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Posted: 12 years ago
OHHH can't wait to see Swayam's reaction/response. Oh poor Taani is so scared.

Really nice story. plz pm me as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls pls pls jaldi update megha...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Awesum update megha...d way u described wat both taani n rey were feelin was gr8...n thnx 4 d pm...nw m w8in 2 c hw swayam is goin 2vreact 2 all f dis...i hope he gets hold f veer..defames b4 d authorites f nuthin else...plz update soon...thnx :)



thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Veer that bloody jerk deserve much more beating from Rey he ran for his life, what a coward. Poor Taani her Rey is their to save and take care of her. Rey love her soo much, Meg I love the way to express Rey feelings for Taani. Rey magical touch take away all Taani pain so sweet. Hmm possessive bhai saw Taarey hugging wow, idiot veer better get ready for another beating lol. Megha as always u did a fab job, I love it plz continue soon.



thanks😊...dont worry veer will get his due.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

veer- creep hurt taani.
god rey sahi time pe aa gaya...
update is awesome as always.
Rey is so much in love with Taani. the way you expressed his feelings for his love is just awesome.
Swayam is crying and feeling pain of Taani... just speechless for Taayam bond.

reyam ko milke veer ki dhulai karni chahiye.

thanks for the pm and update really soon dear. as now to cant wait more.


indian hero kabhi late nahin hote😛
dhulai, sukhai...sab hogi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

Wow...its amazing...bloody creep veer...he hurt taani...but thank god rey was there...veer deserv more punch from rey...and taarey hug is so adorable...his touch is magical...possessive bhai see taarey close...now what?plz update soon...



now what...veer ki band bajegi aur kya dipu...?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bags07

res

unres!!!!megha dear u did it again it was beautiful...loved it...loved veer ki dhulayi though dhulayi chati thi but still loved it..the way described rey s emotions n conditiob when he saw taani like this was awesm..taarey scene was heart touching..pls update soon n pm me🥱😆



thanks😊...abhi dhulai or story donon baki hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

Wow this update was amazing!!

1st rey doing veer's dhulayi!!
2nd the taarey scene was so touchy!! Taani felt rey's touch healing her pain.
And obviously swayam's anger!! Really excited for nxt update,

Plz plz plz update soon
and pm me aswell!!! Plz



thanks dear😊
dhulai and emotions...donon dose baaki hain...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

Megha dear , i wanna hug u , u have written it so beautifully .the 1st portion , i was clutchng my fist hard that jerk veer, i wanted to punch him hard on his dirty nose, creep!. 2nd part , reys anger, taanis fear, the way he consoled her, their feelings, his protectivess, her trust, the secure feeling she had, her happiness, i could feel every emotion, hats off, hats off, hats off a thousand hugs dear sis, the way u put it into words is just ... Kya yaar i am not getting the correct word to use , 1 word i so lovd it mindblowing. 3rd part , swayam. The state of a bro when he sees the bloody marks of a man on his sis ...aahhh... He cried and pulled her in a hug... His rage towards that bloody jerk , mr jerk, get ready , ur gonna get smashed.
Megha , i love u for such a wonderful work



Indu...i so love to read all ur comments...so glad u liked it.thanks dear😊 thanks a lot for liking it...and don't worry veer is gonna have a wonderful dhulai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chinudolly

👏super duper awsum,mind blowing😊,fantastic ⭐️ as always

and that creep veer deserves more punches and kicks , i hope swayum bhi jaldi jakar us creep veer ki pitai kare and teach him a lesson and taani se usko rakhi bandhvaye to maja aa jayega 😆?
long update very soon dear?





thanks dear😊 for such an awesome compliment.
no no rakhi... he doesnt deserves to have a sister dear...

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