| ArViFF:A Strange Relationship By AmmyPart4_Pg17| - Page 6

Originally posted by: barbie100

Fab update dear..
Plz update soon..!! Thanx for pm 😳

Originally posted by: Chani1

loved the update!!

please update soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: Rozey17

Well firstly thanks Ammy for the Pm 😊, I am so glad u invited me to read ur FF.

I Love every bit of the chapter, the way u make each character stand out 👍🏼, and i epecially love the way u made Arjun n Purvi's Character, like they are from two different world, I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

Great job, well done n plz do PM me when u update 😊

Merry Christmas n Happy Holidays to all of you guys, enjoy!!!!

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

So Tej, Purvi and Ovi are Archana and Manav's daughters. Final year at College and as usual, Ovi is standing in front of the mirror and thinking that she looks beautiful and that Arjun will be crazy when he sees her. After all she is Ovi...😉😆

Teju with her jeans and top whereas Purvi with her salwar suit but surprisingly wearing high heels😃. Teju is as usual...,Yeah high heels, afterall her dad is rich...so have to put a her a bit modern

I liked the way Archana asked Ovi where is she going and moreover without any books??? The best part is when Archana was surprise when Ovi told her people will judge her... Glad you did like this piece

So Archana did allow Ovi to wear the short skirt to college but at home she has to follow Archana's rule👏. Yeah...,I think if manav had lay down some rules with her in PR, she would have been different.

Seems like the college hero has arrived and all are excited about him excluding Tej and Purvi. Onir is Purvi's friend. Although Arjun is someone that everybody would dream off, but he was not Purvi's type. So Arjun is rich spoilt brat and the son of the best lawyer Dig Vijay Kirloskar! Yeah, he did. I really like Onir, some bought him here..No he is not, wonder if he will ever be..😆 Yeah, rich brat, and Dig Vijay Kirloskar-Famour lawyer son.

I just loved it when Arjun left in search of Purvi and left Ovi standing there alone. Its interesting how Purvi hates Arjun instead he loves fatiguing her. Best part of all is in spite of all that, Purvi is Arjun's cover up. Purvi knows everything that happens in Arjun's life. Yeah, love that piece too..., Yeah, he loves fatiguing her. Yes,if she doesn't do something for him, who will..😆 I wonder if that will cause problems in the future

The end part of how he spoke to Purvi after getting her pulled away from group of friends by Jai was good and when he said that's one girl I seriously can never understand is very well said😊.

It was...,I wonder if he will ever understand her..😉

Please do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Amanda_18

Answered you in bold and underlined above

However, I am happy you are loving it so far...

And your long comment told me, you have read it and enjoyed it...😉😆

Will update soon...

Season Greetings...

Originally posted by: Amanda_18

Answered you in bold and underlined above

However, I am happy you are loving it so far...

And your long comment told me, you have read it and enjoyed it...😉😆

Will update soon...

Season Greetings...

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Thks for showing her a bit modern and true, that's what Manav ought to have done to Ovi in PR😈

Edited by NadaCinta - 12 years ago

@NadaCinta: What's your name???

Glad you are liking it...Everynight in my bed, i think what can i do with my FF so everyone can be trilled to read...

I just give her high heels..Lolz...Which i love especially with salwar suit...Lovely...

Yeah..,she needs some one to stop her...she is very rude...

Originally posted by: Amanda_18

@NadaCinta: What's your name???

Glad you are liking it...Everynight in my bed, i think what can i do with my FF so everyone can be trilled to read...

I just give her high heels..Lolz...Which i love especially with salwar suit...Lovely...

Yeah..,she needs some one to stop her...she is very rude...

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

My name is Veno😊

Yes high heels with salwar, really looks good 😛 and that Ovi is really rude but I know for a fact she'll not get her way in your FF😃.

That's so nice of you to think on how much more you can make it interesting before delivering it to us. Keep it up 😉

Nice name...Veno!!!