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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

It is fantastic dr love it

Love u de

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

thank u so much frs for liking n living ur comments lov u guys..hop story perfet end ke taraf bad rahi hai..plz bare me for any rudness..

Part=13
"Bus ek moka..aaj bhi ye dil bus tumhen chahta hai..bus yakin ker ke dekho.."

SCENCE-Riya comes out washroom n sit on her bed..
the past memory hurting her most..
but the most importent the presence of surya hurting her more..
She feel deep pain in her heart..
Surya her arjun is in hospital bez of her..
just saving her life..he comes in mid..
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FLASHBACK-Their lips r few cetimeter apart from each other as they wanna to meet onces time..
But sudenly they heared one sounds..
someone brock taries door..
both comes out their dreami romentic land..
Arjun stil holding riya very near to her..
boths looks toward the sound direction..
it was non other then chuto n all team..
chotu runs toward both..
Ch-riya tu thik to hai na..or arjun sir aap..
Riya nodded her head in possitive..main thik hoon chotu ager arjun nahi hota to..
look up to face him..their eyes again meet n share a beautiful eyes look..
commision start coughing..
Ahhhm ahm..
(loll camissioner bhi thoda romance bhi nahi kerne dete)
Arjun imedeatly his grip n looked here n there..
he wanna to hide his blushing face..
vo main voo..
arjun goes near to comissioner..
Comi-So my yung boy finaly u save ur riya..
a big smiled crept on arjun face..but he controled n back to his atitude look..
Ar-yes sir i complete my mission..
Co-(In bit teasing way)so young boy ager mission complete ho gaya ..to kyun na tumhen ek naye mission per bhej diya jaye..
Ar-but sir vo main..bus riya..
mera matlab..arjun couldnt find particular word..
Co-dont wary my boy main to bus majak ker raha tha..
Abhi tum kuch time tak apni riya ke sath enjoy karo..
comissioner say excuse n live..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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On the other the same time..
Chotu with riya..ask her is she is ok n not..
Sudenly riya's graze fell on ground..
Are ye to shayad arjun ka voilet hai..
lagta hai sik se ladte waqt niche gir gaya..
She took arjun voilet n wanna to give but chotu stop her in mid..
riya voilet dene se pehale ek baar check ker lo akdo ke girl friend hai ya nahi..
jab dekho mera majak udate rehaten hai..
jara mujhe bhi to moka milana chahiye arjun sir ko tease kerne ka..
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chotu tum bhi na..
Riya kya to bhi uski side le rahi hai..
tujhe yaad hai us din..
jab hum arjun sir per najer rakh rahe they..
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(sorry one more fb)
Ri-Chotu kya ker raha hai ..thik se khada ho..
Ch-are riya thik se he to khada hoon..aaj to gin gin ker badla loonga..
kya kaha tha usne mare pat ko footbol..
Jab se es akdo acp ne najer mari hai..bechara aadha reh gaya hai..
Ri-chuto kya ker raha hai thoda dhire bol..ager us akdu ko pata chal gaya to..
Kya vo apne kamre se bahar aya..
(Chotu stood on a stool outside arjun's room n looks inside ..the same day when riya fit chemra on arjun's room..both first wanna to confarm arjun room main hai ya nahi,)
Abhi nahi riya akado abhi bhi apne room main hai..
Ri-Kya dikh raha hai..
Ch-Vo apne bed per baida hai..
or bada ajeeb behaive ker raha hai,
Ri-matlab..
Ch-matlab kuch nahi riya..
vo apne voilet se baaten ker raha hai..
Ri-what voilet se..Strange..
Ch-are ye kya riya..
Ri-kya huya chotu..
Ch-riya usne apne voilet ko kiss kiya..
Ri-ohh ho chotu voilet main uski gf ke photo hogi na..
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Riya snapped out her thought..when arjun again ask her to open arjun voilet..
Akhire ek baar open ker ke delhane main kya harge hai..

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But she also wanna to check one time..
Ager such main esaki koe gf hoye to..
but why she stil dont know..
Finaly she opened his voilet.
she was in hell shock ...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shocked..She was looking photo n alternative arjun..
her eyes feel with lot of emosions..
Is he is my surya..??
she again looks photo n then surya..
surya her love..her first n last love..he is very closed to her..
Riya again snapped out her thought..
When chotu asked her..
Ch-Are ye kya riya ye to teri bachpan vali pic hai..
per ye ladka..
kahin ye arjun sir to nahi..
per arjun sir ke pic tere sath..
to us din vo es pic ko kiss ker rahe they or keh rahe they..
main tumse bahoot pyaar kerta hoon ,or tumhare liye kuch bhi kersakta hoon..
riya again looks pic n alternative arjun..
Riya runs toward arjun..
She taking longs breath n continusly looking him..
commissioner sir notice this nleft there..
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Riya stil looking arjun..
Arjun also look her n ask..
In concern voice..
Riya tum thik..
before arjun completed..
She cubbed his face by her soft hand n kissed all over his face..(except his lips loll)
Riya hug him tightly..
n brockdown on his shoulder,
for one second arjun shocked what happened to riya..
Arjun stood same not hugging her back..
is realy she kiss me or hug..
or i m just dreaming..
She tightened her grip..Wanna to feel him..
but when she whisher his name between sobbing..
Suryaa..
arjun eyes get moised..he hav no limite of his happiness..yes she knew..i m surya..yes usne mujhe kiss kiya..yes vo meri bahon main hai..
arjun hug her tightly n hide her in his warmth embrace..
i lv u surya..i lv u so much..
u dont hav any idea how much i lv u..
Ar-i know riya i know..
main bhi tumse bahoot pyaar kerta hoon..bahoot,
tumhare bina jine ke baare main sonch bhi nahi sakta,
both stood each others arms for a long time,
(Loll arjun ko kya jarorat the bolane ki)
Ar-us incident ke baad tumse door jaaker main ek pal bhi chain se nahi so paya,
Sudenly riya pushed arjun away..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ar-riya kya huya..
Riya yelled on arjun..
Why u come back in my life..
Why surya why..?
Tumne soncha bhi kehase ke main tumhen maaf ker dongi..
Arjun not understand whats happened to her now..
Riya tum thik to ho na..he wanna to touch her but she took step back..
Aaj tak mere parents ke akhari chikhen mere kano main gunjati hai..
Nahi bhuli hoon main vo din..
Esase achha hota main bhi apne parents ke sath us din maar jati..
Riyaaa arjun yelled on her n give one slap on her..
he moves closer n held her by her shoulder..
tum janti bhi kya ho tum kya bol rahi hoo..
maine bus bahi kiya jo maa ne mujhe kaha..
Yaan main manta hoon main kuch nahi ker paya tab..
Per ager aaj mujh merna bhi pade..to bhi main piche nahi hatonga..
Riya removed his grip n shouted..nahi chahiye mujhe tumhari madt nahi chahiye..
sudenly arjun pushed riya to other side..
Ahhh...Arjun yelled with pain..
Riya looked toward arjun..
One large knife stabbed inside his stomach..
that was the same knife that sik use to killed her parent..
Riya shouted..
Suryaaa..
actualy when riya busy in kissing arjun..
Chotu turned his face to other side,unwhere the fact that sikander is also there..
When riya yelled on arjun..
Chotu stil looking opposite side..He think etane shalon baad mile hai..es vajah se riya arjun per chilla rahi hai,
On the other the same time..sikander got coinsious..
(vo apne shoes main se ek badi se knife nikalta hai..
or riya ke taraf age badta hai)
But before he stabbed knife inside her body arjun pushed riya away n knife inter inside arjun's body..
Chotu turned imedeatly n saw one knife on arjun stomach..
but before chotu reach there..
arjun vo knife nikalta hai..n stabbed inside siks body..
Ar-bahoot shook hai na tujhe dosaron ko marne ka..
he held sik by his hair..
tujhe ek baar bhi ..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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meri maa or sir ko marne se hehale..arjun twisted knife inside his body..
Sik yelled with pain..Ahhh
Ar-bahoot takleef ho rahi hai..Yaad aya kuch..
Tumne bilkul esi tarah sameer sir ko mara tha..
N give one kick on his stomch..sik is dead but he continusly kicked his dead body..
Kuch yaad aya..
Ajun try to opened his eyes..he feel litle darkness..
Arjun tightly hold his wound..
His hand fill with his own blood..
Chotu comes near...
arjun sir chodiye use vo maar chuka hai..
finaly riya comes forward to stop him..
Stoppp arjun choto use..riya yelled..
Arjun left his body n turned toward riya..
Riya saw one satisfaction smiled on his face..
Ar-arjun wishper in low voice..Riya i promise ..main tumhen kuch..arjun tried to touch her..
unkonwgly his hand put on her head or by mistake her partion fill with his blood..
Now no power left in his body..arjun fall on the ground...
arjunnn...
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In Suv..
riya put his head on her lap..n cried arjun plz opened ur eyed..plz suryaaa...
Chotu drive car toward hospital..
Shree sits pasenger sit n mahak near to riya..
But that time no one understand riya,s conditon..
She hug him tightly ..
As never wanna to let him go anywhere from her...
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TBC-
SOORY GUYS LAST THREE BAAR LAST PART LIKH CHUKI..BUT PAKKA NEXT TIME LAST HOGA..
Janaana nahi chahenge kya hooga aane last part mai..
Is ariya togher or seperate..???
ehsa kya hai us vedio mai...?? abhi bhi lot if question...
plz ab jaldy jaldy bataoo kaisa laga...dekho etane nakhare karne ke koe jarorat nahi..
verna last part...la la la laaa laa karo ya na karoo..
karongi per late..i meen depends upon ur responce..
hehehhee ur piya...

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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

lol aaj firse mein first...

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kya update diya yaar.

maza agaya

i hope Arjun is fine. he should be right??

aur riya...bechari kithnia aur royegi??

ab jaldi milwado usse

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: kunchu
lol aaj firse mein first...
😆

kya update diya yaar.
maza agaya
i hope Arjun is fine. he should be right??
aur riya...bechari kithnia aur royegi??
ab jaldi milwado usse

Hehhee helu heroine nahi royegi ...to story khatam kaise hogi...
hahhheee thank u for such a sweet comment..