FF: Keeping Khushi: Th 8 part 76 Pg 124

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maria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

feeling so soory for arti how can a father do this to her own child and he never felt sorry and ashamed of himself,poor arti an her sis and mom had to bear so much .hope everything gets k

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amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

You're breaking my heart! Hopefully the love that makes up the Raizada family will envelope the Mishras and finally bring that family some joy.You're writing is quite emotive - I have been moved.

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aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

I am sure NK and article can full fill the responsibility together.

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StripePurple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

I've been reading this FF for a while, have never commented before, but have to tell you now, Aarti is beautiful. I've no words for what you have created with this character. She moves me deeply, and yet, one has to admire her fortitude. I don't know where you're planning to take her story, I'm not even sure I want her to have the usual happy ending with NK after reading this, but at this moment, she is perfect. & you've written her with such empathy, honesty, dry humour, and most of all, no self-pity, it's commendable. Take a bow, lady.👏

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panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Thank you for the second update of the day

Aarti's dad was certainly certifiably crazy, poor girl has had to deal with so much.

Cannot wait to read more and learn of the way the Raizada family reacts to this revelation.

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

feeling very sad after reading this update. what a painful existence. particularly when she said, i never had hope that it would change.

but i couldn't help noticing that aside from the high bp all of her mother's ailments are curable by the news of aarti's marriage.

aarti is wrong to say that she is not the right woman for NK. he is definitely the right one for her. his optimism will teach her to live...with a smile. she has the rest of the qualities anyway.

she needs him to bring joy and cheer and she complements him in terms of a sense of responsibility and maturity, not to mention Hindi.

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

cancer is probably one of the most painful ways to die. Divine justice for Mohan Mishra. I wonder how he felt when he was at their mercy.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

congrats on continuing a story for 75 parts and still continuing...

i read your stories regularly but sorry couldn't comment earlier...this story of yours is absolutely brilliant ...

i didn't expect so in the beginning it was like regular arnav khushi difference stuff but in every chapter you made so mesmerizing unique and beautiful... good-luck with everything...wish to read moe from you...

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Awesome awesome awesome...finally she vented everything...but y do I have a feeling that NK, the rizadas, buaji are going to be after artis life for marriage to NK...can't wait for the next update!!! :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

oh boy he was even more mad and deranged than any one i could know
so what now
he cant let go of her and yet he cant persue her either
after all she needs to take care of her mother
the only person she has left apart from gopi kaka
that was a horrible past indeed
gosh what will nk do and say now
they will have to lay off and yet will he be able to let her go
dont think it will be easy
no he cant he has to stick by her so she to has some support too
but guess it will have to a backseat for now
lets hope for the best for nk and aarti future then
man you made us cry buckets with what that man did to his family