MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #9 Link # 10 pg131 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear the kind of writer u are penning in a hurry u will lose ur magical touch in the stories so pen them relaxing and then give us with ur magical touch till then will wait
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speaking rose really...
Waiting 4 update...
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YAAR TEASER SE KUCH NAHI HOGA UPDATES KAHA KAI... IT NOW MORE THAN A MONTH U DIDN'T GAVE THIS 1 N DMG TO WAITIG 4 BOTH...
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nice teaser
take care of ur health dear
will wait for update
dont forget to pm me dear
cont soon
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nice teaser😳
update soon😛
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great teaser dearwaiting for update
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum teaser! update soon
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Edited by kuhu18 - 12 years ago
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Wow nice teaser..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I know I deserve a lot of rotten tomatoes for becoming invisible from the forum but there is a very strong reason behind by disappearance. I had to undergo a lot of mental torture 😭in the last few days that was way too much for me to tolerate 😡Anyways since I am back I promise now the updates won't be delayed 😛 Here is the next part of Jaane tu and I am sure you'll will love the precap hehe 😉 Enjoy friends.

PART 53

Maan: Kal ki subah ka intezar karna Geet kyunki kal humare kahani ki phir se ek nayi shuruwat hogi aur iss baar vaada karta hoon tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka main nahi dunga'mera intezaar karna Geet dua karta hoon ke kal subah ki pehli kiran ke saath humare atteth par se kale badal ki parchayi dur hone ki shuruwat ho jaaye' [Do wait for the coming morning Geet as tomorrow our lives would take a new turn and this time I promise you will never get a chance of getting hurt. I wish with the first ray of the sun the dark cloud of our past slowly starts fading away thus allowing us to rewrite new memories]

Maan went on reading the lyrics that Geet had penned down in an attempt to understand the deepest meaning of each word so that from now onwards every day would be exactly the way that Geet had always wished to see'

Next Day,

Sanju had left a note for Geet wherein she had informed her that due to some urgent work she had to go out.

Sanju was going to the airport to receive Prem but before leaving the Mansion she had executed another element of their plan.

As per Prem's instructions Sanju had given leave to all the gatekeepers of the house thus gifting a golden chance to Maan to work on his mission.

Sanju considered this move to be strange but Prem was sure that Maan would definitely try to meet Geet and if the guards were present at the gate; his mission won't be easy hence Prem had requested Sanju to send the gatekeepers somewhere before she comes to receive him.

So now Geet was all alone in her grand Mansion

In the dew hours of early morning Maan headed straightaway towards Geet's Mansion.

He was pleasantly surprised to see no hurdles blocking his path; this gave him confidence that maybe today was just the perfect day for rewriting their incomplete love story.

The past night's events had taken a toll on Geet's mental state; she was still residing in the serene world of her sleep when Maan entered her Mansion.

Maan: Aaj ki subah waise hi hogi Geet jaise tum humesha socha karti thi [This morning will have all the colors that u wished to see in your dreams Geet]

Maan kissed his ring and went ahead with the simple yet special preparations that were dedicated solely to the princess of his heart.

1 hour later,

The curtains of Geet's mesmerizing eyes parted away to decorate her angelic face with the golden rays of the sun.

There was a blessed optimism with every movement of the breeze today.

As Geet stepped out from her cozy bed holding the beads of her mangalsutra she promised herself to start this day with a smile on her face. The events of last night wherein she had poured out the deepest wounds of her heart in front of Maan had soothed her indirectly thus gifting her with the solace of mental peace.

She pampered herself with a rose water bath and decorated herself with a beautiful sunshine colored bright and elegant outfit.

Geet placed the beads of her mangalsutra in front of the Almighty's feet and let out a silent pray that from today whatever will happen will be for the best.

After taking blessings from God, Geet tied the beads securely once again in the form of a bracelet and adorned it lovingly on her wrist.

She had already read Sanju's note and was now ready to go out for her shooting

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJEdMXGHqMw


Music

An unexpected sprinkle of rose water took her by surprise as Geet opened the door of her house. It looked as if pearls of the fresh morning dew had tenderly kissed an innocent blooming flower such was the beauty of this situation.

Paani da rang vekh ke

Paani da rang vekh ke

Geet shielded her face with her palm as she allowed her feet to step into a zone wherein her innocent dreams had beautifully taken the form of reality; she was pleasantly surprised to hear a familiar guitar tune that formed a beautiful memory of her past' yes it was the same tune that she had composed during her college days for participating in a competition

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

The strings of her heart danced innocently as she saw her favorite teddy welcoming her wholeheartedly. She couldn't stop herself from picking up the soft toy and was pleasantly surprised that it was indeed the same teddy that had got misplaced during the farewell event of her college.

Maahiya na aaya mera Maahiya na aaya

Maahiya na aaya mera Maahiya na aaya

Her breathing pattern became uneven as she heard these lyrics'

She had never shared this song with anyone other than Maan' No it was impossible Maan wasn't the guy who would treasure her stupid scribbled words; it has to be someone else. With this confidence in her heart Geet turned to face the direction from where the voice was coming'

Ranjhna na aaya mera Maahiya na aaya

Ranjhna na aaya mera Maahiya na aaya

Her Maan was placing the final few yellow roses on the carpet of flowers that he had laid for welcoming his princess.

Aakhada noor vekh ke

Aakhada noor vekh ke

Only Geet knew how much her heart had craved for these special yellow roses that had the touch of Maan's fragrance in them and today a whole majesty of rose carpet was ready to touch her soft feet as if declaring "I am late but I am here only for u"

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Geet picked up her teddy and got into her car; she was in no mood to give into the temptation of submitting herself into Maan's folds. She adorned a dark black sunglass and drove past Maan without giving him any second look.

Kamli ho gayi tere bina aaja ranjhan mere

Kamli ho gayi tere bina aaja ranjhan mere

Maan got into his car and followed Geet. Geet had taken a shortcut route to reach the studio and she was dumstruck with the scene that her eyes were portraying.

Barish barkha sab kuch beh gayi

Aaya nahi jind mere

Every turn that her car took was welcomed with a path beautified with glowing yellow rose petals; she was confused how did Maan know which route she would be taking? Had he finally started to understand her? No' this was not possible she concluded.

Barish barkha sab kuch beh gayi

Aaya nahi jind mere

She switched on the radio to get rid of Maan's song but to her shock every radio channel was playing the same song that Maan was singing right now. She knew him very well and concluded that superstar MSK had taken all the radio channels into confidence and had requested them to play this song on their channels LIVE when he would be actually singing it in front of Geet

Aakhada noor vekh ke

Aakhada noor vekh ke

Geet stopped her car in front of the studio and gave strict instructions to the gatekeeper not to allow any person or vehicle to enter the premises until her approval. The watchman closed the gate before Maan could enter the premises. Geet was relieved; she assured her heart that now there is no means through which she could hear Maan's voice as it is; the lines that she had penned down were now over; she still remembered the LYRICS OF THE SONG WAS LEFT INCOMPLETE'

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

It is not necessary that every thought of ours gets fulfilled. Maan had once again surprised Geet by decorating her room with her favorite chocolates, strawberries and some unique tokens that represented the memories of their friendship way before her arrival. He had done all the preparations while she was sleeping. An innocent yellow rose was placed right at the center of the room and before Geet realized her legs were already heading towards the direction of the flower. There was no source through which the song could be heard but today she could hear the incomplete lyrics of her song' Maan had given words to the deepest wish of her heart'

Kothe utte baithe

Aakhiyan milaunde

Na jaana main tu kabhi chod

Geet couldn't stop herself from picking up the yellow rose as the last words of the incomplete song that Maan was humming had succeeded to make a special place in her heart' Today she knew why she couldn't complete the lyrics the answer was simple it was always meant to be written by Maan'

These simple words "Don't ever go away from me I won't be able to survive without u" gave a great healing touch to her wounded heart'

The intensity of the sound increased it seemed that the voice was coming from the rose itself but how was this possible?

Tere uthe marda

Pyar tenu karda

Milega tujhena koi aur

On careful examination Geet realized that the rose was special' this rose carried the message of Maan's heart and she was sure the song was coming from the rose. UNDOUBTEDLY, IT WAS A SPEAKING ROSE.

Tubhi aa sabko chod ke

Tubhi aa sabko chod ke

The petals of this rose was made of wax and had a pearl attached on its tip; with the help of the pearl Geet unwinded the whorls of the yellow rose and with every exposed petal she could feel Maan very close to her heart'

Meri akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

The sound was coming from a small screen that was fixed on the whorls of the rose. The screen had a border of real yellow rose petals and had a recording of Maan's video and audio clip in it where he was singing the remaining stanzas of the song'

Paani da rang vekh ke

Paani da rang vekh ke

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

A tear drop rolled down Geet's cheek as a message flashed on the screen

"I love u and will wait for you till I breathe my last"

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

By gifting Geet a small version of her dreams Maan had managed to break a major wall that was curtaining her from seeing his changed form. Today Geet was sure that maybe she was indeed a part of Maan's life as the complete lyrics of the song had left a major impact on her heart'

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

Akhiyaan jo anju rul gaye

The screen continued to flash the same message "I love u and will wait for you till I breathe my last"

Geet went on hearing the song again and again'

IT SEEMED A SMALL INITIATIVE FROM MAAN HAD GIVEN A MAJOR HOPE TO HER SHATTERED SOUL' A HOPE WHICH DECLARED, "WE CAN REWRITE OUR LOVESTORY IF WE WALK TOGETHER'"

The sun had begun to shine in their life' now there was no way through which they could be separated'

PRECAP: Maaneet going to live together under the same roof?😉

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Love-Divya (aka Piya)

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago

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