SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed*

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

hi piya🤗... awesome part...ariya☺️😉😉😉😉😉... hope mehak is safe...last ariya scene was so good... precap mein riya hai kya???...i mean unn goons ke paas

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

lovely updates!!!:)

lakin cliff hanger again...precap looks intrsting!!!

hayee arjun got a good to shut riya...!!!

aww riya still loves surya so nice...!!!!!

when will she get to know arjun is her surya!!!

update soon plzzz!!!

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umamah70

@umamah70

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

wow awesome...

loved it...

arjun kissed riya...

riya ki body mein bomb...

OMG..

nice precap ...

update soon...

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bellasha

@bellasha

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Alwaya awesome update dr..
lolll me blushing..
arjun ne koe mokka nahi choda kiss kerne ka..
riya stil lv arjun..
hop every miss understanding clear soon..
precape seems scary update soon...

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

kissing session bohot accha tha

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

thoda change ...but plz read..
sorry to disspoint u guys its not last part..hehheeehhee

Part=10
"Arjun promise..always with u..tum chaho na chaho..."

Arjun saw chotu in college basment...
Ar-tum yahan kaise aye,
ch-Sir accutualy jab main or mahak college pahonchen..
to hamne kuch ajeeb dekha,
maine yahan sikander ke adami ko dekha..
vo phon per sik se kuch baat ker raha tha..
or haan sir use riya ke baare main bhi pata hai,
yes he knew riya esi college main padati hai,
Arjun was shocked
what..? ager sikander ko pata hai to..
Arjun connect all dots..
ohh no ab samjha ke usne eshi college ko hi hostage kyun banaya..
Use ye to pata hai,riya yaha hai,but he didnt ho anythink about her..
But tum dono yahan kaise..
Ch-sir main use pakadne he vala tha tabhi achanak kise ne mujhe piche se mara..
Or mujhe nahi pata uske baad kya huya..
Ar-tum yahan ho..per mahak kahan hai..
Ch-mujhe nahi pata sir lagta hai vo log mahak ko le gaye..
---
-on the outer-in one room-
One man give one tight slap to one girl on her face...
ber cornner of lip cut n start bleeding..
n held her by her hair..
Ahhh(girl feel pain)
Man-jo tere baap ne kiya ab us ke saja tujhe milegi..
jis tarah tere baat or maa ko mara thik usi tarah..
tujhe bhi marna hoga..
but not soon dr..just wait for some more time..
jab tak mujhe mera bhai nahi mil jata..
--
On the other hand riya stil hide herself on a lab..
but riya is riya
(how could she sit like a doll..)
es arjun ko jo kerna hai ker le ,per main haath per haath rakh ker nahi baid sakti,pata nahi baki sab log kaise honge..
mujhe unke liye kuch to kerna hoga..
--
Arjun told every to chotu..
Ch-Dont warry sir main aap ke sath hoon,
arjun looked in a watch n say..
Chuto hamare paas bus half n hour bacha hai,eske baad ye pori jagah dhamake ke..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

sath udd jayegi.. Arjun show one map.. chotu es map ke according sare student accembly hool main hain, or hamen kise tarah vahan jana hoga or sare student ko safly
(show one tanel on map)..
es raste se bahar nikalna hoga, Or haan jahan tak meri calculatiom hai,hol main jayada gone nahi honge, ab jaldy se kapde change ker lo,
Ch-sir kapde kyun en kapdon main kya kharabi hai
(in mind Sir to ehse keh rahe hain jaise hum kise beauti contest main participate kerne jaa rahe hai) Arjun rised his one eyes brows as he understand what chotu was thinking,
Ar-ye kapde un gono ke hai jise maine thodi der pehale mara tha..
ager hum en kapdon main jayenge to ab samjhe ya samjhayon..
Arjun n chotu both moves toward the accembly holl.. Without making any noice, Arjun n chotu look n nodded each other
(Sorry guys i m poor in action scence...lolll..)
Ayee ye rona dhona band karo.. tumhen kya lagta hai,ke tum log bach jaoge..
(It was non other then arjun behaving like gona)
one gona comes from behind tum dono kahan reh gaye the..
achha hai tum dono aa gaye,tum dono yahan sambhalo hum abhi ate hai.. all gona left leaving behind arjun chotu n one more hoga..(gona not recognised bez their mouth covered with mask) Arjun signal chotu,
Chotu-to other gona.. tumhen nahi lagta tum bahoot thak gaye hoge,lao apni gun miujhe pakda do.. gona chotu ke taraf jata hai, chotu covered his mouth n arjun give tight punch gona fall on the ground,
chotu was impressed are wah sir..
both imedeatly open their mask.. dekhiye aap log ghabraye maat ham dono polish se hain..hum aap sab ko bachane ke liye aye hai,
Ar to ch-chotu tum ensab ko sahi salamat tanal vale raste se bahar le jao.. tab tak main en gondo ko dekhata hoon, chotu nods his head in positive.. chotu guid all n all follow him.. all safly comes out

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

few minute before--
On the other riya heared on sound inside the room..
she slowly open door n saw one man slap one girl..
riya's eyes popout to saw mahak their..
Man held mahak by her hair n shouted..
jis tarah tere maa baap ko mara..tujhe bhi usi tarah marna hoga..
Riya sameer dhamsing rathor..
but mahak gives one satisfation smile..
tum mujhe maar ker bhi nahi maar paoge..
Riya hearing every thing from outside..
yes he was the same man who killef her parents in front of her eyes..how could she forget that crual day..
but she is confused why that man say mahak to sameer doughter..
ohh no ye mahak ehsa kyun ker rahi hai,no main mahak ko kuch nahi hone dongi,
On the other man saw she is smiling ..how could any one smile on him..
he gave one hard slap on her face,tumhare himmat kaise huye mujh per hasne ki..
nooo chod do use..riya shouted from behind..
plz chod do use..
Ager tumhen marna hai to mujhe maro...
bez vo riya nahi main riya ho riya sameer rathor,
----
on the other-
arjun goes the same direction where the all gonas gone,
Arjun saw one gonaa is bussy on a phone,
no sir abhi tak hamen koe info nahi mile,per un logon ke pass koe option nahi,
yaah unlogon ko sultaan ko chodana he padega..
or haan main aap ko use ladki ke photo send ker raha hoon..
Arjun listing all this convo--
ye kis se baat ker raha tha,or ye kis ladki ke photo ke baat ker raha tha..
--
chotu safly sare students or teacher ko college ke bahar le ata hai..
comi n shree runs there..
Comi-chotu tum yahan or arjun mahak or riya..
Sur arjun sir ander hai,mahak ka kuch pata nahi or riya ka bhi..
arjun sir ne mujhe kaha tha riya lab main hai,lekin jab main vahan gaya to vo vahan nahi the..
mujhe vapis ander jana hoga arjun sir ke help ke liye,
chotu shree n some other polishman goes inside
--
arjun moves

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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

One goma saw arjun..
He comes forward ..before he shoot arjun..
arjun took his guns in boths hand n shoot all gons..
but left single one..

(which talking his bos)
arjun pointed his gun on his head..
bata tera bos kahan hai,
hahhaaahhaa man laugh..
tumhen mere bos ke bare main nahi balki apni mehbuba ke baare main sonchana chahiye..
Shutan ko bhale hi hum nahi choda paye,per tum apni mehbooba ko bhi nahi bacha paoge..
tumhare pass sirf das minute hai...
bacha sakte ho to bacha loo..
or uske baad bombb...
hahhaahhaa befor arjun could ask more..the man shoot himself..
dammm...
arjun fustrated moves his hand on his hair..
soon chotu shree n comi came their...
Com-kya huya arjun tum thik to ho naa..
Ar-kuch thik nahi hai sir riya ke jaan khatare main hai..
or hamare pass sirf ten minute hai..
or etane bade college main use dhonge bhi to kahan..
arjun shout her name..
Riyaaa riyaaa kahan ho tum...
all search riya in every possible place..
Riyyyaaa...
---
in one room..
one girl is tied with rop her mouth covered..she heared riya's name..
but haapened few minute before-
Yes leav her ..bez i m riya..
the man got fustrated he call one his man
(the same guys who killed himself)
yes bos..
jaldy pata kerke batao..ye riya rathore kaise dikhati hai..
man called college clark n ask about riya..
jaldy se riya rathor ke bare main batao..
clark imedeatly giv info n gona send photo to him..
now finaly cleared..who is riya..
Man comes near to riya n held her by her hair..
to tum ho riya ..
not bad bilkul apni maa per gaye ho,
bilkul uski he tarah kubshurat...
riya give him angry look..
apni gandi juban se meri mom ke bare main ek labj bhi maat nikalana ..samjhe tum,
man give one tight slap.
ohh i can i forget..akhir us sameer rathor ka khoon ho,
Kitana samjhaya maine use meri life main

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Kitana samjhaya maine ke mujhase door raho,
oer meri soni he nahi..
akhir marna pada use..
or ab tumhari bari hai..
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arjun n all team searches riya madly in all possible places..
but no sign of her..
arjun heared one sound its coming from one room..
Arjun goes inside..
He was shocked to saw..
mahak she was tied with rop n her mouth covered..
arjun runs toward her n open her mouth first..
mak-Arjun plz save riya..uske pass jayada waqt nahi hai..plz save her..
aap meri phiker mat karo..
Arjun ask her about riya..
Mahak riya.. riya kahan hai,
vo adami use teries per le gaya tha..or
Ar-or kya mahak..
Mah-or arjun bomb ...uske body per bom..
she couldnt complete her sentance n fell uncoinsious..
arjun call chtu n shree..
shree help her n chotu vo bomb defuse kerne bale log kaha hai..
sir vo college main lage hai..
ohh shit jaldy unhen bolao..
arjun run's toward teries..
nathing will happened to u riya nothing..
maine khud se or sir se promise kiya hai..
--
time five minute left-
At teries--
arjun saw one man holding riya by her hair..
Arjun shout out of his voice..
leav her i say leav her sikander..
Sik-Nooo ab etani bhi kya jaldy hai,mujhe bhi koe shok nahi ehse pakadane ka main to bus esaki help ker raha hoon..
ehse esake parents ke pass bhej raha hoon..
Ar-Noo tum ehsa kuch nahi karoge..
Sik-(A evil smile)ups main kahan kuch karonga..
jo bhi karenge eski body per lage ye bomb karenge..
Arjun notice bomb on riya's body..
arjun looks riya n riya to..
they share a beautiful eyes looks..
time unke hath se nikalta ja raha tha..
in mind..dont warry riya main tumhen kuch nahi hoona donga..
Ri-in mind..arjun just go..ab mujhe koe nahi bacha sakta..plz go just save ur life.
Ar-no main tumhen jhod ker kahin nahi jaonga..
Ri-whyy u dont leav me
Ar-bez i i...i
TBC-
IS HE SAVE HER?