ARIYA FF : Tere Liye [To be Continued by 'vishav'] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: polly_03

megha :



commenting on the three updates i missed so far, loved the way arjun was dressing up for his D-day and then the prayer at dargah with the soothsayer fortelling their impending danger in riddles .. you know what, i have seen dargah scenes like this in a couple of shows and i like them actually. loved seeing riya in action for a change and arjun's emotional breakdown in the hospital ..i can well visualize shree, chottu and rathore's jaws dropped reaction on the PDA between the most unusual couple in front of them. but your suspense with arjun and riya's past is killing me now.. do disclose it soon.


now a bit of my suggestions -

1. dont pm the entire story to readers, it makes no sense IMO to post the update once and then pm the same again. pm the link to the update instead.

2. please maintain a proper index on page 1. you may or may not add the chapter's name but do add the page number. it helps a lot.


thanks polly_03, even i am fed up PMing the whole update, once i tried to provide the link for the update but it didn't worked out may be i should try once again, i am sending u the link to my recent update now. do tell me if it works! thanks 4 commenting and in the next two parts truth will be out. here is the link:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3356064&TPN=7
Posted: 12 years ago
#52


Chapter : When The Secrets Got Revealed ; Part = Your Past Effects Your Present And Your Present Decides Your Future

RIYA WAS DISCHARGED FROM THE HOSPITAL, ARJUN WAS BUSY WITH RATHORE MAKING SOME ARRANGEMENTS ( PERSONAL MATTER ), WHILE SHREE AND RIYA WERE AT RIYA'S HOME DISCUSSING...

Shree: waise ri , we must stop arjun sir from killing sikander, nahi toh arjun sir will be in more danger!

Riya: tumhe kya lagta hai, ki sikander zinda hai, oh please shree, agar woh zinda hota, toh arjun par woh log iss tarah attacks nahi karte.

Shree: what do u mean?

Riya: SIKANDER IS ALREADY DEAD!

Shree: what?

Riya: yes, actually, tum toh jaante hi ho ki, they were treating arjun as a pawn to kill sikander, but u know what kuch time phele, sikander came to meet my mamashree.

Shree: what? who mamashree!

Riya: the commissioner of police!

Shree: ri , tu na mujh per ek ek karke bade bade bomb ger rahi hai. ab yeh commissioner sir, tere mamashree kab se ho gaye!

Riya: jabse maine is brahmaand mein janam liya hai.

Shree: ok i understood, tell me the next!

Riya: sikander wanted to surrender himself, so he called my mamashree at the fort, but was killed by those men, they are just using sikander's name for their illegal activities, seriously, and as of now he is dead so arjun is of no use to them, and infact arjun is now a threat, a danger to them as he s slowly slowly exposing all of them!

Shree: itna bada trap, yaar ri, kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha ki kahan se shuru karen, koi lead bhi nahi...

TERE DISCUSSION WAS INTERRUPTED BY THE CONSTANT RING TONE OF RIYA'S PHONE, ON SEEING THE PHONE SCREEN FLASHING UNKNOWN NUMBER SHREE TOLD RIYA TO PUT THE PHONE ON SPEAKER MODE...A MALE VOICE SPOKE OUT...

Voice: daat deni padegi tumhaari, pata ni tum usse bacha kaise leti ho, matlab tumhaare paas koi siren hai kya jo tabhi jor jor se bajta hai jab woh tumhara arjun musibat mein ho?

Riya ( dangerously calm ): aisi baat nahi hai, woh kya hai na tum har baar mujhe best of luck jo bol dete ho, bas wahi luck kaam aa jaata hai.

Voice: ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...bohot ho gaya yeh chuhe billi ka khel, ab toh aakhri vaar karna hi padega.

Riya: dekhte hain kya karte ho tum!

Voice: riya...riya...riya...pata nahi sab kuch dekhne ke liye tum zinda rahogi ya nahi...milte hain aakhri baar! alvida!

AND THE CALL ENDED...

Shree: ri, now i am scared, u shoul tell arjun sir each and everything.

Riya: tumhe kya lagta hai shree, ki woh meri baat par vishvas karenge...nah...kuch nahi hoga mujhe aur nahi main arjun ko kuch hone doongi.

Shree: aahhh...yeh sa...it so complicated...ok listen...main tumhaare liye kuch laaya hoon!

Riya: what? batao na kya laaye ho?

Shree: yeh lo, these earings will work as a earphone and this pendant is a hidden camera with microphone. wear it, it is all connected with my laptop and this wrist watch has a transmitter in it, it will help to trace u, i know u don't need this, but i just want to ensure ur safety.

RIYA WAS TO THANK SHREE FOR ALL THIS WHEN HER DOOR BELL RANG, AND WHEN RIYA OPENED THE DOOR, A HAPPY ARJUN CAME INSIDE.

Arjun: shree, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Shree: woh...sir main toh bas ri se milne aaya tha. main jaata hoon na abhi. aap ri se baat kijiye main jaata hoon, bye sir, bye ri.

AND SHREE LEFT, AS SOON AS HE WAS OUT OF SIGHT ARJUN PULLED RIYA TOWARDS HIMSELF CAREFULLY NOT HURTING HER, HE WOUNDED HIS ARMS AROUND HER AND KISSED HER FOREHEAD, THEN CHEEKS AND LEANED DOWN TO CAPTURE HER LIPS IN A KISS, AND THAT'S WHAT HE DID. ARJUN KISSED HER SLOWLY BUT PASSIONATELY, RIYA'S RIGHT ARM WENT AROUND ARJUN'S NECK AND PULLED HIM MORE CLOSER, IF POSSIBLE. THEY PULLED BACK FOR SOME AIR, THEIR FINGERS ENTWINED.

Arjun: i am...

Riya: ssshhh...( pecked his lips ) i love you.

Arjun: love u too...waise riya i wanted to say something.

Riya: what?

ARJUN HUGGED HER TIGHTLY AND SAID...

Arjun: riya kal jo kuch bhi...uske baad i can't let u away from me even for a single second...i don't know what's all this, why this distance is killing me, why i want to be with u the whole time, i can't stay away from you, i want to see the sun rising through your eyes, i want to breathe with u, i want to eat with u, i want to live each and every moment of my life with u, i want to see u as mine, i want u to bear my children, i want to treat with your pregnancy mood swings, i want to raise my children with u, i want to grew old with u, in short RIYA WILL U MARRY ME?

RIYA PARTED FROM ARJUN, LOOKED AT HIM WITH MOIST EYES AND WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING, WHEN ARJUN WENT ON HIS KNEES AND SAID...

Arjun: so miss riya mukherjee, will u do me the extra ordinary honor of marrying a khadoos, akkdu, karela and samjhe ya samjhaaon types arjun suryakant raute and be mrs. riya arjun suryakant raute? will u?

RIYA WAS STUNNED HEARING THIS, SHE JUST NODDED HER HEAD IN POSITIVE, SAT ON HER KNEES IN ORDER TO BE AT ARJUN'S LEVEL AND THEN KISSED HIM, ARJUN WAS SHOCKED AT FORST BECAUSE OF HER TAKING THE INITIATIVE BUT THEN RESPONDED TO THE KISS, THEY WERE KISSING INSANELY BUT WERE DISTURBED BY THE CONSTANT DOOR BELL, ARJUN BROKE THE KISS AND SAID...

Arjun: go riya, there is a surprise waiting for u!

Riya: do i have to.

Arjun: come on go and check.

RIYA WENT TO OPEN THE DOOR BUT THERE WAS NO ONE EXCEPT FEW PACKAGES, WHEN OPENED IT HAD A BEAUTIFUL 3 PIECE BLACK SUIT ( FOR A MALE ) IN ONE, THE OTHER HAD A BEAUTIFUL BRIDAL RED SAREE AND THE THIRD ONE HAD MATCHING ACCESSORIES. RIYA WAS CONFUSED BUT ARJUN'S WORD SOOTHED HER...

Arjun: told u can't stay away from u even a single second, so lets get ready, today is our wedding miss mukherjee.

RIYA WANTED TO TELL HIM, THAT WHO IS SHE, WHAT ARE THE SECRETS THAT SHE IS HIDDING BUT THEN THOUGHT THAT IF THIS IS THE WAY THE GOD IS PLAYING, THE SHE WILL GO WITH THE FLOW.

AFTER THEY BOTH WERE READY, THEY WENT TO THE REGISTRAR OFFICE FOR THEIR MARRIAGE.

RATHORE WAS FROM ARJUN'S SIDE AND SHREE ALONG WITH CHOTTU REPRESENTED RIYA'S SIDE. THEY GOT MARRIED, WERE VERY HAPPY BUT WHO KNEW THAT THIS HAPPINESS WOULDN'T LAST FOR LONG.

ARJUN AND RIYA WERE COMING DOWN THE STAIRS HAND IN HAND, RATHORE, SHREE AND CHOTTU WENT TO ARJUN'S HOUSE TO PREPARE FOR THE GRAH PRAVESH...NOW ARJUN AND RIYA WERE ALL ALONE, ARJUN TOOK RIYA TO HIS FAVORITE PLACE IN THE WHOLE MUMBAI, BUT THERE THEY WERE ATTACKED BY SOME GOONS, INTOXICATED AND THEN THE GOONS CARRIED THEM TO THEIR CARS AND LEFT.

WHEN ARJUN OPENED HIS EYES HIS FIRST MOST CONCERN WAS THAT WHERE RIYA IS AND WHEN LOOKED CAREFULLY HE SAW RIYA ON A CHAIR TIED WITH ROPES AROUND HER AND WAS UNCONCIOUS. HE WANTED TO HOLD HER, TO TALK TO HER, TO ASK HER IF SHE WAS ALRIGHT BUT COULDN'T BECAUSE HE HIMSELF WAS TIED WITH ROPES. SUDDENLY A VOICE WAS HEARD BY HIM...

Voice: to aakhir jaag hi gaye aap apni neend se ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE.

Arjun: ho kaun tum? aur hume aise kyon baandh kar rakha hua hai?

Voice: are shaant ho jao. saare sawaalon ke jawaab milenge tumhe but ek baar tumhaari girlfriend...ooppss...na...na...na...tumhaari biwi toh jaag jaye.

Arjun: u...ho kaun tum? bolo!

BUT ALAS! NO VOICE WAS HEARD THIS TIME...BUT BY ARJUN'S CONSTANT SHOUTING RIYA WOKE UP AND IT WERE THE EMOTIONS DISPLAYING ON RIYA'S FACE THAT SHOCKED ARJUN THE MOST...SHE DIDN'T PANICKED...AND WASN'T SCARED BUT ANGRY...THIS TIME FEW MEN CAME UNTIED ARJUN AND RIYA AND TOOK THEN OUT...THE PLACE LOOKED HUGE...IT WAS A STADIUM LIKE STRUCTURE...ARJUN'S THOUGHTS WERE INTERRUPTED BY THE SAME VOICE...

Voice: are...are...are kitni buri haalat ho gayi hai tumhaari, bechaare abhi abhi shaadi hui thi aur ab dekho kya ho gaya.

THE MEN WHO INITIALLY UNTIED THEM AGAIN, TIED THEM WITH ROPES WHICH HELD BOTH OF THEM TO THE CHAIR, THE MAN WHOSE VOICE THEY HEARD WAS SITTING ON A KING LIKE CHAIR AND THERE WERE MANY MEN AROUND HIM. THAT MAN LOOKED AS IF HE WAS IN HIS EARLY THIRTIES...

Man: are...humne toh aapko notice hi nahi kiya miss...na...na...mrs.riya arjun raute.

Riya: tumhaari himmat kaise hui yeh sab kuch karne ki RIYAAZ ?

Riyaaz: lagta hai humare saath saath aapko bhi bhoolne ki bimari ho gayi hai...aaj hi tho phone karke bataya tha ki aakhri mulakaat ka waqt aa gaya hai! hume toh milna hi tha.

Arjun: aakhir ho kaun tum?

Riyaaz: ab yeh toh aapki biwi hi batayengi aapko!

ARJUN LOOKED AT RIYA FOR ANY ANSWER BUT SHE HUNG HER FACE AND LOOKED DOWN.

Riyaaz: chaliye chodiye hum hi bata dete hain...hum riyaaz malik hain, sikander ke bhai...nahi nahi...swargwaasi sikander ke bhai...

Arjun: WHAT?

Riyaaz: are poori introduction toh sun lijiye! toh kahan the hum...aahaan...toh hum keh rahe the...ki yeh jo aapki biwi hain na...bohot pyaar karti hain aapse, aapne inke saath kya kuch nahi kiya, inhe chod kar kisi aur shaadi tak kar li, are yeh baat chodiye humne bhi aap par kitne humle karwaye, kitni baar aapko maarne ki koshish ki par, yeh jo aapki biwi hain na, inhone har bar aapko bacha liya.

RIYAAZ WENT TO RIYA, TOOK OUT HIS DAGGER AND MADE A CUT ON HER RIGHT ARM, WHICH STARTED BLEEDING..

Arjun ( angry ): DON'T YOU DARE! AGAR RIYA KO HAATH BHI LAGAYA NA, MAIN MAAR DALUNGA TUMHE!

Riyaaz: waise hi jaise aapne roshini ke liye sikander ko maarne ki dhamki di thi! maanana padega, pyaar bohot karte hain aap, abhi riya se pyaar karte hai aur phele roshini se...

ARJUN WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING BUT RIYA SPOKE ALL LOUD IN ANGER!

Riya: PYAAR NAHI THA WOH! EK DHOKA THA, EK CHHAL, EK PLAN JO TUM LOGON NE BANAYA THA, IT IS ALL A PAST NOW, OUR PRESENT AND FUTURE IS DIFFERENT!

ARJUN WAS SHOCKED TO LISTEN ALL THIS, HE WAS THINKING THAT WHY RIYA IS SAYING LIKE THAT, THAT WHAT HE AND ROSHINI HAD WAS NOT LOVE BUT HIS THOUGHTS AND THAT PARTICULAR QUESTION WAS ANSWERED BY A SUDDEN VOICE...

Voice: but riya darling...YOUR PAST EFFECTS YOUR PRESENT AND YOUR PRESENT DECIDES YOUR FUTURE!

ARJUN WAS ALL NUMB WHEN HE LOOKED AT THE OWNER OF THAT VOICE...ONLY ONE THING IN HIS MIND " HOW ? "

Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
the voice is roshni...hain na???? i am damn sure...

amazing yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
megha :


read the update just now ..am totally unable to comprehend anything, what's going on yaar 😕? like arjun, i'm equally confused. riya is the police commissioner's niece..fine. sikandar is dead and another gang killed him when he was about to surrender himself to law .. fine again. but after that😕 ? yeh past aur present ka kya chakkar hai yaar 😕? hope you clear all doubts in the next update . waiting for it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome!!! that voice is roshini na?? so she is the villain.. wow!! tables turned!! sikender is not the villain.. poor arjun!! do arjun know riya before?? update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Omg!! lovely update... n the owner of that new voice... Is it Roshni???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Great update...
Its interesting...
Waiting fr the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
oh i think i know what the secret is continue soon can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
i'm damn sure dat voice is of Roshini's... oh no wats happening here????? update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
very nice update but again suspence plz continue soon

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