ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..!!!
etf playing football in rain amazing..!!!
lvd how they helped in packing n decorating house..!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!
continue soon..!!
plz pm me wenever u update..!!!
thx..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is awesome

today i read whole ss in one go/...and just amazing yaar

i never imagine airy and ETF in this manner...

you are just fabulously written it...mind blowing...

hey just add me in you pm list...i really love to read more...

and please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waooo dr
it was lvly update,
i lv the song that u use ,
n the way u discribe riy'a photo discription,
wooo arjun n all other etf team play footbal ...that was supub scence...
conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! Awesome update!
Football match ka idea was awesome! 😊
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh ohh ohh..Awsome awsome..Amaizing yrr..just fabulous...😳👏😳
Love it..Arjun_Riya_Rathore_Shree_Chotu everyone was awsome yrrr...waiting for your next update..post it soon dear...
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
arjun was concern for riya
aww arjun admaring riyas pic so cute
etc playing football in the rain...nd riya was lost in arjun
finally ariya in their new home
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon...dr
waiting...waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum updt...cont soon
thanx 4 ur pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi! I am back with another part of 'An odyssey of love'.

Hope, u can enjoy it……

So sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—7

Arjun,rathore,shree& chotu start to enter the new house while riya stopped them to do it from inside.

Riya:don't enter the room until I come,ok?

Riya goes inside for something.

Chotu: why riya stop us here?! Strange!

Shree: yar,don't u get it?

Chotu,arjun & rathore look at shree in a curious mood.

Shree: we just won a game fabulously! May be she want to do some 'aarti-sharti' of us.u know female things!!

Rathore: oh!really ,shree? U r so intelligent! Why don't u open a coaching class on female behavior observation! U'll be rock! & don't worry about ETF. whom I tell it!ofcourse u don't worry about it.thats why u didn't submit the paper that I asked u 3 days earlier!

Shree was happy to hear his chief at 1st,but when he realize that he is teasing him,he make a sad face.

Shree: sorry sir…. There's a problem in my laptop.

Rathore: yes!thats why u & chotu playing games on it yesterday!!!

Shree[in low voice to chotu]:o ma! Did rathore sir sat a camera in our cabin!? We hav to check it,chotu!

Chotu:hmm…. I don't understand these two[arjun-rathore]…now in good mood,just after that in mad mood!

Shree: yar, big big people…big big matter! That's why no girl can enter in rathore sir's life! U know,he should build a new force,ETF=Emergency Taunt Force!

Shree & chotu start to laugh.

Just then riya come to them with four towels.

Riya: everyone,plz 1st wipe urself.coz the room will be wet & I don't want to do extra work….

Chotu & rathore giv a glance to shree.

Chotu: aarti….shree!

Shree didn't say anything.

Riya: why u guys standing like a statue?

Riya again goes somewhere & bring 5 cup in a tray.

Everybody already in the room & chotu & shree start to sit on couch which isn't properly unpacked yet.

Riya: hey,guys ..don't sit here!

Shree: then where we'll sit mam?!

Riya: don't mind,yar.just wait.

Riya indicate some big boxes& request chotu to gather it.

Riya:now sit here everyone. & enjoy riya's special hot coffee ….oh sorry,correction: almost cold 3 coffee & 1 tea.

Everyone take their cup .

Arjun take the cup with admiration…he just thought about a cup of his favourite tea…& riya bring it.he glance at riya with a sweet smile……..

Rathore;thanks riya.but r u sattle down ur kitchen?

Riya;not,yet sir.just unpack somethings.i thought,all of u need it after this football mission in 'barish'….the game was good.although I am a big fan of cricket,but today,honestly I love this football game!

Shree:great then,a fan of football rise all because of team ETF.cheers guys[he rise his coffee cup for this,but then saw rathore & arjun face…so he put it down]

Chotu; riya,yar.thanks a ton for this coffee.

Arjun get up from there & start to go.

Riya: where r u going sir?

Arjun: in my room.

[two bedroom-1 for arjun & 1 for riya;arjun takes the small one]

Arjun leaves.

Shree:chotu,don't u want to say something???

Chotu: what??!!!!

Shree: I mean…I thought u'll be tell this 1st.

Rathore: what is it,chotu?

Chotu: I don't know sir……

Riya: tell frankly shree.

Shree: ok, don't u guys hungry?! Actually,I am starving!

Riya: oh,god, I forgot about the lunch!now what to do?

Rathore: order something from outside.

Riya:ok,sir.doing it right now.

Chotu: but,it'll take an hour to reach here.this place isn't just too much near to main city.

Rathore:u r right.

Just then the doorbell ring.riya open the door & see a delivery boy.

Boy:mam, ur food.

Riya: but, I didn't order any food!

Boy: but the address is here's…..

Riya:may be it's wrong….we just shift here some hours ago.

Arjun comes there.

Arjun: address is right.

He pays the bill,takes the food & closes the door. Riya & all other member just amazed that how arjun can get food in a short time!

Rathore:rawte,when did u order for food?

Arjun: in the morning. I told this guys to deliver it here.

Shree[in low voice to chotu]:huh! See? How caring pati! Patni will be tired after these whole work,so can't be able to cook…..thats why pati start to prepared from morning!!! How romantic!

Chotu: to hell ur romantic! Just think, which type food he brings?!

Riya: don't worry guys! Smell is good!

Shree:jo dikhtahe bo hamesha hoti nehi riya!

They all sit together for lunch& enjoy it the food was really good.

After that,they all start to work.by 8 pm,they finished all work perfectly.the home looks very beautiful!arjun again handle the food section.after dinner,rathore, shree& chotu leave the house.

Then there are just two -arjun & riya………….

[IN THE MORNING]

arjun wake up,it's only 6am.he leaves his bed & go to washroom for freshen up.he wearing a white t-shirt & black trousers.he start to wiping his face just then heard some noise of bell.he open's his rooms door & see the source of sound.

***

Riya always get up early in the morning.but today she is little late.coz, it's a new place,so she can't sleep well.when fall asleep, unromantic alarm clock start to shout.she turned itt off & fall asleep again. & now she is late.so many work to do.it's 1st day in this house as well as with arjun. So she plan it earlier she will take a quick bath,doing morning worship.making breakfast for two.then be ready for office & reach there in time[coz rathore sir will never spare her if she late.although he always take care all of them but in office,no emotion works on him]

But now…..

So she start to do everything very quickly.actually she is running from one room to another.

***

Arjun see that riya doing her morning worship.she already take a bath.her hair is still so much wet… water drops constantly.she look fresh & beautiful in blue dress.

Arjun:good morning! Seems u r too busy!

Riya gets up from her worship in hurry mood.her open hair's water spills on arjun's face….

Her disorderly arrange wet hair,her innocent face like a child,her sweet dimple…..everything can make a man's morning delight.

Riya: good morning sir.

Then start to run for kitchen.but 1st gives arjun the puja thali suddenly.

Riya: sir plz,hold this for a second.

Arjun: what!why…

But riya already gone from here…so he just standing& watching riya.

She just running here & there.arjun also follow her.she was about to cut tomato with knife.

Arjun put the puja thal on the table.

Arjun: what r u doing,riya?

Riya: why sir?didn't u see?cutting tomato…..oh no!how could I forgot this!

[She start to leave from there with knife on her hand]

Arjun: now what?

Riya turned to arjun for giving the answer& arjun also start to walk with her.so when she turned,she almost about to hurt him with her hands knife.but arjun catch it on time.

Riya: oh,no! I am so sorry sir.so so sorry.everything is my fault! If I didn't late…stupid sleep!everything would be done perfectly.still I can't make breakfast… also can't finish so many work….i am just lost…i.am…

Arjun:shh! Calm down riya! Kitna panic hoti ho tum! U don't hav to prepare breakfast.we can eat it outside.

Riya:of course not.it's the only time that I can eat home. & I m not goona miss it. Don't worry.i'll manage.

Arjun:ok, I m helping u here. U go & finish ur other work.

Riya:but,sir…how could u….

Arjun: go! !...& plz take care of ur hand,it isn't good yet.

Riya can't say another word.

Arjun make breakfast & they eat it together.then leave for office.

[IN ETF OFFICE]

Riya enter into her cabin & chotu – shree come there who are egarly waiting for her!

Shree: good morning,riya.

Riya:hmmm….

Shree: I mean good good morning riya!

Riya: yeah, shree.i heard u.

Shree: oh! Yar, I mean how was ur morning… which came after night…

Chotu: shree, riya knows! Morning always come after night.so why are u telling this?!

Shree[looking at chotu with disappointment]:stupid…..don't u…forget it!

Riya…… tell yar,plz.

Riya[in angry voice]: what yar! What can I say?! The morning was very bad.coz,I was late & panic…& arjun sir hav to make breakfast!!!can u imagine?!

Shree[with evil smile]: wow!!!breakfast??!!hah!!

Riya: don't laugh ! I am so mad at myself.

Chotu:why yar? It's fine…if sir want to do it…then…

Riya: no way chotu….

Just then her landphone ring.rathore called them in the conference room.a new case arrive.so the team start to work.around 11pm,they called off a day.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
Grate grate grate...it was awesome update...!!!
..hehehheee
shree coaching class...!!!!
she gav tawal to all...!!!
heehhe uff how i control my laugh...!!!
grate yr...!!!!
cute husband yr...order food n then. make breckfast...!!!!
ufff eh shree bhi na...!!!
tease kerna nahi chodega...!!!!
akhir kab tak tease karega riya ko..!!!!
i lv ur ff ...plz conti soon n. posible then plz pm me..

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