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Rabba Vey Lin and wish u a very Happy new year... May this year is filled with lots of happinees,opportuinities and success for u... May Almighty grant all ur wishes in this year and even the next and the next and the next and so on😉... AmeenNOW THE UPDATE LOVED It... I felt bad for Lady La she is a very nice girl but a brave one too... cource no girl can agree to be in this kind of as Lordy put it marriage... it could be anything but marriage or any relation... Benefit of convenience but for whom... only u lordy...love u lady Anjali... u r a true Lady... The way u ordered Lordy to apologize to Lady La awesome... yes Lordy if u havent appologized it doesnt mean u cant u have to learn to apologize... Awesome 👏
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Chapter 120 : Thinking of the Other

It was like " Socha tha kya, aur kya nikla" update, that was the only thought in my mind after reading it, Lin!!!

Kushi shut her eyes, and tried to smile, "Possibly it's a sign that I must not attach affections with worldly things for the sake of keeping alive those memories that I was too young to remember."

You again did it lin'. I just cant love you enough for this' So emotionally beautiful'.

A head looked up, emerging out of the blanket. His face. He was not smiling but his eyes were twinkling with wicked amusement.

Yeeeh ye to mere saath bhi hota hain...vo bhi roz...

"Because you belong to Lady Lavanya," said Kushi, painfully, "She is the one for you."

Everything u said is true except the name dear.. it's Lady Soul!!!!

Lin.. love whole scene dear.. khushi in her imagination consoling her heart that he does not belong to her and imaging that he want to change but he can't.. wow!!

A knock sounded on his door and his sister looked in, "Chotey? Are you occupied?"

Oh wow.. Lady Jha u surprised us.. .. U KNOCKED!!!

He looked at the window, and then dared to ask, "Di, after your marriage, has brother-in-law ever''.." He paused, not knowing what word to add.

"Transformed? No. Why do ask?" There was a notch of worry in her voice.

WHAT!!!! Both of them know that shyam is (or was for them) cursed and he transformed'
We readers was so curious that when n how they will come to know, how Lady Jha will react' And see here brother and his sister is talking about it just like talking about 'subji tarkari'' so normal for them..
...Kya Lin...this was totally unexpected!!!

"You never are a curious one," laughed Lady Anjali, "If you really need to learn what curiosity is, spend some time talking with that dear Miss Kushi."

Smart Dialogue from lady Jha.. and wins the award of Best dialogue of update..!!

"Too late", said his sister, "She is part of our hearts and there is nothing you can do to erase our feelings for her."

"I have no such feelings," he said firmly, frowning at the floor.

Are you sure Lordy... Hmmm, lady Jha has rightly said "TOO LATE it is"..

"I didn't say you had them," said Di, with a wicked glint in her eyes.

Exactly she didn't say ur name lordy.. Lady Jha, vo kehte hain na Chor ki dadhi me tinka..

"I have certainly no feelings for her."

I cant tell you Lordy.. yeh sun ke mere tan-man ko kitni shanti mili hain..

LIN.. Just can't stop adoring and admiring you for ur writing style... Babes u just Rock!!

That night as Kushi lay to sleep, she kept thinking of many things and among them were the memories she had in the Castle. Memories that ended with the image of a certain man who, in her hatred for him, had come to linger a lot in her mind with the growing distance of time.

He was always sore and moody during the three days that reminded them forcefully of the dreadful night he'd lost his parents. And then there were other worrying thoughts''.

Song of the situation:

For K and A both..

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka
Rob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambakht hai chupaye
khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dil pe shaq mera, isse pyaar ho gaya

From K

Tu bekhabar , Ya sab khabar
Ek din zara mere masoom dil pe gaur kar
Pardon mein main rakh loon tujhe
Ki dil tera aa na jaaye kahin yeh gair par

From A

Hum bhole hai , Sharmile hai
Hum hai zara siddhe masoom itni khair kar
Jis din kabhi
Zidd pe ade
Hum ayenge aag ka tera dariya tair kar

Chapter 121 : That Which is Decisive

Nani cast her glance at him. He stared at her expressionlessly. She looked a lot more younger and stronger at heart lately, especially after she had begun stepping out of her room and polishing her title as 'Lady Mother' in action. It was as though she was trying to live up to Kushi's dreams now that the young girl was no longer there to prod her on in her reluctance.

Nani pe Khushi ka jadoo chal gaya..

Lin, I just love the below conversation between Lordy and LA... those words and expressions are confronting and asking for commitment.. To come straight to the point and asking directly is the best way to come out from dilemma.. On lighter note, the conversation look like the tennis match.. fast reflex actions with proper force... placing a ball in opposite court..! FAB!!

"I brought you here for a reason," he stated.

"Which is?"

He looked at his sister who was watching him curiously, "For my sister who insisted I get married."

"Really?" said Lady Lavanya, "And is this marriage?" she waved her hands between her and him.

"It is my kind of marriage, yes," he nodded proudly.

"What sort of benefit comes out of this marriage?" she asked, and all eyes turned to Lord Arnav.

He frowned, "The benefit of convenience."

"It seems so to you, I am sure," said Lady Lavanya, "But for a woman...love and, later, an offspring to keep one's name, are the sought fruits of marriage which will actually be termed as "profits" or "benefits" in your vocabulary."

Linny.. above fire-ry words takes the award for the best Dialogue of the Update..!!! Fab writing againg, the way u have presented woman's dignity that she seek after having marriage and living together, in his language of profits n benefits...

"Then you should marry someone who does not seek more than silence and callousness in her marriage and I am certain you will find no such woman," said Lady Lavanya

LA is on FIRE.. n I am loving it..

But lordy.. m ready to become a woman like this..😉

"This is a bond of no sort and I have not entered it to be exempted from it," she stated.

Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle...

Kya a FADU, jakkass, zandoos dialouge mara hain yaar' My heart came out for lady LA.. Touched!!

"My words cannot affect me," said Lord Arnav,

It affects to others baby.. n that should affect you..!!!

"But I am disappointed at what you have led Lavanya become: A woman craving for attention, for love."

Lordy.. that's a definition of woman' that is how woman like.. Craving for attention n love from the one whom she loves..atleast!!

It was as though the room was a vacuum and all sound and breath were held back. Everyone stared at the spectacle before their eyes, shocked with regard to how Lord Arnav would take this, while Lord Arnav stared at his sister disbelievingly, and his sister stared back at him, holding Lady Lavanya's hand, who was looking at Lady Anjali, amazed and at a loss for words.

Though I had same reaction.. but imagine the scene I had light laughter...

"It was for you," said Lord Arnav to his sister.

Yes but u hv not specified it to LA dear...

"No, it was for you and it was wrong," said Lady Anjali, and then said once again, "Apologize to her, Chotey."

She is right in a way..!!

He frowned at his sister, "It is not bravery that is required to apologize but cowardice!" he growled, standing before the waiting stairs, "And I am not a coward!"

Lordy... U switched the words dear... To apologize needs guts...!!!

His anger at her, for insisting him against his demeanor, was so evident in his expression that his sister was astonished. And then before Lord Arnav realised what he had let his sister see, his face was overcome by a look of terror as his sister's hold on his hand slackened and her eyes rolled backwards as though she were about to faint.

Aisi situation me kabhi samaj hi nahi pati hoon.. itna koi surprised ya shock kaise ho sakta hain ki behosh ho jay.. aisa film aur novel mein hi hota hain.. Hain na???!!!

Song for Lavanya's feeling...

main bhool jaaooN tumhen, ab yahi munaasib hai
magar bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhooloon
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin
yahaaN to dil kaa ye aalam hai kyaa kahoon, kambakt
bhulaa sakaa naa ye vo silsilaa jo thaa bhi nahin
vo ek Khyaal jo aavaaz tak gayaa hi nahin
vo ek baat jo main kah nahin sakaa tumse
vo ek rabt jo ham mein kabhi rahaa hi nahin
mujhe hai yaad vo sab jo kabhi huaa hi nahin
agar ye haal hai dil kaa to koi samjhaaye
tumhen bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhoolooN
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin

Enjoy

H

Soul

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Originally posted by: A_Soul

Chapter 120 : Thinking of the Other

It was like " Socha tha kya, aur kya nikla" update, that was the only thought in my mind after reading it, Lin!!!

Kushi shut her eyes, and tried to smile, "Possibly it's a sign that I must not attach affections with worldly things for the sake of keeping alive those memories that I was too young to remember."

You again did it lin'. I just cant love you enough for this' So emotionally beautiful'.

A head looked up, emerging out of the blanket. His face. He was not smiling but his eyes were twinkling with wicked amusement.

Yeeeh ye to mere saath bhi hota hain'.vo bhi roz'.

"Because you belong to Lady Lavanya," said Kushi, painfully, "She is the one for you."

Everything u said is true except the name dear' it's Lady Soul!!!!

Lin' love whole scene dear' khushi in her imagination consoling her heart that he does not belong to her and imaging that he want to change but he can't' wow!!

A knock sounded on his door and his sister looked in, "Chotey? Are you occupied?"

Oh wow.. Lady Jha u surprised us.. .. U KNOCKED!!!

He looked at the window, and then dared to ask, "Di, after your marriage, has brother-in-law ever''.." He paused, not knowing what word to add.

"Transformed? No. Why do ask?" There was a notch of worry in her voice.

WHAT!!!! Both of them know that shyam is (or was for them) cursed and he transformed'
We readers was so curious that when n how they will come to know, how Lady Jha will react' And see here brother and his sister is talking about it just like talking about 'subji tarkari'' so normal for them' Kya Lin'this was totally unexpected!!!

"You never are a curious one," laughed Lady Anjali, "If you really need to learn what curiosity is, spend some time talking with that dear Miss Kushi."

Smart Dialogue from lady Jha' and wins the award of Best dialogue of update..!!

"Too late", said his sister, "She is part of our hearts and there is nothing you can do to erase our feelings for her."

"I have no such feelings," he said firmly, frowning at the floor.

Are you sure Lordy'. Hmmm, lady Jha has rightly said "TOO LATE it is"..

"I didn't say you had them," said Di, with a wicked glint in her eyes.

Exactly she didn't say ur name lordy' Lady Jha, vo kehte hain na Chor ki dadhi me tinka'

"I have certainly no feelings for her."

I cant tell you Lordy.. yeh sun ke mere tan-man ko kitni shanti mili hain'

LIN'Just can't stop adoring and admiring you for ur writing style'. Babes u just Rock!!

That night as Kushi lay to sleep, she kept thinking of many things and among them were the memories she had in the Castle. Memories that ended with the image of a certain man who, in her hatred for him, had come to linger a lot in her mind with the growing distance of time.

He was always sore and moody during the three days that reminded them forcefully of the dreadful night he'd lost his parents. And then there were other worrying thoughts''.

Song of the situation:

For K and A both..

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka
Rob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambakht hai chupaye
khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dil pe shaq mera

From K

Tu bekhabar , Ya sab khabar
Ek din zara mere masoom dil pe gaur kar
Pardon mein main rakh loon tujhe
Ki dil tera aa na jaaye kahin yeh gair par

From A

Hum bhole hai , Sharmile hai
Hum hai zara siddhe masoom itni khair kar
Jis din kabhi
Zidd pe ade
Hum ayenge aag ka tera dariya tair kar

Chapter 121 : That Which is Decisive

Nani cast her glance at him. He stared at her expressionlessly. She looked a lot more younger and stronger at heart lately, especially after she had begun stepping out of her room and polishing her title as 'Lady Mother' in action. It was as though she was trying to live up to Kushi's dreams now that the young girl was no longer there to prod her on in her reluctance.

Nani pe Khushi ka jadoo chal gaya'

Lin, I just love the below conversation between Lordy and LA' those words and expressions are confronting and asking for commitment' To come straight to the point and asking directly is the best way to come out from dilemma' On lighter note, the conversation look like the tennis match.. fast reflex actions with proper force' placing a ball in opposite court..! FAB!!

"I brought you here for a reason," he stated.

"Which is?"

He looked at his sister who was watching him curiously, "For my sister who insisted I get married."

"Really?" said Lady Lavanya, "And is this marriage?" she waved her hands between her and him.

"It is my kind of marriage, yes," he nodded proudly.

"What sort of benefit comes out of this marriage?" she asked, and all eyes turned to Lord Arnav.

He frowned, "The benefit of convenience."

"It seems so to you, I am sure," said Lady Lavanya, "But for a woman...love and, later, an offspring to keep one's name, are the sought fruits of marriage which will actually be termed as "profits" or "benefits" in your vocabulary."

Linny' above fire-ry words takes the award for the best Dialogue of the Update'!!! Fab writing againg, the way u have presented woman's dignity that she seek after having marriage and living together, in his language of profits n benefits'

"Then you should marry someone who does not seek more than silence and callousness in her marriage and I am certain you will find no such woman," said Lady Lavanya

LA is on FIRE' n I am loving it'

But lordy.. m ready to become a woman like this'

"This is a bond of no sort and I have not entered it to be exempted from it," she stated.

Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle'..

Kya a FADU, jakkass, zandoos dialouge mara hain yaar' My heart came out for lady LA.. Touched!!

"My words cannot affect me," said Lord Arnav,

It affects to others baby.. n that should affect you'!!!

"But I am disappointed at what you have led Lavanya become: A woman craving for attention, for love."

Lordy.. that's a definition of woman' that is how woman like.. Craving for attention n love from the one whom she loves'atleast!!

It was as though the room was a vacuum and all sound and breath were held back. Everyone stared at the spectacle before their eyes, shocked with regard to how Lord Arnav would take this, while Lord Arnav stared at his sister disbelievingly, and his sister stared back at him, holding Lady Lavanya's hand, who was looking at Lady Anjali, amazed and at a loss for words.

Though I had same reaction' but imagine the scene I had light laughter'

"It was for you," said Lord Arnav to his sister.

Yes but u hv not specified it to LA dear'.

"No, it was for you and it was wrong," said Lady Anjali, and then said once again, "Apologize to her, Chotey."

She is right in a way..!!

He frowned at his sister, "It is not bravery that is required to apologize but cowardice!" he growled, standing before the waiting stairs, "And I am not a coward!"

Lordy'. U switched the words dear'. To apologize needs guts'.!!!

His anger at her, for insisting him against his demeanor, was so evident in his expression that his sister was astonished. And then before Lord Arnav realised what he had let his sister see, his face was overcome by a look of terror as his sister's hold on his hand slackened and her eyes rolled backwards as though she were about to faint.

Aisi situation me kabhi samaj hi nahi pati hoon.. itna koi surprised ya shock kaise ho sakta hain ki behosh ho jay' aisa film aur novel mein hi hota hain.. Hain na???!!!

Song for Lavanya's feeling'

main bhool jaaooN tumhen, ab yahi munaasib hai
magar bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhooloon
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin
yahaaN to dil kaa ye aalam hai kyaa kahoon, kambakt
bhulaa sakaa naa ye vo silsilaa jo thaa bhi nahin
vo ek Khyaal jo aavaaz tak gayaa hi nahin
vo ek baat jo main kah nahin sakaa tumse
vo ek rabt jo ham mein kabhi rahaa hi nahin
mujhe hai yaad vo sab jo kabhi huaa hi nahin
agar ye haal hai dil kaa to koi samjhaaye
tumhen bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhoolooN
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin

Enjoy

H

Soul


OMG what a soulful analysis.

What beautiful dialogues you have written up, are these real songs?

Hats off to you.


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Yes Leaf they are real songs...
So beautiful na...
1st one is of movie 'Dil to bachha hai ji'
and 2nd one is MY FAV GAZAL of Jagjit singh!!! every time i listen to it i get goosebumps, shiver in my body and tears in eyes..!!
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The lyrics are so amazing, I am going to google them right now and listen to the melody.

Thanks friend @soul.

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Originally posted by: A_Soul

Yes Leaf they are real songs...

So beautiful na...
1st one is of movie 'Dil to bachha hai ji'
and 2nd one is MY FAV GAZAL of Jagjit singh!!! every time i listen to it i get goosebumps, shiver in my body and tears in eyes..!!


Beautiful songs...I know exactly what you mean.
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amazing ff...loved it😛
khushipugly suggestd it in her post...nd i m so glad i read it...😃
plzzz add me to ur buddylist...😳


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"Unres"
Chapter 18
The only person that stood out most for me was Garima in this chapter!!I have always found her very intriguing and someone known. Knowing the fact that She is a mother of two daughters, one being her own blood and one her adopted one,she has done very well at fulfilling the responsibility. Shasi being the loving, doting father with easy rapport with his girls, garima has that stern, strict persona as a parent even compensating Shasi... but isnt that a normal thing??!?! one of our parents is (always) little more strict... drawing lines what "not" to do And here that is Garima!! Her attachment and love to Khusi is very different and very special!! Khusi is not her daughter by blood yet she confesses to Buaji she loves her more! That proves that her tough exterior is only to keep them in line!!

U know, I can relate to the Garim and Khusi's story here. My massi's daughter came to live with us when she was 3 years. My mom literally did her upbringing... just like any mother would do! It wasnt like her parents were dead but they were separated and due to some other reasons she came into our house!! She lived with us for 9 years and went away to live with her own mom (my massi). So many things happened during those 9 years. Now when i look back, everything makes sense to me... i have answers and explanations now which i seek back then!!! If you ask me that if I liked her coming to our lives and sharing everything then NO i didnt in-fact we (me n my brother) didnt like it at first. I remember my brother asking when she will go back to her Own house!! In all this the only person who stood strong, made amends among us, made me realize that she is my sister and will live with us henceforth was my Mom. I see my Mom in Garima... Garima knows Khusi is more prone to trouble, payal being sensible she is not worried about her... its her love for Khusi that makes garima strict, inexpressive and drawing lines for her... To protect her!! She had taken in a girl as their daughter so its always a greater responsibility for her to prove herself that she is her real mother by making sure of Khusi's well being and needs!! In our case my Mom was strict to all, since R was small she used be lenient sometimes... getting away with doing things!! she got extra of everything... My mom was never bothered about me maybe becoz i was too good to fuss about!!
no it was not that.. she knew you were her own..her blood,u'll stick with her through every hardship..she had trust n faith in you.. whereas,her responsibility towards someone else's child was greater than her own children. she probably felt she could not fail at that but she could count on you ,her blood to understand all n help her.. n i see that her faith in you has paid off. if only she could read what her daughter wrote for her..she'll know she chose the right person with her set of responsibilities n she UNDERSTANDS her mom's decision well. just not that KA.. if life ever threw such a situation your way {may God forbid. but in a sense that you may have to face your own set of challenges in life]..then you'll act just the way ur mom did. with SELFLESSNESS!! she set an example for her kids.. she's a great woman. n i salute her courage n goodness.
its never easy to call someone else's child your own n just not that but to actually consider her your own. its a complex thing n i dont think i can explain it well enough.. but anyone who had doubts about Garima ever, shud read your thoughts on it.. you have done a brilliant job by explaining her character.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
she appears stern with khushi for the reasons you explained.. but she loves her the most.. just go through the earliest chps of the FF,where khushi was brought home by Shashi.. Garima didnt even question him about her.. she named her ''khushi'' n gave her the same bed payal had. even khushi herself knows this fact about garima n so never doubts her mom. i have immense love n respect for garima, coz had she been just the mother of payal..she wud be doing a normal thing coz every mother loves her child.. but here's garima,who accepted khushi n loves her even more than her own blood..she is a person who has a ''heart of gold'' n she has the courage to ''sacrifice'' for others.. there's so much goodness in her soul,her husband n others know that.. what khushi really is to her is what she called her the 1st night..''KHUSHI''... she compels you to respect n adore her,despite her stern look n ways.. this is the reason why i said ''bleeding roses'' title suits every character.. coz every person only ''appears'' to be different here..some rude..some cruel..some good..some strong..some happy..but their hearts tell a different story.. in this is why i LOVE this story.. except,if only linny wud stop acting like Gul..n stop being cruel to me n give me updates soon.. *eye brow cocked*...😆

I was given the responsibility of my brother n sister from their school uniforms to their school work!! ya tell me... i was their guardian/maid/tutor and elder sister. But i got used to it... i loved them both but was more lenient to sister like my Mom!! watching out for her more than my brother... coz he never needed,... he was basically my moms chamcha! 😆 My mom was never expressive showing of emotions... she was always busy to make sure everything was there... what we needed... on time for all of us!! Making sure her daughters were brought up correctly with good manner/habits/social rules etc. Didnt Garima doing the same??? So my mom was Like garima to R... and dad.. well dad was dad.. easy rapport... easy conversation.. smooth relationship!! My mom is still the same.. the only difference is she little soft now as i am here far away... but still strict!!
Linny when you portrayed Garima, i always felt i know her... then this chapter made me nostalgic... The only difference in your story and mine is Khusi still lives with Gupta family and Loves them to core... But I am not sure my little R, she lives away and has distanced herself from us... she is all grown up now... but whenever i remember her, its still the small girl comes to my mind!!

Sorry guys i didnt mean to bore u with my story but could not resist from sharing... I admire Garima to no end... she makes me proud and also helped in a way to know my mom little more better...I have never discussed or talked about it before.. but for some reason it feels nice!! 😃
And then Khusi finally returned home... is she same Khusi??? naahhh... Lordy unknowingly took some of herself with him... she will never be the same again...
i loved this line from you.. loved it..loved it..loved it.. you have put it perfectly beautifully right !!
🤗
I was glad all the family came to know that Letter writing was over between Gen Jha and Khusi.. so no more marriage pursuit i guess!! And did i hear Shasi's sigh of relief somewhere?? 😆
awww poor khusi... will her heart ever be convinced that she no longer part of castle or maybe someone's life???😃

well,the ''res-unres'' thingy was good i think.. who knew you would come n i'll be blown away.. superb..fantastic..spectacular dear KA!! a flying kiss for u.. like linny says to me..i never understood it before..but today even i can say that i could read your heart in the post.. WELL DONE DEAR FRIEND !!⭐️i haven't come across any comment that elaborates on garima that well.

PS; n so true about the chamcha-theory. when will they stop doing that eh?? when am angry with my brothers i always refer to them as ''mom's sons''!!😆😆😆.. n ''her son's mom''..a/c to the situation.😆

thoroughly enjoyed the post.😃



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Originally posted by: A_Soul

Chapter 120 : Thinking of the Other

It was like " Socha tha kya, aur kya nikla" update, that was the only thought in my mind after reading it, Lin!!!

so true..😆

Kushi shut her eyes, and tried to smile, "Possibly it's a sign that I must not attach affections with worldly things for the sake of keeping alive those memories that I was too young to remember."

You again did it lin'. I just cant love you enough for this' So emotionally beautiful'.

A head looked up, emerging out of the blanket. His face. He was not smiling but his eyes were twinkling with wicked amusement.

Yeeeh ye to mere saath bhi hota hain...vo bhi roz...

hahaaa..🤣🤣🤣..i can assure you that..ye bohat se logon k sath bhi hota hai.🤣

"Because you belong to Lady Lavanya," said Kushi, painfully, "She is the one for you."

Everything u said is true except the name dear.. it's Lady Soul!!!!

lol...🤣..apni property claim karney ka koi moka hath se mat janey diya karo..
🤣

Lin.. love whole scene dear.. khushi in her imagination consoling her heart that he does not belong to her and imaging that he want to change but he can't.. wow!!


A knock sounded on his door and his sister looked in, "Chotey? Are you occupied?"

Oh wow.. Lady Jha u surprised us.. .. U KNOCKED!!!

hahaaa... so true..🤣🤣🤣..n i was so busy trying to understand her intentions that i forgot to notice this.yaad rakhna,she does know what ''knocking'' is.😆

He looked at the window, and then dared to ask, "Di, after your marriage, has brother-in-law ever''.." He paused, not knowing what word to add.

"Transformed? No. Why do ask?" There was a notch of worry in her voice.

WHAT!!!! Both of them know that shyam is (or was for them) cursed and he transformed'
We readers was so curious that when n how they will come to know, how Lady Jha will react' And see here brother and his sister is talking about it just like talking about 'subji tarkari'' so normal for them..
...Kya Lin...this was totally unexpected!!!

so true😆..even i had so many things in my mind for this but..it was a big surprise for me too.. see when we saw the lordy-gen encounter,we thought he recognized the Gen. but then lin confirmed on HP's post that lordy recognized the creature n not the Gen. or atleast thats what i thought. n now am confused alot..coz even now i feel lordy's only suspicious n has not recognized the Gen as the creature.. see he said ''why'' the creature changed into this?? or something! Linny do clear this point please.

"You never are a curious one," laughed Lady Anjali, "If you really need to learn what curiosity is, spend some time talking with that dear Miss Kushi."

Smart Dialogue from lady Jha.. and wins the award of Best dialogue of update..!!

"Too late", said his sister, "She is part of our hearts and there is nothing you can do to erase our feelings for her."

i like this one better.😊

"I have no such feelings," he said firmly, frowning at the floor.

Are you sure Lordy... Hmmm, lady Jha has rightly said "TOO LATE it is"..

"I didn't say you had them," said Di, with a wicked glint in her eyes.

Exactly she didn't say ur name lordy.. Lady Jha, vo kehte hain na Chor ki dadhi me tinka..

TRUE !😉

"I have certainly no feelings for her."

I cant tell you Lordy.. yeh sun ke mere tan-man ko kitni shanti mili hain..

Soul..i'll die laughing someday.. too good yar.🤣

LIN.. Just can't stop adoring and admiring you for ur writing style... Babes u just Rock!!

That night as Kushi lay to sleep, she kept thinking of many things and among them were the memories she had in the Castle. Memories that ended with the image of a certain man who, in her hatred for him, had come to linger a lot in her mind with the growing distance of time.

He was always sore and moody during the three days that reminded them forcefully of the dreadful night he'd lost his parents. And then there were other worrying thoughts''.

what a nice connect..👏👏👏

Song of the situation:

For K and A both..

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka
Rob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambakht hai chupaye
khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dil pe shaq mera, isse pyaar ho gaya

From K

Tu bekhabar , Ya sab khabar
Ek din zara mere masoom dil pe gaur kar
Pardon mein main rakh loon tujhe
Ki dil tera aa na jaaye kahin yeh gair par

From A

Hum bhole hai , Sharmile hai
Hum hai zara siddhe masoom itni khair kar
Jis din kabhi
Zidd pe ade
Hum ayenge aag ka tera dariya tair kar

agreed with the choices but lordy kahan se bhola aur sharmila hai??😆..ya tumharey samney aa k aisa ho jata hai??🤣

Chapter 121 : That Which is Decisive

Nani cast her glance at him. He stared at her expressionlessly. She looked a lot more younger and stronger at heart lately, especially after she had begun stepping out of her room and polishing her title as 'Lady Mother' in action. It was as though she was trying to live up to Kushi's dreams now that the young girl was no longer there to prod her on in her reluctance.

Nani pe Khushi ka jadoo chal gaya..

paka paka..😛

Lin, I just love the below conversation between Lordy and LA... those words and expressions are confronting and asking for commitment.. To come straight to the point and asking directly is the best way to come out from dilemma.. On lighter note, the conversation look like the tennis match.. fast reflex actions with proper force... placing a ball in opposite court..! FAB!!

you sure have a funny way of looking at everything. n am not complaining at all.🤗

"I brought you here for a reason," he stated.

"Which is?"

He looked at his sister who was watching him curiously, "For my sister who insisted I get married."

"Really?" said Lady Lavanya, "And is this marriage?" she waved her hands between her and him.

"It is my kind of marriage, yes," he nodded proudly.

"What sort of benefit comes out of this marriage?" she asked, and all eyes turned to Lord Arnav.

He frowned, "The benefit of convenience."

"It seems so to you, I am sure," said Lady Lavanya, "But for a woman...love and, later, an offspring to keep one's name, are the sought fruits of marriage which will actually be termed as "profits" or "benefits" in your vocabulary."

Linny.. above fire-ry words takes the award for the best Dialogue of the Update..!!! Fab writing againg, the way u have presented woman's dignity that she seek after having marriage and living together, in his language of profits n benefits...

"Then you should marry someone who does not seek more than silence and callousness in her marriage and I am certain you will find no such woman," said Lady Lavanya

LA is on FIRE.. n I am loving it..

But lordy.. m ready to become a woman like this..😉

lol..😆..but he doesn't want you..i can assure you that.. magar koi nai,umeed pe duniya kayyam hai..😉😆

"This is a bond of no sort and I have not entered it to be exempted from it," she stated.

Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle Whistle...

Kya a FADU, jakkass, zandoos dialouge mara hain yaar' My heart came out for lady LA.. Touched!!

alright,i didn't see the whole fiasco in such a way.. but i see too many supporters of La here so will keep my mouth shut.. lest i earned chappals..you see you cant make omelettes out of them.. n i dont think anyone will throw good pairs..

but just two things---

1.lady la here is just as much at fault as lordy is.. its true that he didn't drag her in his house. he hid his real intentions but he clearly let her know that this is the only kind of relationship they can share.. back then even lady la didn't have issues with it n agreed to it,infact she did believe in it in a way.. but then by the passage of time she realized that bonds have a certain respectability attached to them..be it publicly or personally..n if u violate it..no1 accepts it n ur relationship becomes a joke ! but still she did make a mistake long back.. n she will pay for it. no matter how hurt she gets,she let him come this far. but it is really nice that she is willing to correct all that n is strong enough to move on if it has to come to that. but atleast for me,it was a li'l shocking that the whole family blamed it only on him,where i think they shud have handled the whole situation bit more wisely.

2. i am not sure if la really loves lordy. linny has to yet show me that..coz la doesnt show her feelings openly. i feel for her what Mr.Darcy did for Elizabeth's elder sister.

may be am wrong,n u cant blame me really coz, its been over 100 chps n there are many things that i have forgotten by now...n just look at me,am talking of it like i used to for IPKKND,OUCH !!

"My words cannot affect me," said Lord Arnav,

It affects to others baby.. n that should affect you..!!!

"But I am disappointed at what you have led Lavanya become: A woman craving for attention, for love."

Lordy.. that's a definition of woman' that is how woman like.. Craving for attention n love from the one whom she loves..atleast!!

WELL SAID Dear..👏 n it did sound quite harsh when he said that..however,i think he didn't say it coz he didnt have respect for her..but only coz he was too frustrated n angry @the situation..n saw that La too decided to stand against him n his beliefs.

It was as though the room was a vacuum and all sound and breath were held back. Everyone stared at the spectacle before their eyes, shocked with regard to how Lord Arnav would take this, while Lord Arnav stared at his sister disbelievingly, and his sister stared back at him, holding Lady Lavanya's hand, who was looking at Lady Anjali, amazed and at a loss for words.

Though I had same reaction.. but imagine the scene I had light laughter...

"It was for you," said Lord Arnav to his sister.

Yes but u hv not specified it to LA dear...

"No, it was for you and it was wrong," said Lady Anjali, and then said once again, "Apologize to her, Chotey."

She is right in a way..!!

AGREED..

He frowned at his sister, "It is not bravery that is required to apologize but cowardice!" he growled, standing before the waiting stairs, "And I am not a coward!"

Lordy... U switched the words dear... To apologize needs guts...!!!

LOL.. he has a twisted mind with twisted complications, too..just like me!!😆😆😆

His anger at her, for insisting him against his demeanor, was so evident in his expression that his sister was astonished. And then before Lord Arnav realised what he had let his sister see, his face was overcome by a look of terror as his sister's hold on his hand slackened and her eyes rolled backwards as though she were about to faint.

Aisi situation me kabhi samaj hi nahi pati hoon.. itna koi surprised ya shock kaise ho sakta hain ki behosh ho jay.. aisa film aur novel mein hi hota hain.. Hain na???!!!

agreed..thora dramatic tha.. 😆😆😆.

Song for Lavanya's feeling...

main bhool jaaooN tumhen, ab yahi munaasib hai
magar bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhooloon
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin
yahaaN to dil kaa ye aalam hai kyaa kahoon, kambakt
bhulaa sakaa naa ye vo silsilaa jo thaa bhi nahin
vo ek Khyaal jo aavaaz tak gayaa hi nahin
vo ek baat jo main kah nahin sakaa tumse
vo ek rabt jo ham mein kabhi rahaa hi nahin
mujhe hai yaad vo sab jo kabhi huaa hi nahin
agar ye haal hai dil kaa to koi samjhaaye
tumhen bhulaanaa bhi chaahooN to kis tarah bhoolooN
ki tum to phir bhi haqeeqat ho koi Khvaab nahin

lovely choice..👍🏼

loved reading ur thoughts dear soul.. 🤗

Enjoy

H

Soul

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