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hoopoe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba ve dear Aquiline... a very Happy new year to you too.
About your prenote... im stunned by your reply. Was it that nice? Honestly, i wrote the comment as usual. Didnt even do any analysis. Just verbalized my thoughts on the behaviour of the three characters. Im no good at expressing my thoughts through words... and today if you find my words worthy enough, then the actual credit goes to you for inspiring me, shass for encouraging me and my fellow comrades for supporting me in my humble attempt at commenting. Thank you. I feel extremely honoured.
Coming to the update... the title of the chapter, "That Which is Decisive" cleverly conveyed the subtle message of the chapter.
The ultimate deciding authority of the castle is not with naniji... the Lady Mother of the castle, not with Lord Manohar, not even with Lord Arnav...the actual Lord of the castle but its with his exceptional love for his delicate sister, Lady Anjali.
Lord Arnav doesnt bothers to fail the expectations of his nani, doesnt shows any regret for hurting the sentiments of Lady La, doesnt feel necessary to comply with the demands of his sister to apologize to Lady La or doesnt find it necessary to agree with Lord Manohar's words. He was and is a man of his own principles and beliefs. He neither let anyone question his principles and intrude his territory nor interfere with others sentiments.
But when it comes to his blind, devoting love for his sister, all his personal preferences not only takes the back seat but gets nullified. One delicate reaction from his sister... all his anger vanishes and is replaced by terror!!! She is his biggest weakness at present... all his decisions are aimed at his sister's convenience and they are liable to change at any time based on his sister's reception. Sounds very dangerous for the future of Arhasia...
Another interesting pattern which i observed... khushi brings out the original hidden personility of a person whomever she becomes acquainted with. Be it naniji or Lady La or Lord Arnav... she brings out the reluctant side of them which they were hesitant to show to the outside world or believed that didnt exist in them. I wonder whether this pattern apply to Gen. Jha too?
Edited by hoopoe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba Veh Miss A,

I have yet to see a student more enthusiastic about writing exams! You are one of a kind! On a serious note, I am glad they went well and you get a chance to do 'normal' things now.

Finally caught up on all the Chapters and oh my so much has happened!
The one thing that blew my mind was the new angle that you've brought into this story. The fact that both ASR and Anjali are aware of Gen. Jha's secret. That is the one aspect that separates this story from the original. It will be interesting to see how the story unfolds.

I also love the bond between the Gupta sisters.

And ASR watch out, you are no longer the master of your own destiny, yes you never apologized before but now you will (wink, wink).

As usual, enjoyed reading the Chapters and looking forward to more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy new year
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved the update,continue soon.happy new year.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Rabba ve dear Aquiline... a very Happy new year to you too.

About your prenote... im stunned by your reply. Was it that nice?
NO,it was not nice at all.. it was brilliant !! ⭐️

Honestly, i wrote the comment as usual. Didnt even do any analysis. Just verbalized my thoughts on the behaviour of the three characters. Im no good at expressing my thoughts through words... and today if you find my words worthy enough, then the actual credit goes to you for inspiring me, shass for encouraging me and my fellow comrades for supporting me in my humble attempt at commenting. Thank you. I feel extremely honoured.
Alright !! i admit it feels really good to see someone give you all the credit..n for a nano second you even believe it..but then reality knocks... no no.. BANGS at ur mind door..n u end up saying to urself; ''bas..ab itna urney ki zarurat nai hai....coz its not true. just as a 3rd person hp..i think,no matter the amount of inspiration or encouragement or support we wud have given u..if u didnt have it in you,all of it wud have gone wasted.. so take a bow dear⭐️.. n no offense to anyone,its just what i think. love u🤗❤️
Coming to the update... the title of the chapter, "That Which is Decisive" cleverly conveyed the subtle message of the chapter.
The ultimate deciding authority of the castle is not with naniji... the Lady Mother of the castle, not with Lord Manohar, not even with Lord Arnav...the actual Lord of the castle but its with his exceptional love for his delicate sister, Lady Anjali.
superbly said.. .. i thought the same but you have put it far better than i thought of it.👏

Lord Arnav doesnt bothers to fail the expectations of his nani, doesnt shows any regret for hurting the sentiments of Lady La, doesnt feel necessary to comply with the demands of his sister to apologize to Lady La or doesnt find it necessary to agree with Lord Manohar's words. He was and is a man of his own principles and beliefs. He neither let anyone question his principles and intrude his territory nor interfere with others sentiments.
agreed 100%... but frankly speaking dear hp..i do feel bad for him by the passage of time... he's many things but at times even he doesn't realize what consequences his actions in others' life can bring.but his every action is for his loved ones.. i sometimes feel they fail to tackle him..n they instigate the worst out of him.. i think this will be one thing khushi will be able to see in time n become closer to understanding him. we saw a glimpse of it in hermit chp.if only there wasn't such a huge communication gap..he wudnt be so misunderstood.but that doesn't mean i support what he does n say..
But when it comes to his blind, devoting love for his sister, all his personal preferences not only takes the back seat but gets nullified. One delicate reaction from his sister... all his anger vanishes and is replaced by terror!!! She is his biggest weakness at present... all his decisions are aimed at his sister's convenience and they are liable to change at any time based on his sister's reception. Sounds very dangerous for the future of Arhasia...

i thought the same.. but her reaction to his decision didnt come as a surprise to me. there was a line from her that i bookmarked when lordy was going for hermit hunting..where she speaks of not ''talking of truth,so bluntly''.. since then i have been sensing somethings about her. too early to talk of it,but i'm sure i'll get a chance in the future. she's much deeper than the person she appears n more fragile than we think.. the fainting thing was HUGE.. gives you so much insight into her character n bro-sis relationship. but yes..undoubtedly,she'll be the one person who'll affect him the most in every-which way.
Another interesting pattern which i observed... khushi brings out the original hidden personility of a person whomever she becomes acquainted with. Be it naniji or Lady La or Lord Arnav... she brings out the reluctant side of them which they were hesitant to show to the outside world or believed that didnt exist in them. I wonder whether this pattern apply to Gen. Jha too?
totally agree. long back i had called khushi's heart ''a mirror'' where people could see the real them. thats what i meant by it. a mirror shows the ''truth'' always. she brings the ''truth of their real being'' out. i think this is also the reason why the author chose to highlight her ''purity'' n ''innocence'' time n again. n this is also the reason why i suspect that the Gen's curse may have returned..he saw what everyone can see..he got attracted to her n the ''beast'' in him ''awakens''. whereas,lordy has been known to be a ''beast'' all his life.. his ''attraction/love'' for her got/is bringing the good in him out.. the ''beast'' gets controlled n ''man'' in him comes to life. see,he never was a bad person..but the Gen always had darker shades to him. atleast thats what i feel for now until,i see something more..*shrugs*.
All in all..a wonderful read dear pal👍🏼.. lots of kisses for ur li'l princess n tight hug for her mom. i was on a break..came just to see if there was an update..but found something equally nice. gotta go now. tc.🤗
ps; &*%^$#&@#%&*... linny..read the silence!!😉😆

Edited by shass - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
post unresed on page 7 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh!!
This thick-headed Arnav infuriates me like anything!! 😡
But he's still manages to be a darling, who can drive us crazy too!! 🤪
I feel so bad for Lavanya... Poor thing.. I hope she gets her love soon... 😒

And Anjali fainted... Poor thing... 😔

Thanks for the PM, love... 😃

PS : Mine and Lyraa's collab FF... What do I say about it.. She's busy with her exams and I with the deadlines and clients.. 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Goddamn right he has to apologize but who told him that cowards apologize? It takes great courage for a person to admit they are wrong. Thanks for pointing out that in this chapter sweetie 👏

And the chapter was amazing as in I was worried about La's stay in the house too. And now she is taking a stand by leaving - Good for her 👍🏼

Maybe Arnva will agree to marry her just to appease his sister??? And now Khushi can come back to the palace for the wedding preps and more ARHI??? Or am I getting ahead of myself??? 😕

Content to wait darling 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
😛hi I absolutely love your story I think it's amazing the way you are writing I am normally a silent reader but this deserve praising eagerly waiting for the next chapter and inshallah you will do good in your exams. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have stopped coming over to India Forums altogether, and if I do come, it is to read only your FF..

thanks for the pigeon and the wonderful update! :)

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