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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: fatima15
fantastic update :) loved it
omg bomb on riya's body
finally arjun told her that he loves her
so happy that arjun shot sikander on his leg
love how riya was remembering all her moments with arjun
yayyy arjundiffused the bomb :)
awww she hugged him :)
precap seems interesting
arjun hurt and riya finally knows that he is surya and arjun left :(
can't wait to read next part
thanks for the pm
please continue soon

Ohhh fatiii thank u so much dr...i m always like ur comment..it make me to write more n more lolll..
dont warry jayada ne pakaongiii
lv. u dr...
n u wellcome...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1206
I loved the update!! 😃
I loved when Riya and Arjun had tht cute eyelock 😳
But stupid sik he just had to ruin it 😡
When Arjun had shot Sik in the leg 👏 I was doing a happy dance in my mind 😃
I was so scared tht maybe Sik wouldn't let Arjun diffuse the bomb on Riya but tht didn't happen 😃
When the countdown was happening for the bomb, my heart beats were going dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak fast 😆
So happy Arjun diffused the bomb 😃
After tht the hug was adorable 😳
The precap sounds interesting
I wonder how Riya will find out tht he is Surya??
Can't wait for the next one 😊

ohhh sweeti thank u so much for such a sweet n lvly comment...
tumne to mujhe maar he dala apne comments se..
i lv it how u discribed...
thank u once again...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: Arshi25031990
awesome update eagerly waiting for next updates by u thanks for pm ...i m speechless u write so well😃..Riya knew he is non other then her surya,...
Arjun left ...Arshi25031990

Thank u arshi for such a lvly comment

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: ila_tanwar
tumhre concept ache hote hai ek kaam kari jitne b ff hai arjun ke sbke pm de do ab baar baar plzz and bolke pareshaan krna acha nhi lgta...

Ohh u want rathor but ila i want to end this...
thats why no sam in comming part...
lv u dr u like my work

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: devildiva21
superb update yr...
that sik arghh... acha maza chakhya usse arjun ne...
omg riya bhi na 😆 aise time pe bhi joke kar rhi h...glad arjun diffused the bomb and saved her...
ohhhoo but ye last moment par kon aagya... kiss hone hi wali thi...
prcap is scary... arjun left?? :o
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thank u so much divya...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

PART=12
"Nahi chahta tha chupana per majboor tha..surya truth n riya's outbrast"

SCENCE-Bomb r difuse..
Arjun holding riya very close to him..
their lips r few centimeter apart from each other as they wanna tp meet onces time..
but sudenly they heared one sound,
Somone brock the teries door..
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Few hours later...
One girl spead water on her face..
she is cring continualy..
she tried to remove blood on her partion..yes her partion fill with blood..
She shouted out of her anger..whyyy why u come back in my life,
kyun kiya tumne ehsa surya (arjun)kyun,
kyun main tumhen kabhi maaf nahi karongi..
ager us din bui tum mujhe bachane ke vajaha mere parents ke help kerte to..
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flashback-(soncha jate jate sam or rosh ka flashback dikha don loll)
Sameer tum jante bhi ho aaj kon sa din hai,
sammer comes closer to his beautuful wife hold her from behind ..
Sameer ye kya ker rahe hain aap(she hits his hand that was rested on her waist)
sameer in very naughty ways..
kissed her neck n say..
achhe se janta hoon rosh aaj ka din,bhala kaise bhul sakta hoon,Hamari princess ka birthday hai aaj..
Rosh-To phir aap ye bhi jante honge ke vo tumhare bina cake nahi kategi,
bilkul tum per gaye hai,
uff main to tang aa gaye hoon,tumhen sambhalon ya tumhari princess ko..
(Sameer turned her face n make her to look him)
stil holding her in very closed to him..n leand his face closer to her lips..
Ye kya kar rahe rahe hain sam..
Rosh tum etani tenstion kyun le rahi hoo..
tum to ehse ghabrarahi ho jaise main tumhara pati nahi koe or hoon..
Roshani blush n say uff chodo sam ager riya aa gaye to kya sonchegi..aap bhi na..
Rosh tum bhi..kuch mat sochon..bus romence kerne do..or rahi baat riya ke to princess yahi sonchegi ke uske papa uski mama se kitana pyaar kerte hain..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Rosh- leav me sam..aap bhi kamal kerte hai..
es umer main romence..
Sam-es ummer se kya matlab hai ..i m stil yung..
Rosh-Achha ji..aap se baton mein jitana mushkil hai,
now leave me aab der nahi hoo rahi..
Sa-ohh haan main to tumhare chaker main bhul he gaya..
sameer give quik kiss on her lips..
Ro-plz jaldy ayega or haan apna khayal rakhiyega..
pata nahi aaj mujhe kuch dar lag raha hai,
Sa-dont warry rosh mujhe kuch nahi hoga..
or aaj es sikander ko to main pakad ker rahoonga..
Sam goes near to his daughter n kissed her forhead(she is sleeping)..happy birthday princess..
n then sam goes to surya room..
(surya study table per baid ker apni study ker raha tha)
Sameer comes inside..
Ye kya surya tum sari raat pad rahe the..
Surya smiles n toched sameer feet..
Vo kya hai na sir ek din main bhi apki tarah ek polish officer banana chahta hoon..
sameer comes near n kissed his forhead...
(lolll ehse to bahoot se think hai likhane ko ..heehhee Pura ff ban jayega..so cut ker rahi hoon)
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time night..ten o clook..
all house is messup..
Riya birthday cake is distroyed..
Sikander n his man attack in rathore house in absence of him..
Roshani try to controed the situation..
firstly she hid surya n riya in one almiya..
Riya cried n ask her mom whats the matter..
Surya promise me..
ager mujhe kuch ho jaye to tum riya ka khayal rakhoge..
surya nodded in watery eyes..
Riya-no mom main aap ko chood ker kahi nahi jaongi..
surya ese jaldy se le jao yahan se..esase pehale sik ke adami upper aa jaye..
Surya hold riya's hand..
mujhe nahi jana chodo..
mujhe mom dad ke pass jana hai..
Roshani kissed riya n surya forhead n hide both in one almeera..
Roshani took her gun..
But before she could done sik n all mans comes up..
Sik laugh loudly hahahhhaa
kitana samjhaya tha maine tujhe or tere pati acp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Sameer ko door raho mujhase per nahi..
bahoot shock hai na use mujhe pakadne ka..
he took one long knife n stabbed her in her stomach..
AHhh...roshani yelled with pain..
Riya saw this..she wanna to shouted but surya put his hand on her mouths..
but he can feel her tears on his hand..
Roshaniii...chod do use..a voice comes from behind..
few minute before...
Sameer stop his suv outside his house..he took one big pink tedy in his arms n moved inside his house..
He was happy bez..sikander ko na sahi but he arrested his brother sultan n most importent..today is her daughter birthday..
He comes inside..n saw his whole house is messup ..
riya's birthday cake floor per pada hai..
He cant neglect all these thinks..
he put tedy on a flore took his gun n muched up..
bez he heared some noice..
His eyes widend to saw sik n his man..
Sik took one long kine n stabbed her wife stomach..
Sameer screemed roshaniii...
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took his gun..
n wanna to shoot..but sik stop him..nana acp ehsi galti maat kerna..
First time sameer feel helpless in his life..
her beautiful wife is brutly hearted by sik..
N he cant do anythink..
Sam looks rosh n rosh to..
(Ups mujhe to rona aa gaya..)
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Siks man hold sam..
sikander gives one tight punch on sameer face..
n give one cut on his chest..
(Sorry i hv to cut this)
sik laugh evily..n
but sameer sucessful to free himself..
he give one tight panch on sik face..n kick on his stomach..
sik all man comes forwad ..
sameer fight with all man..
he killed mostly his man..
In one point sik took advantage ..when same fight with other of his man..
he took his knife..n wanna to stabbed from behinde..
but roshani came imedeatly n knife..made his way indside her stomach..
Sammm...she screemed in pain..
sam was hell shocked..
His beautiful lvly wife lying on

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Sikander without waist any second stabbed sameer with the same knife..
he laugh evily finaly ..he sucessfull what he wanna to do..
Riya looked all this inside the almira hol..
tears dont wanna to stop her beautiful eyes..
On the other..surya's condition was same..he again lost his parenst bez of sikander..
n he cant do anythinl bez he promise to rosh ...
After few minute when sikander gone..
Surya open almiya n comes out with riya..
Riya was like a pupet..
She didnt understand whats happened in few second..
her father n mother laying on a floor..hav no sign of life in their body..a lot of blood spread arround the ground
she comes near to her mom sit closer to her..touched her face with her small hand..
riya sobing n crying badly..
Moma pla bahot huya ab ud jaye..plz..dekho ab to papa bhi aa gaye ab cake katenge..
she moves toward her dad..
dad get up dekho mama ud nahi rahi hain..mujhe dar lag raha hai..
daddd udiye na..plz
mommm dad...
Riya screamed ourt loud..
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(riya looks toward mirrior)
the blood red color stil not remove her patition..
why surya why u come again..
i hate u n i never forgive u..never..
she spread more n more water on her face..
sudenly her phone start ringing..
she looks the collor id..
ut was mahak..
Riya wipped her face..
haan mahak..
Mahak-Vo thik hai..operation successful raha..doctor ne abhi use icu main shift kiya hai..
(she took a long breath n say thank to god for saving his life)
Riya tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi..
tum use milogi nahi..
hellow riyaaa..riya line is dead..
She comes out her washroom..n sit on a bed
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what haapned few hours before-
Arjun wanna to kiss her but one sound distubed both n boths comes out their dream land,
it was non other then chotu jisane darwaja choda tha..
arjun stil holding riya near to both
TBC-
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