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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: 12pr
it wasawesome
great update👏👏
and tnx for pm
update soon

Thanks dr i will try to update soon

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: devildiva21
superb update..!!!
lvd it..!!!
bechara shree bin baat ke hi phass gya..!!!😆
hahaha riya ne shree r arjun ko rat kaha..!!!🤣
shree r uske gadgets lol..!!!
bt uss video mai aisa h kya.??😲
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!
continue soon...!!!

Thank thankkk dr for ur sweet n lvly comment ...i m so happy after reading ur comment...hmmm that vedio...kuch chijon ko philhal raj hi rehane do

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: madmadona
liked arjun's threatening
poor shree😆
precap is so interesting
cont soon

Thank u dr for ur lvly comment n i will tryyy

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: life93
<font color="#0099ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi piya🤗brilliant update dear👏...so riya ne arjun ka video banaya wo bhi shree ki help se poor shree use to pata bhi nahi ki wo kis pit me girane wala hai...😆...riya ne arjun ko rat kha🤣...sara kamaal to riya ka hai ab woh arjun ko apne ishaaron pe nachayegi...update soon...
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note: dear in a week a have my pre university xams so may be i cant comment till 6 feb but dont worry i will read update on daily basis plz don't mind n prey 4 me</font>

Thankkk u soo much dr..i feel realy happy arter reading ur comment..all the best for ur exam

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: yas23
great update
poor shree he got scold frm arjun
intersting precap
cont soon

Thanksss dr i will tryyy

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
HEy.. continue soon!!!

Thank i will try dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Thank u so much fr for liking n commenting ...i m back with my next part hope u like n enjoy...n sorry if i disspoint any one...
sorry for any mistake...n dont forget to leav ur comment...its realy imortent me to write next part...
thank u my lvly frrr
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PRECAPE-CHAPTER-7-
GOONS ATTAC COLLEGE N OVER TAKE ALL COLLEGE...IS ARJUN SAVE HER??????
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SORRY IF I DISSPOINT ANY ONE...Hop maine es update se bor nahi kiya hoga...if i do...so again forgive me...lv u all ...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

**CHAPTER-6**
"uff ye blackmailing"

SCENCE-
All eating dinner silently on the dining table...riya mahak n chotu sit together..
n arjun sit other corner of the dining table...only shree is missing..he collect all information ...about servent gard n member living n working in riya's house...as per arjun strict intraction...
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Kanta masi..
(she is similer as her mother n take care riya since childhood n mahak mother)
serve dinner to every one..
R-masi stop servinig dinner to us..how many times i will say...ye kaam servant ker lengen...
M-yes mom plz sit..
masi-no princess u kno... jab tak tum or mahak kuch kha nahi lete to main kaise kha sakti huin...to chup chap dinner karo..
R-no masi plz badiye na..
masi-ok..tum kabhi nahi sudharogi...bilkul apne papa ke taraha jidhi ho...
hearing her dad name..riya's eyes feel with water...but she mentain her fack smile..
voo mera dinner ho...
mahak hold her hand n make her to sit there...maa app bhi na kuch bhi kabhi bhi bolti ho...
Masi-i m sorry my princess vo aaj achank ...
R-its ok masi or vaise app ko kya laga main udas huin(create smile on her face)...ehsa bilkul nahi hai..app bhul rahi hain main kiski baiti huin..she feel proud to her parents..or maine unse promise kiya hai..main kabhi udas nahi honge..chaliye ab ese kya dekh rahi hai mujhe bhok lag rahi hai..ab jaldy jaldy se tum sab khilayo mujhe..
mahak chotu n massi feed her one by one...
are yr bas karo or kitna khilaoge..kya sari kaser aaj he puri karoge..
Chotu-are abhi to khilana shuru kiya hai...etani jaldy kaise..n dont warry riya ager tum moti ho gaye to main huin na...
hahahaaahha all brust out with laugh.
R-chotuuu!!! tumhen to main dekh longi..
Arjun observing all this very carefully..arjun impresed to see riya's soft corner side..when

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Posted: 12 years ago

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she inssist kanta masi to sit n eat dinner with us...n feel bad for her when she tried to left bez of hearing her dad name...but when mahak hold her n made her sit again ...he feel relife..he kno her very well she is soft hearted n innosent...but the crul insident changed everything ...that was happened in childhood..dont warry riya..i promise main tumhen kuch nahi hone dunga..us sikander to tumhare pass tak nahi ane dunga..i promise main. jald he..us sikander ko jail ke salakhon ke piche..kerke rahunga..or rathor sir n roshani maa ko justice dilaker rahunga..

AFTER DINNER ALL LEFT TO THEIR RESPECTIV ROOM..
only arjun n shree both r not driffted into sleep..shree is bissy for collecting info n arjun is observing each n every corner of her house is the house is totaly safe ..or not..
after checking all security ...he goes to his room n ..start reading the case file of sikander...he did not wanna to miss any single clue or info about sik..he hv no idea when he sleep..
NEXT MORNING--all take their lunch...
IN ARJUN ROOM--
Shree gave all information to arjun..
sh-sir yahan per kul five servent hai..
1driver-mohan
2-kali-for cleaning
3-sheela-for cocking
4-ramu-watchman
5-shamu-for gardening
n kanta mosi she is handle n instrict all servent..n maher her daughter..n riya's best fr..just like her real sister..
n chotu riya's bodygard..n her best fr
ashish sharma-one lawyer those handle all ligle work..
20 gaurd...protecting that house for 24 hours..n giv all other information to arjun ..as their adreess n their background...ect..
SUDENLY ARJUN PHONE RING!!!!...befor picked his phon..
A-gud job shree..now go n. tak some rest..
Sh-no sir i m fine..
A-just sut up shree..go n take some rest..samjhe ya samjhayon..
arjun picked his phon...
A-hellow..what??kya kaam hai..ok i will c

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

come n cut the call..
on the other side..
Ri-mohan aaj tumhari chuti..
Mo-per baby ji aap ke car kon drive karega,
R-uski tenssion tum mat lo..vo sab main manage ker lungi..
she dialed one no. mujhe tumse ek important kaam hai..jaldi se aa jao..
after ten minute one person is came there..
haan bolo kya kaam hai..
R-vo kya hai aaj mare driver ke chuti hai..or mijhe college jana hai..
To aaj ke liye tum mere driver ho...
What????tumhara dimag to thik hai..
R-abhi tak to ekdam thik hai..per kab tak...
ab tum drive ker rahe ho
yaa ..
ok fine..
R-are mr acp tumhen etna to pata hona chahiye ke...tum aaj ke liye mere driver ho to car ka door kon kholega..
ab tum khol rahe ho ya phir..
A-pissesed his teeth n open his side door for her..
she smile for her litle victory
n sit..ab kya huya..khade kyuin ho..
A-kyuin. tumhare fr or tumhara bodygard tumhare sath nahi jayega..
R-are vo dono to college ke liye pehale he nikal gaye..
A-what!!! ye chuto tumhara bodygard hai ya mahak ka..eski to special khaber leni padegi
R-oh hellow ab ye ghurna bund karo or jaldi se drive karo..
arjun silently driving car n riya listing song on her phone n making funy face..
A-stop listing music, u distrrect me..
R-ohh hellow mr acp main apne mobile per sun. rahi huin or vo bhi head phon laga ker..to phir tum disstrect kyuin ho rahi ho.
ab chup chap car chalo.
stop stoppp stop the car..
A-ohhh just sut up kabhi kehati ho car chalao or kabhi kehati ho stop karo..pehale decide ker lo kya karon..
R-apna dimag use kerna band karo...now car se bahar niklo..or jaker mere liye..vo roje vala boke le ker ayo..
A-what?
tumhare liye flower or main.
but arjun hv no other choise..he goes out the car n buy one boke for her.
when arjun goes near the car before arjun can reach riya start car..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago