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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

An I third I think that's the bestest I've ever done:)))) I'm so happy so I really wish I lived near an orchard right now or maybe it wasnt this cold outside I could go and drive to one. I'm so jealous of Lavanya and Khushi they ate all the fruits I absolutely love and now I'm craving for some so not fair :/ I find it rather depressing that Lavanya hasn't even had a raw fruit ever the poor girl has been missing out! I have a feeling Lavanya and Aman might hook up maybe once they realize Arnav and Khushi like each other they might start to take notice in one another!! I'm sure khushis senses must have gone crazy once Arnav washed her hands I'm sure I would have melted there and then :) thanks for the update love ya bye <3

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Breath is still unsteady..will be back aftr calming down... At last i'm here with my edited version... "for my love for Lady Anjali"...yeah anything for loved ones,thats what our Khushi... Strawberriess on tree!!! I adore u Lady La... Strawberry-sour&sweet!just perfect...and just like whom Khushi,want to share??? Glad to see u Lady La enjoying herself so much like a normal girl... A kind of longing and sadness...why my lady why??? Don't be sad...Lord who told u to think that u would never see her again...this is not in ur hand my Lordy...u can't get rid of her ever,don't u knw that. Dhak dhak... "Hungry my Lord"really Arnav u imagined this??wild imagination...and it remind me of fairy light episode...and my Lord ur secretary is a smart man so be careful...La n Aman i'm repeating this,they are not for u buddies...so move on and lead a happy life...may be both of u together can make a better life... Oh Lordy, r u kidding?? Didn't u gt any excuse to get Khushi alone...and i'm not gng to comment about the next part...hands still trembling*sigh*...what a punishment My Lord!!!!! Dil mange more...

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

oh ho the first time i ever reserved without any mentioning...cos i was out of words...

Chap-126 --- lovely the orchards...remembered the first visit...khushis pull to the place and how it all started...just like that day, she fell on his arms today too...wow loved...lavanya and khushi are cute...love their friendship...so is la jealous, i guess kind of...and lordy sees grapes and remembers him relishing them the other day.😆...Aman holding La...so will some thing come up between them...😲

Chap 127--- i was totally mesmerized!!!!it was sooo hot...nothing happened yet just simply washing hands together have been given a different meaning altogether...nothing to tell...it was extremely beautiful and yeah makes us yearning for more...

so lordy loves touching her hah😉

loved it,

Love Yush😳

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Oh Lord!!! For now, I have no words to describe chapter 127... but just so you know... I can't breathe and my heart rate shot up to the sky! 😳... AND I am sitting at work... Smiling at my computer screen...😆... Waiting for more on the Arnav-Khushi scenes😉... For now, no analyzing... I am just going to take this chapter as it is.😉

P.s. Aman is probably thinking... there goes my chance with Ms. Khushi😆😆

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Gah, sputter, sputter, gah...

I'll come back when I can put two coherent thoughts together. 😳

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

u blew me off! That was a terrific update! Was so long waiting for an Arshi scene.U simply fulfilled it that too above par expectations! Thank u!thank u!thank u! I never saw such a scene any where. Such romantic scene!! How did u envisage it?

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Flash90

@flash90

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Super duper update

👏👏👏

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anusada

@anusada

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Res
Will be back as soon as I can!!
Till then rabba ve everyone :-)

Chapter One Hundred Twenty Six: The Orchard Revisited

This chapter showed the increasing bond of Lady Lavanya and Kushi😊

The antics they played in the orchard makes us remember our childhood where all our cousins used to have same fun and brought a smile to my face😊😊

And mentioning of grapes hmmm what does Khushi remember from that😃

Next comes our hero in shining armour to save the girl who tends to fall whenever hero is around😆

Now this hero should really use his brains for what he is feeling for the so called village girl😳

Chapter One Hundred Twenty Seven: At the Trench:-

I am sorry in this chapter i only see the grapes in front of me!!!!!!

Gosh what a romance!!!!!!

He cleaned her from the grapes and asked her to clean his also!!!!!

I was in the dreamland when i read it and now again when i read it i am in the dream land!!!!!!!

127 chapter amazing!!!!!

Aquiline i can't imagine how best you can write this romantic scenes as at the start itself they are mindblowing!!!!!!!!👏

Edited by anusada - 12 years ago