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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: deepa5

nice concept yaar pls add me in ur pm list pls pls pls

Thanks!πŸ˜ƒ
Okay..,Will do...
Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Special Thanks, To All my lovely readers, who commented on my first start of this FF..Do look forward to always see such wonderful comments from you guys all time..
I also, do take suggestions and ideas...πŸ˜‰
Thanks To
ArViAshaRocks, xoxoarvi, barbie100, ameilia, Chani1, ashvikluverr, Priyyanka, omg11apiz, christene, NadaCinta, Soumya05, bonibright, deepa5.
xoxo
Ammy..
Edited by Amanda_18 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Characters Sketch

Meet The Handsome Arjun Kriloskar.
The richest guy in college, dreams of being a very big business man one day despite knowing that his dad wants him to follow in his foot-step and be a lawyer. Mr. Arjun here, is every girl dream. All college girl go crazy for him, for them he is the prefect one. Except for 2 girls Teju & Purvi. Like every rich brat he knows how to flirts and how to handle himself in any situation be it with girls or money. Thus is one guy who party till the sun rise.
Meet The Sexy Ovi Deshmukh.
The youngest daughter of Archana & Manav. She is one who is crazy about Arjun, for him she can go to any extent. Ovi here is least bother about college, she thinks her looks is the best and she is everything. She wants to model, which her family suppose her. She think she will be Arjun for the rest of there life.
Meet The Beautiful Purvi Deshmukh.
The second daughter of Manav & Archana. She is known as the talented and mannerly one. She is very popular in college for the fact she is the most brillant one in college, but yet she is so humble. Purvi is one who is least in interested in Arjun, as she knows he is a big player. However, as much as she doesn't like Arjun, they are still friends and he can't go a day without talking to her...
Meet The Vibrant Tejaswani Deskmukh.
The eldest daughter of Manav & Archana. This is one that least bother about what people thinks about her, and don't care what she say. She believe she is what she is.
Posted: 12 years ago
#34

...Chapter 1...

Part 1

Purvi, Ovi, Teju! Wake Up, shouted Archana "final year for college"

Putting her music on, and there she began sorting out her clothes. Some fit too fat while some look too boney on me, what I should wear, Ovi thinks going into her bottom drawer taking out her mini black skirt and a dark green up half shoulder top. Her favorite pair of heels, black handbag to match & accessories. She looked into the mirror and lost in thought "Don't I look beautiful today, and Arjun shall be crazy when he sees me after so long" then she walk out of her room.

Running into her usual, Teju hurriedly put on a pair of jeans and a top, put her bag o side ways and run out of her room.

Both Teju and Ovi arrive downstairs to find there dad waiting on them.

Where is Purvi? Asked Archana.

We don't……

Before the girls could have answered, a voice came from behind I am here?

Standing at the entrance door, in her high heels wearing a pink salwar suit, long black hair that lends to the waist, bangles on both hands and a small bendi in the middle between her eyes brow. Purvi said I went to the temple, that why I got late.

Archana smiled at her, Okay then! Now you guys go and eat quickly.

By the way Ovi, Archana said stopping Ovi Where are you going?

No where mom.

Well, I simply don't think you are actually going to college like that and without any books.

Mom! Ovi making her baby face. At college if I don't wear these clothes then everyone will keep judging me.

Archana is surprise! Judge you, why??

Because in college they are the ones that are popular and the one that are not, said Ovi.

I am assume, you are the popular one so you have to be up to date with fashion said Archana, but in my house you are my daughter and such clothes, I don't allow you to wear. Of course you wear fashionable clothes but such sort skirt and I don't like.

Mom.., please tries to understand Ovi start pledging with Archana to let her go with what she is wearing.

"Okay" said Archana, but I want to get one thing straight as long as you are in this house, I expect you to follow my rules as your grandparents are living here also, and I want you to please pay attention to your work, this is your final year at college.

Mom, I understand said Ovi softly.

"Wow, Can't believe our final year in college" is here Teju excitingly said.

Yeah Teju, said Purvi "I am so happy".

"Are you two crazy" Ovi angrily said You two can't seriously be happy, aren't you going to miss all this.

Teju looked at Purvi & Purvi looked at Teju.

Both forcefully said "Yeah! We will miss college".


They could sense Ovi was angry because Arjun wasn't in college as yet.

I will be back in a few minute said Ovi as she walked angrily away.

That idiot always shows up late. I wonder if he is even back for his Paris vacation. I mean, what sort of guy leaves his girlfriend during summer vacation to go on a vacation with his cousins and that too in Paris.

Teju said as she gives some books to Purvi.

What's this for? Purvi asked.

You go and give Ovi those books, it hers. I am surely not going to her now. Teju wickedly run away from Purvi.

But Teju…Teju!! Shouted Purvi.

She is so clever, now what do I do? Purvi thinks.

Hi Purvi! Said someone.

Hi Onir, How are you? Purvi replied.

I am great, so how was your holiday, Onir asked sweetly.

It was great, How was ...

Purvi couldn't have completed her sentence, as all that she could have heard was Arjun is here. Arjun have arrive as she turns she saw Arjun in his red sport car as he step out of the car, everyone seems so happy to see him, Purvi just smiled after she saw her sister in the crowd of girls waiting on Arjun.

Obviously he was something that everyone wants. He is rich, good looking, muscular, famous but yet he wasn't what she wants. The is the popular guy in college, every girl bow down at his feet, he can sweet talk anyone and make them fall for him, and she was no exception, she was always the one to cover up for him. Arjun always wore jeans with fitted jersey as he is one of the fittest guys. Fittest freak he is. However she saw him differently.

A guy who has everything in life but still doesn't value it. Everyone knows him as he is the son of one of the Best lawyer Dig Vijay Kirloskar. Arjun is just a rich spoil brat.

"Look who has finally decided to come on the first day of college" said Onir before he could have notice Purvi is nowhere to be seemed.

Onir is left in thought, where did Purvi go?

Purvi is quickly walking to her class, as she decides to stay away from Arjun this year as she doesn't want him to be around her.

Arjun, you are here, must be eagerly waiting to see me said Ovi happily.

Yeah, Ovi I am. Arjun said as she hugged him. Ovi! Where is Purvi?

I have no idea, so tell me how your Paris vacation was; you didn't even call me once while you were there.

I am sorry, but it was great. I took some pictures you shall see them soon, but I need to find Purvi. Arjun left in search of Purvi leaving Ovi standing there alone.

Purvi hates Arjun, but Arjun love fatiguing her and there isn't a day that goes by and these two don't fight. However, she is Arjun's Cover-up. There isn't a thing that happens in Arjun life and she didn't know about.

Arjun then spot Purvi in a crowd, the set of people she sometimes be around he wouldn't go near them. So Arjun send Jai to call her.

Jai is Arjun's friend, Arjun, Jai along with Satish has always been very good college buddies.

Jai went and pull Purvi away from the crowd.

What is wrong with you Jai? Can't you see I wa...

We saw, Arjun interrupt her, you were having a nice little conversation but as you know Arjun doesn't wait on anyone.

And what do you want now? Purvi snapped at Arjun.

Wow. No Hi, No Good Morning, No How was your vacation, No

Purvi cuts him, Listen Arjun I have no time for your nonsense.

I do you think I have time to talk nonsense said Arjun. I am getting for class, by the way where is your phone?

Purvi shockingly asked what?? Late for class. Arjun Kirloskar. Wow, Paris has totally changed you. But guess I haven't gone to Paris, so I am not changed like you, so I have to go.

Purvi! Purvi! Shouted Arjun "Purvi"

Arjun said to himself "that's one girl, I seriously can never understand".

Jai! Satish! Let's Go…

End of Chapter 1 _ Part 1
A Strange Relationship By Ammy
22 | December | 2012
xoxo
Ammy
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
That Chapter 1-Part 1, Hope everyone liked it? I do look forward for you comment..Shall update before new year...
Thanks...
Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Ooops Almost forget...

To All My Lovely Readers, Wishing You
A Very Merry Christmas To You & Your Entire Family.!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Loved the character sketch ! :)

Can't wait to read the 1st part ! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Ha, grt 1. I just love deir cute battles. Updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Amanda_18

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U 2 Ammy, merry christmass 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
heyy Mandy..πŸ€—
Merry Christmas...!!
about CS-loved character stretch.
Arjun a rich hunk and purvi a simple yet beautiful girl..πŸ˜›ahh loving it..!!

about the chapter..
I loved the first chapter..
Kudos to you for writing this part.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
it was superb..
liked it very much..
purvi hates arjun and he loves to talk to her..
so it will be very interesting to see how arjun falls for our Purvi..
ohh so Ovi is his girlfriend..and v also have onir here.
never mind..coz I know this being ur FF u will never seperate ArVi..πŸ˜‰

plz do update soon..cant wait for next part..
Do PM me when u update.
and Thankyou for this amazing Part..πŸ˜ƒ

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