Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Annie12
This story is turning out to be very interesting

Thank you for your comment. Hope I can keep it that way ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: Venicestar88
Woohoo u updated! So he is off to Mumbai then eh! And Khushi wanting to smoke?! Interesting ... she has been thru hell by the looks of it, it's hasn't ended!

Yes, can you fault her for being tempted after everything she has gone through?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: sumond
Lovely update, the best part I liked was the 300 Rs being sent back to arnav. Thanks for the pm

Yea, always wanted to see the 300 brought back to the show. So here it does ;)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: laksh65
very nice update loved it.

Thank you Laksh :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: Japonica
The first thing that came to mind on reading this update Aria was Blake's Songs of Experience and the famous 'The Sick Rose'

O Rose, thou art sick!
The invisible worm
That flies in the night,
In the howling storm,

Has found out thy bed
Of crimson joy:
And his dark secret love
Does thy life destroy.

Thos poem sums up for me in so many ways the whole story - both Arnav and Khushi's on so many levels.

Is she aware that she might have sent him the money not just to anger him, but may be to challenge him to find her, may be she hopes she is found?

Hope Mrs. Malik in her good nature is not setting Khushi up with this Raul Silvio!

Ahh...you bring this poem up, I'm tempted to ask, do you foresee a tragic ending as the inevitable? I agree though, it does sum it up...to an extent... and also that sense of foreboding lingers around... That threat is real. and in many ways where she goes, how she deals with these blows...and the choices that she makes or they make her(hope its not this), its almost like a treading a fine line, one step in the wrong side can cause a spiral of no return. Something that will irrevocably alter who she is forever...I don't know if I make much sense...BUT despite all that, I'd like to think, true love for what its worth is a strength... not trying to sound cliched but whats a fiction if we can't escape reality? Look at it this way, these two have hid one thing from the other for the longest time - the one thing that could have saved all this heart ache...may be that was the real problem to begin with.

@bold, I'm not sure she is aware yet! Like she wasn't too keen on trying to answer Deeya's question that followed. She still has not let go contrary to what she thinks.

Even if Mrs. Malik was to try and get these two together, would it be such a bad thing?

Thanks J. Will update soon.

cheers,

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: _disha_
Experience certainly is a bitch and especially in this scenario in more ways than one !
Hope that manager is kicked in the balls.. he needs a rude awakening !

I was a bit startled that Khushi willingly gave a lead to her whereabouts to Arnav but after reading further it makes me excited as hell to see Khushi in all her glory!

@bold, Iike how you've put it - Khushi in all her glory! I'm sure, she will give him a tougher time once they meet ;) @green, thats not a bad idea actually.. ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: raws
the story is quite realistic...m loving it

Thank you for your comment, glad to know you are enjoying reading the FF :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: tinsel
Wonderful update!

Thank you Tinsel :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Just read three chapters of this story.

Love the way you are showing the repentance track here.
This was much needed in IPK and unfortunately was never shown.

All that Arnav did to Khushi left a bad taste in the mouth and it was foolish to show her
forgiving him so easily.

As a woman I felt wronged and it felt good to read this.

A strong Payal was a surprise ad I liked seeing her managing her father's shop.

Khushi has become a chef in an Italian restaurant.
I'll read on and see how you have taken the story forward.

Absolutely, the repentance track was pretty much scrapped down to a lame apology for whatever reasons, that would have been such an amazing track in the show. Too bad we never got to see it. Thank you Chilly for commenting :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: dhrashtee
Loved the update... Glad Arnav found that envelope. Poor Khushi...hopefully, the situation at work will lead her towards Arnav so he can win her back. will be waiting for next update... pls cont soon

Arnav is on his way ;)

Thank you Dhrastee, will update soon!

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