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Posted: 12 years ago
Masam I have tried to post my comment twice on the blog but I don't know why its not posting there so I am gonna post one here as well.

So Khushi's monster of a father is out but I hope that this time Arnav will get to him before he even looks in Khushi's direction let alone try to harm her... He's already got an accomplice in aliza who will stoop to any level to get rid of Khushi to get her hands on Arnav.

What a blissfully happy and beautiful day Khushi had with her family... She was a wife and a mother after such a long time,had another chance to share the simple joys of life with her husband and son, to be able to hold her son in her arms and then fell asleep with him and her husband by her side like a normal person... I just hope that all her trials and troubles r over now and Arnav will become her shield to protect her from the likes of Shashi and her touts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
For Chapter 11:

You don't like to see Khushi smiling for too long, so you ? Just when I thought that maybe, maybe, she now has a chance to reclaim her life, live a little, love and be loved - you bring that son of a b***c back. Why ? Why ?

This time I want him to curse the day he was born, that Shashi. Somebody burn him alive, save him before it kills him, let him suffer for a while and then leave him in a hole for rats to feast on.

The beginning was so warm and tender, and in the end I was shuddering. No, M. Please, Khushi has had enough!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where cn u get blog link ?? i was reading stories thn i took break n thn lost d track...
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Posted: 12 years ago
For Chapter 12:

Ali and Tina, yay! Always the cute and lovely couple :)

Alright, so Alizah is seriously delusional. She doesn't have the maturity of a grown up but does have the cunning, and thats quite disturbing. And for people who already have someone like Shashi in their lives, they already face a huge share of evil, and really don't need an Alizah to pose more troubles. Alizah, girl, shooo !

I loved that scene between Arnav and Khushi, whatever the future may hold, they stole that one moment for themselves. God knows they deserve that and more.. The two have a lot to work through, but there is Aryan. And for that child and his happiness, they must fight their demons and their past.

Amazing update, M. Your writing is just stunning :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Life as we know it is simply complicated, we have to live it out and look back to see if this was done well enough or that could have been avoided. That is life in hind sight everything and anything is changeable, Khushi and Arnav have their reasons, so does a love sick girl like Alizah. Nothing and I mean nothing can be dismissed saying it is wrong or right as the sides can interchange easily.
PS - M, I am with this story and the way you want to write it, please do. I will crib and curse and hate you for making me cry but will not ask you to change a word even, not a single one. You go with you flow girl and give me your story, that is the one I signed up for and will not settle for anything less.
PSS - I love Aryan and you
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Posted: 12 years ago
MASAM ...YOU COULD IN THE LEAST ACKNOWLEDGE THAT YOU

READ MY MESSAGE

STRANGE THAT YOU LIKE THE REST N CHOOSE TO IGNORE

MINE




KKKA
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Posted: 12 years ago
For Chapter 13:

Reasons I loved this update:

".. I am going to be needing more than a fork this time."

"Just remember, you're the Jasmine."

Bring it on! What an amazing update this was. Loved it!


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey masam i am very freaking kind of person
just to know what ur are writing in next story i red all the comment
i know just freak (but i have still exames and i am trying to read the story)
but in ur new story khushi went to shashi why is she stupid or something
i would just run awya and go to some temple be just and annymous
and then i thought maybe she should use some brain if she have
why she is not start with slow poisening shashi
she could buy books of plants dangerous and she can kill him and nobody would no that
you know i am bioloog and i can say nobody suspect plants are verybeautiful but they can be used as very dangerous thing
and then shashi raped her (i really dont know but somebody comment said that)
you know what you can do to protect ur self
she could just bite his penis of
i would be so proud of her
and she can also use some hard thing to beat hi and she can also use knife to kill him and she wouldnot get prison bez its selfdeffens

i really hate weak people
one friend of my sister get raped by her stepdad and his friend
when she was drunk and she never told her mom about that bcz he rmom was a weak woman who needed a man
and what funny is that the the man oesnt work but she does
that girl could never told anyone you can say what she felt in her life
after one or two years she got depreesed and then in highschool she only function on antidepresseva
u know who bad this kind of medicens are
and when she was so broken she was taken to hospital for deprees people
her mom was very broken and her step dad got prison for 10 years (ya i live in belgium europe)
and now she is content in her life
she has a job a boyfriend but she could not study in unif or colleage bcz of all that she have to manage
and now if i can say i think about the days when we were in higschool i was her senior serveal years
she dressed really bad like shouw off but she was not happpy
i never like girls who wear clothers to show off but now i understand why she did that she felt very bad about her self
god
sorry for my bla bla
i really dont want to kill shashi i want to poisen him that he would live and watch what is happening around him
but he couldnot move or speek
just laying their on his bed ohh thats what i would do to him
and giveing more immagination i would cut everday a slice of his skin and put some accid on it
i would like to grouw smaall worms on his skin that would give egges and live in his skin and i would put mirrors on all sides of his face to see what is happening
he could not move and would not die just be their
i am devil😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey... I have read so many good things about your writing, but found out that you took it off..

I would love to read it .. Could you share your blog link with me?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello people!

Yes, I know, awkward, but here I am, after I don't know how many days!
I am really really really really sorry for abandoning my FFs, I cannot tell you guys how really sorry I am for leaving just spontaneously. But I've got HELL LOT of personal stuff going on, I don't even have time to think.

So apologizing again and for what I'm about to do, my FF's are cancelled and I'll be posting their summaries soon. If you guys have anything to say, other than you're-a-witch, please don't hesitate and if I plan to start a new one, you guys would be the first one to know!

Thank you, each and everyone who supported me and accepted my FF's. I love you guys! <3

-Masam.

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