NEW TR SS ON BASKETBALL MATCH updtd prt5 pg29 - Page 18

that jerk Veer 🤬

Megha dear , i wanna hug u , u have written it so beautifully .the 1st portion , i was clutchng my fist hard that jerk veer, i wanted to punch him hard on his dirty nose, creep!. 2nd part , reys anger, taanis fear, the way he consoled her, their feelings, his protectivess, her trust, the secure feeling she had, her happiness, i could feel every emotion, hats off, hats off, hats off a thousand hugs dear sis, the way u put it into words is just ... Kya yaar i am not getting the correct word to use , 1 word i so lovd it mindblowing. 3rd part , swayam. The state of a bro when he sees the bloody marks of a man on his sis ...aahhh... He cried and pulled her in a hug... His rage towards that bloody jerk , mr jerk, get ready , ur gonna get smashed.
Megha , i love u for such a wonderful work

Ughh...i hate Veer zo much!!!..
Aww...taarey<3
...n...Swayam...lol Veer's gonna be dead!!
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)

Outstanding Di...U r an awsum writer...!

veer ur going down loser!

ughh i hate veer!

Omg. Thank goodness Rey saved Taani. And Veer is gone. Just hope Swayam doesnt mu rey to be doing that to Taani. Good part as always

veer 🤬 loved TaaRey part the way they wer feelign..his touch can heal her aww..lvoed it.😳.waiting for swayums angry bhai mode!!

arghhh veer😡
nic update megha
thnk god rey waha pe aaya
update soon...:

nice update...dat veer jerk harrasing taani...omg rey is in vry pain...next part jaldi update karna