Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12 - Page 79

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

I know you love twist, turn and bend everything every time. And you are just doing it very much perfect. :-)

Update was small and has not revealed much, but yes, I liked Mama Silvio's and Raaul's casual convo. Arnav, has lot more to do. Hmmm.

Originally posted by: Vidhi_K

Ah he's one step closer. Nice update.

Originally posted by: Samyxx

Awesome update...

Originally posted by: tinsel

A cliffhanger! Super update👍🏼

Originally posted by: yashal_khan

yeah he was flirting with khuhsiii.. and I m fuming like LG😆 I know that dear you will surprise us already loving the way how u are unfolding the story

I read all parts again n find prolgue part 😊

thank you so much for reply

TC

Originally posted by: indi52

aria, hi

just started reading... into chapter three. i am really liking the trend and the words and this tortured asr. you bring back stuff from the show, yet feels like there's a new tale here. khushi has left, asr must be going crazy... yes i noticed. like him a little off kilter always 😆. let me read some more, will get back. just wanted to say, thanks for the link... i am enjoying this side a lot. super imagination.

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Pride, pain and penance; these words kept ringing in my head when I read the story so far. It goes without saying it is well written and I am a sucker for such stories, I am waiting to coin a word to explain my brand of weirdness. I like fiction which is not stupidly divorced from reality and this is one of them. Not everyone is the same; I often put myself in a person's place to understand why they did or said something and I realize it does not work that. That makes people interesting and that makes good stories. There are a few points that I wanted to mention, having read the updates at a go -

** Khushi being more than a doormat and doing something with her strengths, I honestly felt she had many but alas nothing was displayed other than useless altruism. She drew on the residual self-respect she had and worked on doing something with her life, this I really like.

** Arnav was beyond logic at one point of time in the story and I like this take of yours, making him introspect and act on it. I am sure he too was aware he cared for Khushi, more than cared but was unable to deal with it. I really like the way you bring out the want for his wife in your story.

** Akash and Payal are no props here and that is a welcome change. The not so silent manner in which they support their siblings is what siblings usually do; show them the issue and help them deal with it not just preach too much. I do like the moral fibre they display in this story, it easy to ignore a person and even easier to ignore the things they do for you. The two here have not forgotten, the good and the bad their siblings did for their family; they want to correct the wrong that has happened in their lives and I am happy for that.

** Ved and Anjali, I am not a big fan of Anjali and you have added more to her character here but I need lots more to be appreciative of her. Ved seems a good guy; then again he is with Anjali; so he needs to earn my respect.

Rockbarbie recommended this story and I must thank her for it. I love the title by the way'''''

Originally posted by: arshina223

One question ...do you have more stories on arshi on I-F..??
..would love to read more stories by you.

Originally posted by: inajnar

Another Interesting Update !!

Waiting for more ..