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Posted: 12 years ago
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Masam 🤗

I know I am late but I was on a vacation so I have not read the last 3 chapters yet, will start reading soon. Just wanted to inform you :)

I see S here. Heya S 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am missing this already. M, I have to read this again. You gave us hope and stripped it off just as quickly.
I have to read this again and again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yet to read the last chapter n give comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For If Only: Unbound; Chapter 1

She is back to Shashi ? NO ! Garima gives me hope, yes. Still, with Shashi around I have can never hope for anything good.

And Aryan saw her leave. Why Masam, heartbreaks after heartbreaks, one more painful than the other ?

I really hope they find Khushi, really.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is illegal to be this brilliant; I am in a better frame of mind so my rant will be impersonal. I am so looking forward to Khushi settling scores with Shashi. That according to me could be a good reason for her to go back to him, now if that term is appropriate to be used in their relationship. Garima could be that ally that Khushi could use to meet her end.

My heart crumpled when I read about Aryan telling his buddy, his mom ran away. No child should be a messenger with that kind of news, but Aryan is unique so he has to bear the cross.

I want blood and it better be Shashi's, that guy has to pay and BIG time.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Masam 🤗


I know I am late but I was on a vacation so I have not read the last 3 chapters yet, will start reading soon. Just wanted to inform you :)

I see S here. Heya S 🤗



A how are you?

I was missing you...

You show me all those dreams of love and togetherness and go for a vacation?

Tum toh tehre pardesi saath kya nibhaoge


Masam blogs confuse me and for yours I will have to register first. I will do all that tomorrow morning after a good night's sleep and a mast South Indian breakfast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp



A how are you?

I was missing you...

You show me all those dreams of love and togetherness and go for a vacation?

Tum toh tehre pardesi saath kya nibhaoge


Masam blogs confuse me and for yours I will have to register first. I will do all that tomorrow morning after a good night's sleep and a mast South Indian breakfast.


S 🤗 Long time no see.

Yaar studies were killing me so I went for a small break. We'll go somewhere soon 😳

Zehra told me about Azra. I love her too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey masam, could u just kind enough to pm me ur blog link of if only????? i would love to read this particular one, read some of its chapters long back but then lost it , so feeling hanged :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey thanksss for d update...
IT was such a blow to der whole family... OMG i feel terribly sad for poor Aryan... in all dis wat was his fault???
Seriously KHUSHI IS BACK TO DAT SHASHI... of all of d ppl,,,, she went to him ... I don't know but i cried for Arnav and Aryan while reading... 😭
It took him years to build dat small yet happy family... and its shattered now... completely broken...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For Chapter 1:

No. It didn't just happen. I know she left. I knew he would be affected by it badly. But my heart shattered along with Arnav's. I felt teary with Aryan. I gasped with Nani. I felt for them like the servants of the Raizadas.

You didn't just write about all that pain. Why?

How will everyone react when they will know Khushi left everyone and went to Shashi? How will Payal and the Durrani's react? I don't think Arnav will back off once he knows where she is.

Why did she go to Shashi? He has pushed her into prostitution once. He can do that again. He has put her up for an online bidding. He can do worse.

There better be a good reason for Khushi going back to him. Like lacing his food every day with slow poison. What say?

Khushi has an ally in Garima of which Shashi doesn't know. Khushi and Garima have met without his knowledge and that gives me hope.

PS: Why was Shashi so sure that Khushi would be in his house that day? Khushi seeing Arnav troubled by a msg at night, she noting Rao's number, meeting him and deciding to leave Arnav were a series of unfortunate coincidences. Shashi couldn't have planned or predicted that. Then why was he so sure?

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