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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

For Chapter 2:

Masam, just how much and for how long do you plan to make us cry, nay, sob, nay, howl in sheer agony like this ?

That little boy, Aryan, is having to go through so much pain at that tender age ! Arnav, why does God hate that wonderful man ? And Khushi, that darling, will the pain and the heartbreak ever end ?

And Shashi, why is he not dead ?

Arnav, I really don't want him to lose faith in Khushi. That would just be the end of it.

Masam, this almost makes me wish you you were a terrible writer, at least my stomach wouldn't be churning like this on a Sunday night. You write so bloody well, it should be illegal. No, really.

I want Shashi to suffer. For each chapter with these tears, I want a chapter full of Shashi's blood. I want him, that Randeep, and all his friends to suffer, live each moment in agony, hoping and praying they were dead.

Also, for all that baking, why did Khushi never take self defense classes ? Just wondering. I want her to fight back, fight back really hard, and make Shashi pay for every f**king thing he has put her and her family through. If not for her sake, then for Aryan.

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luvkkgasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

i hate dis... truly i DO...

why u had to show khushi being raped... 😭😭

i cried so much reading it... i can't tell u how shattered i feel...

I wish u had shown her strong enough to deal vid dat bas***d...

ARGGGH>>>> i will kill dat mother f***** Shashi... and his mother f**ker friend who destroyede khsuhi again... 😡 😡

LIFE is a bitch for Khushi... she is back to where from Arnav got her out... y she had to go away from him... ???

POOR aryan and Arnav... i felt lyk dying to see Aruan going thru hell ... a rotten hell ... he is only 4...😭

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

I am sorry Masam, it was a difficult update to read, too upset to say much. I hope I can write a bit more the next time.

STB was a good update but did not help either, I am that upset. After the Delhi case to read this, I was crying for a long time and at times like these, wish I was not a woman (escapism at its best).

I read the chapter 32 – Bundle of joy and cried some more, don't do this Masam, please.

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

For Chapter 2:

No! No! No! You did NOT just do that!

Khushi had made a life for herself with Arnav and Aryan. She doesn't care for the properties. She only wants her family. And if Shashi is so perceptive, (Eg: He is updated about Garima- Khushi's improved relationship and knows what has transpired between them) why doesn't he understand that all his daughter wants is to be left alone.

Why is he still treating her as a wh**e? She is not one anymore. She is somebody's wife! Somebody's mother! Somebody's daughter-in-law for God's sake!

How can you allow your own daughter to be raped in your house? How heartless can you be? All for properties? Really? I don't buy that! No! I don't...

I don't want her to go back to Shashi. I had thought she wanted to poison him. But no he is poisoning her life all over again. Does Gariman have any money to help Khushi?

And Arnav and Aryan for the two of you there really is no age to suffer trauma.

PS: My last question got answered.
I have a new one now: Payal bought what the guard said so easily? Everything about that scene was fishy. I hope Arnav understands that something is amiss and runs to Manhattan after her. PLEASE

PPS: M for all the pain of If Only can I PLEASE have a happy OS from you?

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
For Chapter 2:

No! No! No! You did NOT just do that!

Khushi had made a life for herself with Arnav and Aryan. She doesn't care for the properties. She only wants her family. And if Shashi is so perceptive, (Eg: He is updated about Garima- Khushi's improved relationship and knows what has transpired between them) why doesn't he understand that all his daughter wants is to be left alone.

Why is he still treating her as a wh**e? She is not one anymore. She is somebody's wife! Somebody's mother! Somebody's daughter-in-law for God's sake!

How can you allow your own daughter to be raped in your house? How heartless can you be? All for properties? Really? I don't buy that! No! I don't...

I don't want her to go back to Shashi. I had thought she wanted to poison him. But no he is poisoning her life all over again. Does Gariman have any money to help Khushi?

And Arnav and Aryan for the two of you there really is no age to suffer trauma.

PS: My last question got answered.
I have a new one now: Payal bought what the guard said so easily? Everything about that scene was fishy. I hope Arnav understands that something is amiss and runs to Manhattan after her. PLEASE

PPS: M for all the pain of If Only can I PLEASE have a happy OS from you?

Yes Masam, please a happywala OS from you is over due.

Saiyu, I have an odd feeling, Khushi is not Shashi's daughter and that is the reason her mother left the properties in her name and not Shashi's, I may be wrong but it is my way to understand why Shashi is the beast he is.

There are such bas***ds in this world like Shashi, who pimp their daughters, I am not surprised by the update as much as I am saddened by it. Life is a bitch and we are made aware of it through such stories and news everyday.

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Kalyaani
Yes Masam, please a happywala OS from you is over due.

Saiyu, I have an odd feeling, Khushi is not Shashi's daughter and that is the reason her mother left the properties in her name and not Shashi's, I may be wrong but it is my way to understand why Shashi is the beast he is.

There are such bas***ds in this world like Shashi, who pimp their daughters, I am not surprised by the update as much as I am saddened by it. Life is a bitch and we are made aware of it through such stories and news everyday.

Could be. Khushi is not Shashi's daughter. Samjha. But if I understand Khushi correctly she doesn't want the properties. Shashi does. Let him have it. Leave her alone. Since the time Khushi came to know about those properties she never asked or fought for it. And even if Shashi is correct here that Khushi is now here for it, she wouldn't have come if he had not forced her to leave her family.

So, it has to be more than just the properties. He wants to break her. Ruin her. Why?

I know there are such shits roaming around the world who are not fit to be called fathers. But then there are fathers like mine whom wouldn't bear a scratch on me.

Life is a bitch. But life is good too. Sometimes the journey from bitch to good is difficult...

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Could be. Khushi is not Shashi's daughter. Samjha. But if I understand Khushi correctly she doesn't want the properties. Shashi does. Let him have it. Leave her alone. Since the time Khushi came to know about those properties she never asked or fought for it. And even if Shashi is correct here that Khushi is now here for it, she wouldn't have come if he had not forced her to leave her family.

So, it has to be more than just the properties. He wants to break her. Ruin her. Why?

I know there are such shits roaming around the world who are not fit to be called fathers. But then there are fathers like mine whom wouldn't bear a scratch on me.

Life is a bitch. But life is good too. Sometimes the journey from bitch to good is difficult...

I don't fault Khushi for leaving Arnav and Aryan; she does not want to hurt them more. She hopes Aryan will forget her and move on and so will Arnav, let's not forget she was to be with him for six years only and then he changes it. He had not bargained for all that happened in their lives, so was not prepared. If only he had chosen another person instead of Khushi, this "If Only" will never end with this story.

Shashi is not a simple person by any stretch of imagination, he is not like I will take it and forget you, and you can lead your life the way you want. He has been made to wait for a year and will want his pound of flesh, I am trying to understand him and NOT defending the low life he is. I feel he wants to break her mother through Khushi, seeking his revenge on two people at the same time. He has been alarmingly successful so far, the damage is everlasting. Khushi is emotionally damaged, no amount of love can repair that, she sees herself as unworthy of her husband and son, that could be the reason she ran away and to the lion's mouth.

About Payal, she may not be acting stupid here; she may think Khushi would never come to Shashi on leaving Arnav. It could be wishful thinking on her part but, Payal may not expect to see Khushi there but checked none the less. When one is distraught, rational thinking is not very sound or possible, you cling on to straws.

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

I don't fault Khushi for leaving Arnav and Aryan; she does not want to hurt them more. She hopes Aryan will forget her and move on and so will Arnav, let's not forget she was to be with him for six years only and then he changes it. He had not bargained for all that happened in their lives, so was not prepared. If only he had chosen another person instead of Khushi, this "If Only" will never end with this story.
Shashi is not a simple person by any stretch of imagination, he is not like I will take it and forget you, and you can lead your life the way you want. He has been made to wait for a year and will want his pound of flesh, I am trying to understand him and NOT defending the low life he is. I feel he wants to break her mother through Khushi, seeking his revenge on two people at the same time. He has been alarmingly successful so far, the damage is everlasting. Khushi is emotionally damaged, no amount of love can repair that, she sees herself as unworthy of her husband and son, that could be the reason she ran away and to the lion's mouth.
About Payal, she may not be acting stupid here; she may think Khushi would never come to Shashi on leaving Arnav. It could be wishful thinking on her part but, Payal may not expect to see Khushi there but checked none the less. When one is distraught, rational thinking is not very sound or possible, you cling on to straws.

All I can say is.. I love you guys. 🤗