[Arhi FF] Silver Lining..link to thread 2 pg 151 - Page 44

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Firstly I want to congratulate u on such a beautiful story u really doing a great job keep it up.

Coming to the story these were my taught's on each chapter:

CHARACTER SKETCH:

I just have one word for it UNIQUE I absolutely loved how u presented the CS using a mag article it was really beautifully written.

Coming to the characters loved them all its really nice to c such a close knit family that's rich and successful but is still grounded and has firm beliefs and culture that they follow u hardly c that in today's times so really liked how u portrayed the family

Anjali married her cousin?and theres definitely a past that's y from malik even Arnav became ASR eager to know...

ASR-fashion is you-arnav singh raizada what a beautiful statement btw loved the cover page uff sexy ASR I'm so drooling over him

Your style of writing is brilliant love the way u use words!:)

Anjali has a pet kangaroo how cute.

Loved the candid interview the questions and the answers was such a typical asr response good job

I'm wondering if Arnav and Anjali are as close here as in the serial?

No1 knows his date of birth does that mean his really adopted and was not a Malik?? Whose the dead person sooo much question can't wait to read more.

Chapter 1

Wow lovely intro to Khushi!

Our jalebi bai is a genius in the field of oceanography wow that's interesting it seems as if she is also an orphan therefore taking Amanda as a mother figure?

Loved that u made ha career orientated but still with ha charming personality I hated how they always made ha a fool in the show.

Khushi also has a past it looks like its linked to Arnav will read to find out

Chapter 2:

.Arnav avoids Anjali but she loves him so much I wonder what happen 15years ago that made him so cold .Anjali is such a sweet sister I hope Arnav is able to open up to her he didn't even attend ha wedding that's sad its shocking to c Arnav behaving like this with Anjali but like I said your story is unique an I'm loving it.

Lavanya entry y is she soo concerned for Arnav maybe a crush just hope she is positive character and not a threat to arhi

Chapter 3:

Awh Chris is so sweet love the relationship he and Khushi share its so sweet I am glad his there for her they seem to share sibling bond and I reli adore it.

Arnav is going home which he hates its sad seeing Arnav so detached and aloof but I'm sure it wil change when Khushi enters his life .she's on holiday his going home I am expecting the most awaited meeting of these too.:)

4th april marks 15 years and a tribute dying to know who's this person I dnt think its his mother my curiosity is reaching its peaks with each update his been planing it for 8 years damn dis person has to b special maybe the actual event will give us clues

Khushi hates NYC and and planes and Arnav lives there and I'm sure always travels by plane what a contrast

Chapter 4:

the clash of the titans! beautiful update it was a typical Arhi moment loved it.

Khushi hurt Arnav by her words nd he left ha speechless nice.

It sooo sad seeing them in pain I feel like they linked and she's the person from his past hope to uncover this soon.

Payal Gupta wow what an intro that was loved ha comeback at Mita."someone who will do mistakes but never repeat them. I haven't chosen this industry, this industry has chosen me."

kick ass statement loved it. Is she related to khushi?

Awwh Anjali and Vinay loving them at least Anjali got her happily ever after they are so cute and loving.

Chapter 5

Love the childlike Khushi.

Wonder y da Gupta's except Shashi and Diya hates Khushi and never like Payal's words expected ha to b sweet do not like ha now lol but will c wat happens mayb Khushi's arrival will bring changes on they taughts about ha this tym.

Ag so there is a shayam here nd he is as vile as they get its so tru no arhi story is complete without our snakewa what does he reli want?first i was feeling bad for Payal but then when i read how they were reacting to Khushi coming i was like god knows maybe she deserves this !

Wow...loved the update with almost 3 tracks running parallel u awesome girl :)

Almost forgot to comment on Akash and Arnav's relationship

Its truly unique but it just goes with the way arnav is .

Y does arnav always where sunglasses I think it coz when ppl that know him look into his eyes dey cn c the tru hm and not the cold man he makes himself out to b.

Chapter 6

Arnav feels so miserable to be home dats so sad.

Feel extremely sorry for anjali and the rest of the loving family they dont deserve arnavs cold treatment after all anjali is just a big sister that's worried bout her lil brothers stil confused wether they blood related ?

Lavanya loves Arnav poor her in for a big heartbreak,lav is manoramas niece its so heartbreakn seeing how they all hurting because of Arnav's behavior its been 15 years I'm dying to know happen to arnav I dont think it coz of his mother.

Its so ironic how arnav and khushi has the lives the oda wants khushi wants a happy family while arnav just wants to b alone.

Hate payal love Diya glad khushi gives it bk to payal

Omg garima slapped Khushi ag hate ha poor Khushi:( Payal has a real attitude ..

The precap is scary

Chapter 7

Finally Arnav and Anjali face of. I think they need to talk it out.

I actually don't feel sorry for payal bitchy people aren't nave

How can Arnav feel suffocated with such a loving sister??

Oh arnav y do u lose ur temper and say such harsh tings I hate what he said to Anjali she don't deserve it ! I hope he pulls his shit together nd apologize 15 years is along time he needs to stop pushn evry1 away .I wonder what happen 15years that his makes him blame nd think his familys love is fake.

Diya is such a sweetheart I'm so happy she's there for khushi. I hope Shaym is not after Khushi

Chapter 8

This story is just getin more and more griping.

Love ur descriptive writing esp the way u described dehli shops.

Diya and Nk are friends so sweet waitn for his entry.

La and khushi became friends

Will this take khushi to the raizada house??

Arnav is la boyfriend really or did she lie to ha friend pam?

Coming to Arnav an Anju I don't know what to say just gna wait for the story to unfold loving it.

Chapter 9

The family besides Anjali and Akash hurt Arnav really bad... what did they do?? after knowing dis I don't blame him for his cold behavior but will first c what they did to him before I judge them maybe its a big MU or maybe not will c.

He finally poured his heart out to Anjali I'm so happy they did I think it made they relationship stronger and brought them closer emotionally .

Wow lovng La nd Khushi's bondng so naturally hope it stays that way.

Coming to the highlight of the update Anjali and Vinays fight boy I wasn't expecting it I guess all marriages have probs and there's r starting now. So Arnav distanced himself because Anjali married Vinay and Vinay is the course of Arnav's probs boy is this geting more nd more interesting but I still can't solve the puzzle hope the whole past comes out soon.

Anjali and Arnav's hug his comforting her reminded me of ipk hope it stays like that now .

Overall fireworks update

Chapter 10:

So glad to c Arnav protective over Anjali dis is the bond we all wanted to c.

Finally the truth is unfolding. Very emotional update. I feel as Arhi past is connected and Khushi is Arnav's happiness .I guess I'm way out of line here so will wait nd watch,

Chapter 11:

Who's is this person that is dead because of Vinay???I still think its Khushi and Arnav thinks she's dead...Vinay accepts his mistakes what did he do??

Y do I feel like this person was Khushi but then they would have recognized each other but then again its been 15 years???

Diya and Khushi's sister bond is rockng :)

Waiting for this mystery to unfold Vinay demolished Arnav's home.

Chapter 12

Omg omg "because love happens only once Di and it has already happened to me..." So it has to b khushi I just tink he misunderstood dat she's dead .

Atleasr I gt 1 thing ryt arnav was adopted.

Chapter 13:

New entry's and got an insights of how Arnav was before ,his still in contact with Avantika. I wonder how's is relationship with her ? Were they all orphans livng in the orphanage that Vinay demolished and they lost they homes and was left on the streets unprotected and sum1 attacked them thats y Khushi was running and even Arnav 'yelling and screaming for help. Trying to escape into a safe haven with all the riots breaking. That bloodshed, cries, laments of pain and losing never left his soul' Am I reading too much into this??if this is the case really do not blame Arnav for hating vinay and not even attending anjalis wedding Arnav lost everytng and his going tru hell for the past 15 years would hate the person responsible to.

Y does it seem like Shaym is after Khushi I just hope Khushi does not do sacrificing for Payal no matter what she brought this upon herself.

And they meet again but no sparks evr seem to be flying???

He kissed ha more like forced ha maybe sparks will start flying now:)

Chapter 14:

Wow the way u described the kiss was to the T fantastic :).

Now I'm sure Khushi is Arnav's lost happiness plz plz lol don't prove me wrong.'Puppy dog face'

Lol what followed after the kiss was just classical Arnav and Khushi.

Omg Payal and Shaym deserve each other! Oh girl u can forget bout ever havng ASR! poor Akash he doesn't know what his getng himself into and he so doesn't deserve sum1 like Payal his just a nice guy.

Chapter 15:

Entry of our dear NK I just know I'm going to love his character.

Omg Akash and Arnav's relationship is amazing I really like it its like they share a silent bond btw I adore they way of communicating thru letters and emails ,just hope love is not blind for Akash and he sees tru Payal or she changes for the better.

Even tough I hate Payal and Shaym I really love the way u changed the characters and the way they portrayed it just sizzles the story even more.

so confusing when will u unfold the mystery???

Chapter 16:

So nk will be the translator for they new assignments I just hope he don't fall for Khushi, Diya is there for him! But how will they b arhi time with khushi gone???

Wow that's a shocker Nk and Arnav's bond loving it never saw that coming but adore it :)

Oh yay Arnav is gna go along with Nk just perfect :) u always surprising me really loving this story and your way of writing its splendid. Hats of to u dear marvelous work!

I am busy with exams but couldn't help reading this story its fabulous :) I wrote down a comment after I read each chapter therefore all my questions and as I went along sum got answered. Please forgive me if my comments don't make sense was in a rush because of the studying hopefully I never miss anything . Will send u a buddy request please do pm and keep up the fantastic job! don't ever think of quitting this story I'll bother u till u change your mind lol hope my threats work:) have no idea y dis ff is not getting the appreciation it deserves I guess not a lot of ppl know about it...but please continue for the few that adores this story :)

Mind the typos posted this on my mobile.

I was wondering about Payal. Wasn't she supposed to be the lead model for the AR fashion show? Also how did Shyam use the pictures he clicked of her after drugging her?