JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

why krishna u did not like??? 😒

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sindhupv

@sindhupv

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

So Adrit recognized that its is his Shyla who is in that state. His heartbroken condition after he realized it was her was very painful to read. Love is pleasure and it can cause pain too. Feels sad for these soul mates. Who are close yet so far. 😒

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

uff can't held my breath this story the feelings coming from each word is so living and breathtaking..all i can say ud soon

Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

I am putting my name on the pics from now, I hate doing it since it spoils the entire pic. But if find my creations in so many place and those people have the audacity to put their name on it 🤢

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pooja gupta

@poojagupta3336

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Jaya plz dont stop. Plz keep writing. Its like i cant breathe.

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Krsna

@Krsna_PV

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

This pic is sooo cute Jay...

Love it...

And you should write your name sweetheart😊

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

thank u all girls... u read my updates so quickly.. and comment.. god i feel so overwhelmed.
i am getting too much into the skin of my characters. Even Mohit and Sona have disappeared from my view. 😕

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

my like button not workin😡so Doc.A found that its La😲i think its quite soon i expected some known stranger moments btwn thm😳this ud is full of emotions waiting to knw hw La wil recognise her Doc.A her Adi

Edited by hemaDaganKhian - 12 years ago

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Hema , i will move back and forth for some more time. I will take you into the past for a couple of more updates, before i bring u back to NOW.
I could not have kept The doctor away from Shyla for too long, I want to write an extended write up of how they find each other again.
He has recognised for now.. there is a long way to go before all is well.

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Tinacool

@Tinacool

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

Adrit has recognized Shyla that is good. The suspense did not stretch too long which is even better. So love runs deep for Adrit for him to break down so badly to see Shyla in this condition. If she was presumed dead obviously it must have hit him very bad since he loved her so much. Good update Jaya.