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Posted: 12 years ago
Wanna to listen kaise bhi kerke mujhe mera baita la ker dijiye..
ager use kuch ho gaya,to main bhi je nahi payongi..
mujhamen dobara etani himmat nahi ke phir se apne..
not able to complete her sentense n start crying..
mr ch consol her..
Dont warry main kuch bhi nahi hone donga es baar apne baite ko..
Rathore come forward n say..
dont warry mr n mrs ch un dono ko kuch nahi hoga..
or es baar to main kuch jone nahi doonga..
.
Siya ask rathore-es baar se apka kya matlab hai,kya tum jaante ho arjun kon hai,
.
(i know its bit sili..arjun suryakant rawte ko kon nahi janta but in my storry adjust ker lena plz lolll)
.
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SCENCE SHIFT-
Arjun feel some wait on him,
he lift his graze n found riya was sleeping peasefully in his arms..
Her head is rested on his chest n with her one hand she hold his shirt tightly,
She looks beautiful n so innocent,
just like small kids..
Arjun's eyes fixed on riya's face..
(arjun think in mind)
kyun mera dil mere bas main nahii kyuuu..??
BG music-


"sajana..sajana
ek tujhko he bas dekh ker,
boli mujhse hi meri najar.."
tujhako shayad nahi hai khaber..
tujhako jeete hain hum kis kader..


Kyun tum etani jaani pehchani se lagti hoo,kyun meri dil ke her dhadkan tumhen mehsoos ker sakti hai..whyyy whyy...??
he put his hand on his heart..
n closed his eyes ..n remembered all their meeting scence..
.

jode jo tere khayab se..
to tote neend se,
ye kaisa tera eshaq hai,
sajanaa aa aa ,
tu hanthon main to hai
mere,
hai kyun nahi lakiron mai,

their fist meeting..
1she is talking with somone on her phone n sudendy she banged with him,
he shouted on her,
2she madly runs on road n comes infront of his car,
n goes uncoinsious,
3-in pool side area unfortunatly she gonna be fall but at right time he safe her n first time she hug him
tightly..


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

n then in party when she dance with someone..
he felt jealous..he coundnt hold himself n comes near n dragged her to dance floor..
after that she hug him n difteed in sleep..
all scence comes around his mind like a movie...
tum mujhe jo samaj rahi ho riya main vo nahi hoon..
per kaas hota..


ye kaisa tera ishaq hai..sanjana
Teri bina kabhi raaten na ho meri..
tere kareeb ho mere ye din sabhi..
tere bina kabhi...ye din sabhi


Arjun opened his eyes again n looked her ..
he slides his finger on her soft face..
a litle smiled crept on her face,as she knew his touch..

ehsa lagta hai,main tumhen kaphi achhe se janta hoon,
ehsa kyun lagta hai..
tum sirf meri ho sirf meri..
whenever i look u then why my heart is shouted n say u r mine only mine..

jude jo tere khayab se..
toh toote hum neend se..
yeh kaisa tera eshaq hai sajanaaa
tu haathon main to hai mager tu kyun nahi lakiron main..
yeh kaisa tera eshaq hai..



Arjun wanna to touch her lips but stop in mid..
he scold himself..
what r u doing arjun..
How dare u do or even think..vo kisi or se pyaar kerti hai,or tum uska phayada uda rahe ho..
sudenly he again sense somthing wrong..his all body masale gona tense..
the same vision comes in front of his eyes..
but that time he saw somthing more..he closed his eye tightly..
n wishper..not again this time sikander...
Arjun opened his eyes imedeatly..not again..but why i said not again..??
---
Scence shift-
on the other sameer called his all etf team in etf office--
it was mid night ..but he hv not enough time..
yes jald se jald arjun n riya ka pata lagana tha..
shree typing soming in his lapy n chotu talking on phon..
Ra to shree-shree mr ch ke watchman ne riya ko ek auto main jate dekha tha..
jaldy se pata karo vo auto kiska hai,
after few minute-
shree


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sir pata chal gaya hai ye auto kis ka hai..
mahesh jo basti main rehata hai..
Ra-good hamen abhi us ke pass jaker pata lagana hoga..usane riya ko kahan drop kiya tha..
They wanna to go..
Sudenly sia enters in etf office..
Siya-main bhi aap longon ke sath chalogi..
Ra-noo ye hamara kaam hai,or hame tumhen es main envolve nahi ker sakte..
Siya-ager commissioner chahenge tab bhi nahi..
Ra-what kya matlab hai tumhara..?
Siya shows rathore one
later.. rathore took that later n read..
What..?
Ra-Ab ye ayesha kon hai..?
Main siya shouted..
haan its me ayesha kapoor..
ur new etf member..
ab main bhi tumhare sath mil ker es case per kaam karongi..
(lolll siya se ayesha n now new etf member as story is gona be end maine soncha rathore ka bhi kalyaan ker doon)
Ra-jahan tak mujhe pata hai,tumhara naam to siya hai..
siya rolled her eyes n say haan..
siya nahi ayesha ayesha kapoor n siya sirf apno ke liye not for u..
(from shimla crime branch)
Ayesha-ager meri intro poora ho gaya hoo..to chale..
sameer muttered under his breath commi sir ko kya lata hai main arjun or riya ko thoond nahi sakta..
but that was not the case of ariya missing,..
that was somthing more..
(that was only ayesha knew n she work this case for last one years..)
All goes to mahesh house
--
scence shift-
Arjun didnt wanna to wake up..
but he hav to do bez that was now not safe place for them
so he hav no other choice,
Riyaa a riyaa aa (he shakes her hand)
Riya in sleepy mood-
Arjun sone to na plzz she pouted her mouth like small kids..
etane time ke baad to chain ke neend aye hai..
pata nahi kitani raaten tumhari yaad main gujari hai,
ab jab chain se sona chahti hoon, to tum uda rahe hoo,

Arjun feel pain .. (in mind)
kitana dard saha hai tumne..
vo sach main bahoot lucky hai,jise tum etana pyaar kerti hoo,
bahoot taklif hoti hai jab




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Kise ka pyaar adhura reh jata hai..
arjun again pathes n shouted bit large..

riyaaa riyaa otho plz
She haldly opened her eyes but stil in sleeping mood..she lift her face up n saw her arjun ..
Her arjun she leaned closer to his face n kissed his cheeks..
I lv u arjun plz ab dobara mujhe jhood ker kahi maat jana..verna es baar tumhare bina jee nahi paongi..
when she says him i lv u to
him for that second he felt happy but his happiness goes fad when he think its not for him but its for her arjun..
Riyaa main tumhara arjun nahi hoon..
he said bit loudly,
he felt pain inside his heart when he said..
Riya imedeatly get up when she heared what he said..
for that moment she realy forget that he is not her arjun,she felt that noo he is only her arjun..
she composed herself n wiped her tears thats comes out her beautiful eyes..
she turned her face other side n say i m sorry vo main..mujhe laga..
.
she wanna to cry that time..non stop crying...
why god why u sneched my arjun why..?? she complained god in mind,kyun eski her baat mujhe arjun ke yaad dilati hai,
ahe snaaped out her thought when arjun spook-
.
Riya that place is not safe for us..hame abhi esi waqt uahan se nikalna hooga..
she just nooded her head stil not looking him,
--
scence shif-
Out side mahesh house-
they ring two three time but door not opened..
At last chotu brock the door n all goes inside n saw mahesh is dead...
TBC-
kya es kahani ka end vahi hoga jo arjun ne apne visions main dekha ya phir..???
now mahesh is killed..
is etf able to find out ariya,..??
kya arjun ko sab yaad ayega ya..?
ye dastan ehse hi khatam ho jayegi...
if u wanna read then dont forget to read this story..
mast ya bore,..
i m waitng...




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
iwant to read more update soon plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanalala1990

iwant to read more update soon plzz


Update ker diya sana ...lolll
aaj ka etana hi..baki ka baad main...
he he he he...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Suuppeerrbbb !!
loved Ayesha's entry
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
poor ariya hope arjun ll get his memory back soon
sia is ayesha great
mahesh is killed what they gonna do now?
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
at last you updated it..
kithne din hogayi thi yaar... was missing this story
great update..
aur is bar jaldi wapas aana
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
arjun's dream was so scary 🤢
and omg he even recognized the face of couple
oh so that's why arjun came to mumbai
love the way arjun was watching her sleeping
and his emotions about riya were portrayed beautifully
love how he was remembering his meets with riya :)
siya is aisha and she is the officer in ETF :) cool
feeling so bad for riya :(
hope arjun gets his memory back soon and kill sikander
can't wait to read more
continue soon

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