SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed* - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

kya tha..
Sh-sir mujhe kaise pata hoga ke use vedio main kya tha..
maine to bus use ek micro chemra diya tha..
A-u meen u realy dont kno ..ke vedio main kya tha..
arjun feel relex ..thank god shree ko kuch nahi pata..
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(Ajun controld his anger, bez he wana to kno that shree knows about vedio or not..)
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Sh-yes sir i realy dont kno.. usane kaha tha gher main..
do bade rats aa gaye hai..bus unhe ko gher se bahar nikalana hai..
unhi ko pakadane ke liye use ek mini chemra chahiye tha..
or maine de diya..
A-what usane mujhe rat..
Sh-sir any problem app kuch weired behave ker rahe hai...
A-use to main bad main dekh lunga per abhi tumhari baari hai..say in mind..
no shree main to bilkul thik
huin per tumhara kuch kah nahi sakte ...tumhe bahut shok hai na dusaron ke help kerne ki...
ab apne help kerna ..
mujhe morning se pehale..
es gher main jitane servant hai ..jitane log rehate hai.
jitane gard hai..
sabki puri information chahiye..
Sh-per sir eske liye to...
Arjun giv an angry look..
lagta hai tumhen samajh nahi aya..morning matlab morning tak mere room main sari detail hony chahiye..
samjhe ya samjhayon..ab kuch puchana hai tumhen..
Sh-sirrr voo dinner..
A-tumhare room main bhijva diya jayega..or ager mujhe morning tak report nahi mili to...tumhara transfer ehse jagah kerva dunga...ke new gaget ko dekhane ke liye bhi taras jaoge...
ab yahan satue ke tarah kyun khade ho jao jaker apna kaam karo..
Sh-in mind--pata nahi yr kis baat se ye kadus etna naraj hai..kuch karo to problem kuch na karo to problem...
tum darna nahi mere new gaget..main tumhen chod ker kahin nahi jaonga ye tumhare shree ka promise haii...
**
SCENCE-What happened few ours before
FLASHBAKE-
after commissioner left..
the tro riya ,mahak n chotu goes in riya room--
riya sit silencetly on bed...mahak sit on




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Posted: 12 years ago
piyarani...mujhe tum apani writing gallery ka pata dedo...


dear itane sare writings aur wo bhi itane achhe ...mein to address dhundate hi rehati hoon



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Posted: 12 years ago
on sofa n chotu stsnds near window..
Chotu-samajhata kya hai vo acp apne aap ko..sabke samne kitane insult ke mare..mere pat ko football kaha..mere body per nejar lagaye...meri etani insult aaj tak kise ne nahi ke...
ese to main sabak sikha ker rahunga...Acp hai to kya huya...
Ma-are etna bhi bura nahi...kitana hansome or smart hai...uff usase to najer he nahi hat rahi the meri...
ch-ohh meri help kerne ke vajah tum us acp ke tarif ker rahi ho...tum meri fr ho ya use acp ke..riya ab tum he kuch bolo...
riya riya ...tum sun bhi rahi ho ke main kya bol raha huin...
R-chotu relex tum etna hipper kyuin ho rahe ho..
use mujhe daraya na...ab dekhana us acp ko naa daraya to mera naam change ker dena...use apne fingers per nahi nachaya phir dekhana ..
dont warry chotu just relex tum sab mujh per chod do...
after few minute riya saw shree ...who is cheking chemra in all over ..sudenly one idea struck on riya's mind...ab. dekhati huin es acp ke bachhe ko...mujhe daraya tha na or chotu ko mota kaha tha ab ese bhaga bhaga ker nahi thodaya to mera naam bhi riya nahi...
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RIYA GOES NEAR TO SHREE
R-ohh hay u r shree right
Sh-hii yes i m
R-what r u doing here
S-ohh nothing special ..i m just cheking chemra here..
R-ohh i see..tumhe to kaphi knowlegde hogi sab gagets ke bare main
S-ohh yes ..ab apne muh se apne kya tarif kerne..tumhen kuch kaam tha

R-yes kaam to tha per tum etne bissy ho to main baad main ati huin.
Sh-are nahi nahi etna bhi importent nahi .
plz tel me what can i do for u
R-ohh thank u so much shree..vo acctualy kya hai.
mere gher main do bade bade rats ghus gaye hai
unhi ko pakadane or gher se nikalane ke liye mujhe.
mujhe ek chemra chahiye tha
Flashback end
T.B.C
PRE-
1-RIYA'S NEW DRIVER.
2-GOONAS ATTACK RIYA'S COLLEGE.. TAKE OVER WHOLE COLLEGE
3-IS ARJUN SAVE HER?


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

piyarani...mujhe tum apani writing gallery ka pata dedo...



dear itane sare writings aur wo bhi itane achhe ...mein to address dhundate hi rehati hoon




Ohh thank u so much dr ,ab etani bhi tarif maat karoo..
kahin. main asmaan main. udane lagonnn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waw its cool i love this
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh awesome how she tricked them,
hope arjun saves her
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part... poor Shree he dnt evn knw wat he has done... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
feeling so bad for shree 😆 poor guy doesn't even know what he did...
loved the way arjun was getting mad at shree...
loved ajrun's dialogue "tumhara transfer aisi jagah kerva dunga... ke new gadget dekhane ke liye bhi taras jaoge" so funny
precap seems interesting
can't wait to read next part
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
bechara Sree...
fas gaya dono ke bich...
Update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome
great update👏👏
and tnx for pm
update soon

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