LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!!

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: chand1234
The thing is, mujhe samajh nhi aata mai kya comment Karun...kya likhun upd ke baare mein! :P

to tu quote kor sakti hay na...is baar ki tara???😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

baap re...10 readers 1 day mein hazir hay...itna interesting laga???...MY PLEASURE.😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: anu93
Awesomeee👏👏 Beautifully described each emotion of Chandragupt😭
And last 5 lines were Amazing👏👏
Superb SS Rumpu👍🏼

hmm...main nehi samjhunga cgm ko to aur koun samjhega??😎...

MAIN HI TOH HOON VOH
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& THANQ SOOO much anu😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Ridzzi & Prateeti:
thanxxx dear fr encouraging.😊😊

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coolpavni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

[B][/B] very very nice rumpu... Loved doz last lines...very empathetic also... :) :)

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

wow wow wow...ab bas 2 readers baki hay...Arun & Arpita😊...Polly bhi😊

thanq Pavni...🤗

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Arun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Perhaps this is the words of
inner heart of all kings...GOD
may rain them his incredible
light of affection, love & care.

These last lines are very good, all in all good story

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: TimenTIMEagain
Perhaps this is the words of
inner heart of all kings...GOD
may rain them his incredible
light of affection, love & care.

These last lines are very good, all in all good story

baap re...last part hs such a power dat it attracts my busy bro too⭐️...btw thanks a ton Arun.😊

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

rumpu :

when you ended your last update on a cliffhanger, i was left banging my head trying to guess why acharya called himself a culprit? but now as i read your update, i was like SHIT !! how can i forget this story!! but you are right, chandu's words might be the inner feelings of all those whom we call the "greatest emperors " be it of India or any other nation. keep writing. you really write well.😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: polly_03
rumpu :

when you ended your last update on a cliffhanger, i was left banging my head trying to guess why acharya called himself a culprit? but now as i read your update, i was like SHIT !! how can i forget this story!! but you are right, chandu's words might be the inner feelings of all those whom we call the "greatest emperors " be it of India or any other nation. keep writing. you really write well.😊

baap re...now none can save me from being spoilt...😉...such huuuge appreciation😳...I told na ...take it simple...no hidden meaning??😊...bt u can't forget the story...😎...awww...MY PLEASURE😊...thanq u Polly😊