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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I accidentally happened to hit upon you story and am absolutely in love with it. I cannot wait fo EF more. Please pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KaaliBilli

My preciousss

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Deeya offers rationale to Khushi who has already seen poisonous snake and is bitten by it. Unfortunately an armature cannot really know the snake is poisonous or not by merely looking at it. It's intention will be made known after it either bites you or makes violent moves at you, don't you think so? Khushi already knows this as both Arnav and Shyam fall into this category in varying degrees.

I wish to see a pragmatic Khushi. If she leans a tad on the darker side, its good too. But she is right about her actions hurting Arnav. She knows it would irrespective what her mouth mumbles that he doesn't care about her. If not anything, there is a layer of untouched residual guilt which would be provoked by her actions. If not anything it's a test to check if he is completely over her or does he harbor any unresolved feelings for her.

And, I really like Deeya...Experiences sure are bitch. But if there aren't any, then wouldn't life be a void of repetitive numbness?

-RB


What if it bites you once, and still you keep letting it linger around? Aren't you asking for trouble then? Like sending him that money - offering a trail for him to follow... knowing very well what it did to her the first time around, something she is a living proof of. So its likely that her actions were more about hurting him more than anything else... and perhaps testing that last bit of what ifs, does he still care? Do I? May be we all like to flirt with fire...

Depends what kind of experiences you are talking about! It would be a void if there were none...that's not a life then...but we can always 'hope' for something good to fill those voids...

Thanks RB.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Is Mrs. Malik Arnav's aunt or something?

What will Khushi do bout the manager now?

Love this Deeya. Khushi needs someone like her in her life.
Loved it when Khushi returned the three hundred rupees to Arnav.

In IPK they left a lot of loose ends.
The money was never mentioned again.

Arnav has gone to look for Khushi and Ved has gone to see Anjali.
Waiting to see what happens next.

Could you please PM me when you update next?


I'm surprised no one has guessed who Mrs. Malik is! She wouldn't be called Mrs. Malik for nothing ;)

Will update soon, and yes you will get that PM.
Thanks Chilly :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

I lauvve Deeya!


Khushi thinks that if she wouldnt have been such a nave, she wouldnt have had such bitter experiances. but nave or not..such experiances can happen with anyone...such a thing made her what she is now..a Chef! maybe she isnt at peace, she has been through too much that beyond what a simple young girl can tolerate emotionally but she now standing at her feet, independent.

Rest all in good time.

And I absolutely loved that 300 rs scene.

Doesnt she know Arnav will be able to track her? Ofcourse its obvoius. so maybe she sebt it purposefully.

people like her manager doesnt deserve a mention. I wish Arnav comes and beat him to pulp. 😡


Hi Anupama, at bold, spot on, she is not at peace...and has not been since she left despite all her efforts which were mainly spurred on by the rejection she faced during the hate marriage. She is a simple young girl who needs her family around and at the moment she is doing her best, trying to make a niche for herself away from them, stripped of her one support system that had been a constant in her young life :(

Arnav beating him to pulp sounds so exciting! I wish I could write an action sequence too😆

Thank you!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl.b

Just read this ff,,n i must say u write beautifully...i m already in love with this ff...arnav repenting for his mistakes which was never shown in the show i got to see it here,,,,,n i won't be wrong in saying that u have done a terrific job...waiting to read more ... do continue soon. Thanks.


Thank you Pearl.
WIll continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shree10

I had bookmarked this story long time back and even read first 2 chaps. But then in between I noticed that you were gone for along time. So was not sure if you would continue.

When I found out you have updated, I am really glad and finally caught up with all the chapters!
I really liked this story.

I have a few questions.
1)In last update which letter Khushi sent to Arnav? In my thinking Divorce papers she had signed long back before leaving Shantivan right? and the recent one just contained 300 Rs. So I am missing anyth?

2)Arnav still doesn't know complete truth about Khushi and Shyam right? I mean thats what I felt. Is it right?

Looking forward eagerly to next update!


Thank you for commenting Shree. Yes, I don't have the greatest of track records when it comes to frequent updates!😳Le Sigh!

Lets see, the last letter basically contained the three hundred rupees nothing else. The previous one she had left behind during the hate marriage contained divorce papers and a note.

Anjali and Shyam are now divorced, as has been mentioned in fleeting in the story so far. And this happened once Khushi left RM and Arnav. The circumstances that led to the divorce has been left to speculation for now ;)

Will update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you Savy :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: libbyferns

Thanks for pm ,Aria. Fabulous update. Glad that Khushi sent Rs.300 to Arnav that she owed him. Awaiting for their confrontation, since he has a clue where she is now. And looks like he is suspicious of Anjali now.


He is certainly starting to put things together, and about time he did that too, don't you think? And that includes suspecting everyone around him.

Their confrontation... ! I'm not thinking that far ahead yet, let him get to Mumbai and track her down first ;)

Thanks Libby :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dmegha_PM

It was an awesome update...!

Incredible, is what, the update was!
Thanks for the PM.


Thank you so much Megha :)

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