ARIYA FF : Tere Liye [To be Continued by 'vishav'] - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Update was really gud...
shocking too!!!!!
roshni was involved in illegal activity...
married to riyaz!!
Only use arjun!!!!!
rathod n shreetu entry ekdum filmy style...!!
riya shot..
hope she fine soon..
plz dnt make another secret hehe..!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Loved rathore entry and his dialouge...
So riya is arjun's childhood love...
I feel bad for riya...
Wt is going un happen..come soon yaar waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
antastic update dear :)
hate roshni so much.. i'm glad that she is dead..
so riya is arjun's childhood love :)
loved rathore's dialogue "itni bhi kya jaldi hai ex bhabi"
hope nothing happens to riya..
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome update
want to kill roshni, hope riya is fine
cont soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 12 years ago
#75
thnx for liking the twist i made in the story! seriously i always wanted this to happen in real...😊😃😊

i am really enjoying these winter holidays, free of all tension and story writing helps me out of boredom. so i am on my way of writing the next part!

( u know my little sister is currently busy with her exams and hence when she sees me all free she calls my vele, then i always hum the song " sanu vele kainde sanu ki! "😉 )

enough of my chatar patar, seriously i appriciate the way you all responded through comments, i hope that my further updates will also get such a beautiful respone.

in short THANK YOU! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wow.. nice update..
bechara Arjun.. Riya ko Arjun ko batana chahiye tha yaar about her real identity..
but achcha hai nhi bataya warna Mr. Samjhe Ya Samjhaun ko bura lagta.. update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
awersome, mindblowing fantastic superb, part i loved it and please pm me next part
Posted: 12 years ago
#78


Chapter : When The Secrets Got Revealed ;
Part = My True Love, My Soul-mate


ARJUN HELD RIYA CLOSE TO HIM, TO FEEL HER HEARTBEAT AGAINST HIM, TO ASSURE HIMSELF THAT SHE IS GOING TO BE FINE, SHE IS HIS FOREVER, SHE WILL LIVE...FOR HIM.

SHREE WHO WAS SITTING ALONG WITH ARJUN ( WHO HELD RIYA ) WAS CONSTANTLY LOOKING AT HIS BEST FRIEND WITH ADMIRATION, HOW CAN SHE BE SO SELFLESS? TEARS WERE NOT LEAVING RATHORE'S EYES AS WELL, HE GLANCED AT HIS BRAVE SISTER ( NOT BLOOD RELATED, BUT...A LITTLE SECRET ) LYING UNCONCIOUS IN HER HUSBAND'S ARMS! TODAY, HE FELT A NEW KIND OF FEELING FOR HER, RESPECT, WHEN HE CAME TO KNOW THE WHOLE TRUTH, HIS RESPECT FOR HER INCREASED 100 FOLDS. CHOTTU WHO WAS DRIVING AS FAST AS HE COULD WAS THINKING, THAT THE FARGILE LOOKING GIRL WHO USUALLY COMMENTED ON HIS SIZE, HELD SO MUCH PAIN INSIDE HER!

ONCE INSIDE THE HOSPITAL, RIYA WAS RUSHED TO OPERATION THEATRE, LEAVING BEHIND, A HELPLESS HUSBAND AND TENSED BROTHERS OF HERS. ARJUN BROKE DOWN COMPLETELY...

Arjun: kyon? kyon samajh nahi paya main usse? kyon karti hai woh mujhse itna pyaar? usne mujhe apna sab kuch diya aur maine sirf usse liya hai sam, kuch nahi kar paya main uske liye, aur aaj woh meri wajah se...

Rathore: sambhalo apne aapko arjun! kuch nahi hoga riya ko! kuch nahi.

Arjun: waise tum logon ko pata kaise chala ki hum kahan hai, aur woh...

Shree: actually sir, aapko yaad hai ki aaj subah main riya ke ghar aaya tha, mujhe toh sab sach us din hospital mein hi pata chal gaya tha! i was concerned about her so i gave her earings which were earphones, a pendant which was a hidden camera and microphone and a wrist watch which had transmitter in it. when u both didn't showed up at time of grahpravesh, i was damn sure that something happened...and as riya was wearing that watch and pendant...we were able to trace you both.

THIS TIME ARJUN DIDN'T SAW A CAREFREE AND CARELESS ETF OFFICE SHREEKANT SEN IN FRONT OF HIM, BUT AT PRESENT THERE STOOD SHREE, A LOVING FRIEND AND AN INTELLIGENT PERSON INDEED.

WHILE THESE 4 MEN WERE TENSED, SUDDENLY THERE ENTERED THREE ELDERLY COUPLES, THEY ALL WERE IMMENSLY TENSED...

ARJUN RECOGNIZED THE FIRST COUPLE AS HIS PARENTS = MR. SURYAKANT RAUTE, HIS FATHER AND MRS. SHOBHA SURYAKANT RAUTE, HIS MOTHER.

THE SECOND WERE RIYA'S PARENTS = MR. RAJESH RAJVANSH, HER FATHER AND MRS. SUCHITRA RAJESH RAJVANSH, HER MOTHER.

BUT THE THIRD ONE, RATHORE IMMIDIATELY RECOGNIZED THEM THEY WERE MR. RAKESH RATHORE AND MRS. NISHA RATHORE, HIS "PARENTS. BUT WHAT WERE THEY DOING HERE?" THAT WAS ALL RATHORE COULD THINK AT THAT MOMENT.

Arjun: mom...

ARJUN WAS ABOUT TO SPEAK MORE BUT COULDN'T BECAUSE HIS MOTHER SLAPPED HIM HARD ON HIS FACE, WHICH STUNNED EVERYBODY! ( ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE BEING SLAPPED ! )

Arjun's mom: ab khush hain na tu, uski aisi haalat karke, meri bachi, mana kiya tha na tujhe, mat kar us roshini se shaadi, phir tune humari baat nahi maani aur kar li usse shaadi, ab dekha kya hai us shaadi ka anjaam ( result )!

ARJUN'S MOM WAS SHAKING HIM BACK AND FORTH, WAILING AND SOMETIMES SLAPPING HIM HARD! HIS FATHER HELD HIS MOTHER AND CONSOLED AND SAID...

Arjun's dad: kyon aapne aanso is par waste kar rahi ho, he don't deserves them. sambhalo apne aap ko kuch nahi hoga hamaari riya ko.

ARJUN WAS FEELING MORE GUILTY, A VOICE BROKE THE SILENCE, THIS TIME RATHORE WAS THE ONE WHO SPOKE.

Rathore: ma sa aap dono yahaan kaise?

Rathore's mom: sameer, main sirf tumhaari ma sa, aur tumhaare pitaji ki patni hi nahi hoon, main maasi hoon riya ki, suchitra meri real sister hai, we are twins, and riya is your sister, your sissy.

SAMEER RATHORE WAS 18 YEARS OLD WHEN HE LEFT HIS HOUSE, AS HE WAS AGAINST HIS FATHER'S BUSINESS WAYS, HE DIDN'T WANTED TO BE A BUSINESS MAN, HE IS WHAT HE WANTED TO BE, A POLICE INSPECTOR, A COP. HE HAD MET RIYA, HIS SISSY ( THAT HE CALLED HER OFTEN LOVINGLY ) WHEN SHE WAS 14, RIYA WAS SENT LONDON FOR FURTHER STUDIES. THUS HE WAS NOT AWARE OF THE FACT THAT RIYA WAS HIS SISTER, HIS SISSY.

Chottu ( to riya's father ): but uncle aap log ek doosre ko kaise jaante hain?

Riya's father: beta, me and arjun's father are childhood friends. this friendship of ours is a result of our the friendhip between our ancestors. riya and arjun were best friends too.

Arjun's father: they were always together, they were inseparable, but their interests for future were different yet similar.

Chottu and Shree : matlab?

Rathore's father: riya wanted to pursue her studies in forensic science and arjun wanted to be a cop, their working areas were different but the aim was one, public service and ETF.

Shree: aage ki kahaani main batata hoon. ri london toh chali gayi, par woh arjun sir ko kabhi bhool nahi payi, pyaar jo kart thi..un haan...kati hai! woh har roz unhe e mails bhejti, kabhi call bhi karti but arjun sir was so occupied with himself and his goal that he never answered her mails and calls. but she never stopped that, infact 3 years back she came india, and instead of going and meeting her family, she came to mumbai to meet arjun sir only, she wanted to tell that how much she loves him, she wanted to tell his that the distance between them made her realize that what importance does arjun sir holds in her life, but she was shattered, completly heart broken, when she came to know that arjun sir married...that...roshini!, she left everything, lost contacts with her family, she was just lost. then she came to know about that murder...or i should say trap of those people, again she came back and again for only arjun sir's sake, maybe he needed a friend at that moment. but in this process she came to know about the whole plan of riyaaz and roshini, thus she started protecting arjun sir from the threat that riyaaz imposed. she joined ETF just for arjun sir's sake, she always accepted his scoldings, his harsh remarks about her and much more but in return she only gave him love, true love. and even today she is in there, inside the OT just because she was trying to save arjun sir...

EVERYBODY WAS IN TEARS NOW, ESPECIALLY ARJUN...THE MAN WHO APPEARED TO BE TOUGH WAS ACTUALLY SHATTERED NOW. ARJUN WAS FEELING SHAMEFUL, HE REMEMBERED RIYAAZ AND ROSHINI'S WORDS:
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Roshini: PAR YEH JO TUMHAARI NAYI BIWI HAI NA, PATA NAHI KYA ZAROORAT THIS ISE HUMARAE BEECH AANE KI, CHALO JO HUA SO HUA, ITNI INTERFERENCE...AUR TUM...TUMNE TO JAISE KASAM KHAYI THI KI CRIME AND ILLEGAL ACTIVITIES KO KHATAM KAR DO GE, U WERE BECOMING DANGER FOR US...AND THIS DARLING RIYA OF YOURS...HAR BAAR...HAR BAAR TUMHE BACHATI RAHI...MATLAB PHELE HUMNE TUMHAARI CHAI MEIN ZEHAR DAAL KAR TUMHE MAARNE KI KOSHISH KI...AUR YEH RIYA...1 GHANTE KE DISTANCE KO SIRF 25 MINUTES MEIN COVER KIYA AUR YAHI NAHI TUMHE BACHA BHI LIYA, AUR PHIR HUMAARI WOH EK BULLET BHI WASTE GAYI, TUMHE TOH LAGI NAHI, TUMHAARE CAR KA MIRROR ZAROOR TOOT GAYA, AUR US BOMB SE BHI BACH GAYE.

Riyaaz : PAR YEH RIYA...NA JAANE KAHAN SE BEECH MEIN AA GAYI AUR HUMAARA PLAN BHI SAMAJH GAYI AUR APNE COMMISSIONER MAMASHREE KE SAATH MILKAR TUMHE SIKANDER TAK POHONCHNE NAHI DIYA...HAR BAAR...HAR WAQT...AND THAT SIKANDER PATA NAHI USSE KYA SUJHI, SURRENDER KARNE CHALA THA...WAHIN MAAR DIYA USSE..MAINE MAARA USSE...AB JAB WOH MAR HI GAYA THA...AUR TUM HUMARE LIYE KHATRA BANTE JA RAHE THE...ISILIYE TUMHE BHI MAARNA CHAHA BUT YEH HUMESHA TUMHE BACHA LETI THI...SERIOUSLY ISNE TOH APNI ZINDAGI KI BHI FIKAR NAHI KI...BOHOT HIMMAT HAI TUMHAARI BIWI MEIN...
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AND NOW SHREE'S WORDS WERE ADDING FUEL TO THE FIRE.

Arjun ( to himself ): kya nahi kiya usne mere liye! how stupid i am, why, why was i not able to recognize MY TRUE LOVE, MY SOULMATE. she gave me everything and i, instead of loving her, i snatched everything from her. she loved me unconditionally and i...i was dumb not to reciprocate her love. she is in this state, just because of me...NO SHE WILL BE ALRIGHT, USSE THEEK HONA HI HOGA, I KNOW I AM SOUNDING SELFISH...BUT IN RIYA'S CASE I AM...I WILL CHERISH HER, GIVE HER ALL THE LOVE SHE DESERVES. SHE IS MY TRUE LOVE, MY SOULMATE!

Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
superb update...waiting eagerly for the next 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb...
So ariya were childhood friends
The story is vvv interesting
Many truths r being unfold
Continue soon

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