shree:yes,baba.i know. But I hav a plan.

Chotu:what plan?

Every ETF member try to help riya. even arjun & rathore go different places to select a home for riya after office.chotu gives them different home location.but riya,arjun,rathore,shree,chotu can't find a home for riya!

Some home r not suitable for riya, & some home owner don't want to give rent to 'an alone girl'…. So 'mission-finding home for riya' about to fail just then shree get a news of hope.

A sweet two storied building of old couple empty….it's perfect for riya in every angle.but….. there is a condition.only married couple can get this per rent.

Chotu:oh!no,what can u do now?we hav to clear riya's old flat in about 20 hours…but we can't get anything yet!

Shree:yeah….

Rathore:hmmm…got it!problem slove guys! Shree call the old couple that riya is ready to live there…

Shree:but, sir …..condition…

Rathore:so? We r not gonna break it!rawte & riya is a married couple, remember?

Arjun giv a 'u know it,but why u doing this' look at rathore.but he ignore it.

Rathore:come on rawte! A good house…& we hav to see riya's side also…..

& u just can't live ur whole life in ravi lodge!

Arjun& riya agree to live on that house after a huge team effort by the trio…..

[in shree's cabin]

Chotu:1st mission over![with a smiling face]

Shree:see,my magic?!

Chotu:really, shreekant sen,u r genious!

How u plan& manage everything under arjun sir's nose!wow!

1st we giv those home address to them,they go there,but can't get it!coz…

Shree:we already tell them not to giv it to them by showing our ETF id!

Chotu:yeah….or ur aunty's home rent condition!!!

Shree:hmm….she is so sweet… easily except my plan!

[rathore came there to take a file from shree.& he heard everything!]

Rathore:what?! U two made this whole drama!!??unbelievable!how could u do this to ur senior?!

Thanks God,rawte didn't hear this! Then all work will go in vain!

[chotu & shree get scared when they saw that rathore heard everything… but after his word,they r just shocked by their senior's behavior]

Shree: means …sir,u didn't mad at us?!

Rathore:why?! I knew it from earlier!

Shree & chotu start to smile…

Rathore[in angry mood]:but, as a chief of ETF,I am warning u 2,don't use ur power in personal work further,ok?

Shree&chotu:sorry,sir.we'll never do it again.

Rathore start to leave the room…but stop in midway…

Rathore[with a small smile]:

By the way,guys…. I think,u can open a couple's reconciliation bureau after retirement!

Shree & chotu also start to smile…….

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
at last...a step to live under the same roof...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shree-chotu so cute... now riya nd arjun together...update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
loved rathore's dialogue " I think, you can open a couple's reconciliation bureau after retirement! "
so happy that they are going to leave in the same house :)
chotu and shree are just too awesome
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. do pm me when you update next plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
haha! shree's really a genius! loved the update a lot! please update soon! can't wait to read more! love the story's progress! getting interesting day by day! awesome!

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